This is my first story. tell me what you think of it and all. Thx.
^_^ (I don't own them)
Shattered glass and sparks are the only objects to be seen in the grass around what had only moments ago been the Ocularis Infernum. Twelve ghosts have been released into the world once more. to pass on or wreak havoc in their original haunts. Of course. what kind of a story would this be if they all passed on and everyone else lived happily ever after? Eleven out of twelve ghosts are out to inflict the same pain they have to eternally endure upon the living. They're not all evil. just troubled.. Pained and scarred deeply by their bad judgement in life. However, that was then. and this isn't.
"There are so many things I don't understand. There are so many feelings I have that I never had in life. I don't understand them. I always have angry thoughts. a force that wants to kill. A hunger." Dana trailed off.
"Really? I had all of those feelings in life, too," Ryan said and then laughed crazily.
"I guess it comes with bein' a ravin' lunatic," The Hammer replied.
"I never felt that way. not in life I didn't. I just. loved men. I loved to use them. I loved to play with their hearts. I mean, I tried to fall in love like they did, but it just never came. I never wanted to murder anybody until I was killed, though. I almost thought I loved him. I cared for him," Susan reminisced.
"You had the perfect life. beauty and riches and love. You didn't have to love anybody. it was a choice you could make. look at me," Dana said.
"Dammit, girl! You're beautiful! In life you were beautiful! Even more beautiful than Susan! Suck it up and stop searching for compliments!" The pilgrimess yelled.
"Okay." Dana whispered. walking away.
"Come on, drop it all! You're beautiful. Susan was a girl who trusted the wrong guy and she will always be hideously ugly! I've had enough of this female drama shit!" Royce cried angrily. "Let's just go out and destroy!"
"If you were living I would tear you apart, boy!" The pilgrimess spat at Royce.
"I quit!" They hear the nanny scream from inside the ruins.
"So many people to kill! See me at the junkyard!" Breaker cried.
With that, they leave the ruins of the glass house and go to. what seems to be reflecting on the past. There is one who is a bit sensitive to his past. One careless mistake is what killed him. Putting his baseball on the line, his friendships. and possibly love?
Shattered glass and sparks are the only objects to be seen in the grass around what had only moments ago been the Ocularis Infernum. Twelve ghosts have been released into the world once more. to pass on or wreak havoc in their original haunts. Of course. what kind of a story would this be if they all passed on and everyone else lived happily ever after? Eleven out of twelve ghosts are out to inflict the same pain they have to eternally endure upon the living. They're not all evil. just troubled.. Pained and scarred deeply by their bad judgement in life. However, that was then. and this isn't.
"There are so many things I don't understand. There are so many feelings I have that I never had in life. I don't understand them. I always have angry thoughts. a force that wants to kill. A hunger." Dana trailed off.
"Really? I had all of those feelings in life, too," Ryan said and then laughed crazily.
"I guess it comes with bein' a ravin' lunatic," The Hammer replied.
"I never felt that way. not in life I didn't. I just. loved men. I loved to use them. I loved to play with their hearts. I mean, I tried to fall in love like they did, but it just never came. I never wanted to murder anybody until I was killed, though. I almost thought I loved him. I cared for him," Susan reminisced.
"You had the perfect life. beauty and riches and love. You didn't have to love anybody. it was a choice you could make. look at me," Dana said.
"Dammit, girl! You're beautiful! In life you were beautiful! Even more beautiful than Susan! Suck it up and stop searching for compliments!" The pilgrimess yelled.
"Okay." Dana whispered. walking away.
"Come on, drop it all! You're beautiful. Susan was a girl who trusted the wrong guy and she will always be hideously ugly! I've had enough of this female drama shit!" Royce cried angrily. "Let's just go out and destroy!"
"If you were living I would tear you apart, boy!" The pilgrimess spat at Royce.
"I quit!" They hear the nanny scream from inside the ruins.
"So many people to kill! See me at the junkyard!" Breaker cried.
With that, they leave the ruins of the glass house and go to. what seems to be reflecting on the past. There is one who is a bit sensitive to his past. One careless mistake is what killed him. Putting his baseball on the line, his friendships. and possibly love?