Hey, everyone.
Got a review, saying I was writing a bit Mary Sue...scared me to death, cuz I didn't even see it coming...
If anyone else thinks so too, please let me know, cuz that means I gotta make some drastic changes. Thanks to Dark Empress of Eternity for bringing that to light...i really honestly didn't see it. It's actually not a Mary Sue at all, cuz...to be honest, I have a Mary Sue character already, and I'm well aware that it's a Mary Sue, she's a complete opposite to Crystal.
Crystal is also a two year old character I've written many times before. In my original she's demon possessed, she's also has a high high I.Q her father is indeed Mikkael Lord, she 'is' rich, however not on the other side of the law.
I brought her into this story because I figured she was the most likely to pose Artemis a challange, perhaps that wasn't so great an idea. Depending on how the story goes, Crystal could be seen as a bad girl for the most part, though her story in Artemis's world is deeper than that, and i guess near the end she could be seen as other than enemy...
I'm thinking that I will have to post a new chapter soon, the next chapter (after I revised) looks and feels less capable of making her a Mary Sue...
I know this prolly sounds like I'm making a big deal of it, but I was really caught off guard by the statement and I want to make sure that is not what I'm doing.I've complained to other writers for writing Mary Sue and I feel it's unfair for me to do so as well.
Please R&R what you all think of the statement, it would make my level of change in Crystal either more drastic or less so.
-White Scribe