Okay! Here's the shpeel... I found so many errors in my first chapter and I can see why no one wants to read my story. It even gave me the heeby jeebies... Nyarg! So, I apologize for the egregious errors. And please, read and review, please? Please? Anyway, here's the prelude and I hope you enjoy. Ciao!


Prelude

We've gone a long way, both technology and travel-wise. Since we left our home planet, nothing's been the same, especially since the incident on Ragol. An explosion occurred on the surface as Pioneer 2 and the Central Dome established a connection. Everything down there went silent and the people we cared for are lost or worse. As for the rest of us on Pioneer 2, we can either stand back and watch or do something about it. That's where the hunters and the military come in. Our purpose: to find any life on Ragol, while keeping the peace here on Pioneer 2. If we are to survive, we have to cooperate. After all, that's the main reason why we left our planet in the first place, right?

Well… this is my story… the origin of Draco.


Thank you to my reviewers!

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