hey, this is my first ever story and yea like tell me what wrong and pls don't O.D. about it too…………
DISCLAIMER: I don't own anything about Naruto……….
Prologue
Red clouds are forming in the smoking air as bombs slowly descend upon a burning village. the sound of exploding containers drown out the sound of screaming people, as I watch helplessly as the village go down and down, knowing that I will never help because I was enemy and the helper of those who burned down my home.
Home was there heart was so when the village went down and crumbled, so did my heart. I walked down the streets and people who were on fire asked for help. As soon they looked at my coat and trembled in fear in hopes I won't hurt them. They were partially right. The flames will take them whole. On way my to my old home I saw and felt the yellowish and reddish light dance around my home. Don't save anybody, he told me. I pay no heed. I ran inside only to hear 'That traitor! My own daughter! A traitor to her own clan!'
I went upstairs and sought out my room. It was there still. Only half of it. I found my younger sister lying on the floor waiting for mother and father to come. No one heard her pleas. I did. She helplessly held on a teddy bear. It's a simple bear, with brown fur and black beady eyes. She tells me 'I don't believe it onee-chan! I would never listen to oka-san and otu-san! I know you come back! Just in time to save us!' in her scratchy voice.
I walked towards the sight of my bloodied- baked sister; just as I picked her up she winced. I flipped her over only to find a kunai embedded in her. About 2 inches deep. She cried to me for take it out. She didn't know that if I take it out she'll die because the kunai hit her spinal cord.
I could bring her to the hospital but he will track me down. The only way to do it is by not letting him know. I got ready to bring her to the place decided and only it finds her, dead and in my arms. I looked around only to find him holding the kunai in his left hand. Those blood-red eyes were the first thing I see. God, I hate those eyes. I scowled. 'What have I told you? Don't help any body including your clan.' In the blink of an eye he grabbed me and we both flew into the sky, tree branch to tree branch, with him holding me as if I as was a hime.
I hate you Uchica Itachi………………………
R&R PLS
