Well, I actually got reviews, so I guess I'll do another chappy.Anyway, I'll try to make it better this time (I don't know why, I just didn't really like the last one...). Enjoy!
freya kurenai: Hmm, well I haven't seen or read narnia, but sure! Either way, Eyes is the resident ice prince, and such a position deserves a poem dedicated to him. Thanks for reviewing!
Kage Kancho: What girl might you be talking about? Either way, I guarantee that you'll love spiral if you ever do watch it; it's a great show! Thanks for reviewing!
Polaris18: I usually get an angsty feeling when I write poetry; no idea why. Even if the poem itself isn't angsty, I get that feeling. I'd like to read some of your poems; you should so write one for spiral. Thanks for reviewing!
CeTe: I have no idea why, I've always liked writing poems. I've even gotten awards for it and such, so I guess they're not all that bad. I actually like some of them, too, which is amazing because I a) don't like most of the stuff I write and b) don't like many poems in general. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Blue
Dedicated to: Eyes Rutherford
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Blue
Piercing, to say the least, a calm, entrancing stare
Freezing on the spot, akin to ice-cold rain
Somberly peering through strands of silver-white hair
Whether happy or sad, expressions never change
As if a sea resides in unreadable orbs
Drowned in the fading blue of an evening sky
Masking burried memories of days long gone before
Never asking the lingering question of "Why?"
Bored of the horrors that surround a cursed fate
Mistakingly led to believe in a new hope
Watching things unfold in an indifferent state
Remembering the past which with you cannot cope
Searching for something to end the cycle of old and new
Drowning the world in eyes of pure, crystalline blue
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Yay, all done. I know that second line in the third quatrain seems very Kanone-ish, but it wasn't meant like that. Actually, most of the third quatrain seems like something Kanone would say...and I tried not to use 'you' because I didn't want it to seem like someone was talking about him, I just wanted it to be about him. That kind of went to hell, though (again, that damn third quatrain!). Oh well, I only have three more planned out and then I'll need suggestions for what colors to put with the other characters. I have Kanone (maroon), Kiyotaka (purple), and Hiyono (pink). I'm not sure what to do for Rio, Kousuke, Ayumu, or Ryoko. Also, I don't know what to do for any of the other pairings, like Ayumu and Hiyono is an obvious pairing that I'll have to break down and do, but what color? Any suggestions, I'll take them now. Next is Kanone's poem, so review!