Rise of the Dark Angel
DG32173
Here's chapter three. This chapter will show the reactions of the guys to Shadow's sudden and unexpected departure. Only Hiei knows what she's talking about when she says before she became a thief. The other two only know that she's been a thief for about twenty years and nothing of before. So, let the chapter commence! But be warned, this chapter will be rather on the short side. But it only tells how Hiei, Youko, and Koronue react about the note, so it should be short. AND YOU DON'T HAVE TO READ THIS, AS IT IS NOT IMPORTANT TO THE STORY! IF YOU WISH TO, YOU CAN JUST GO ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER WHEN IT COMES UP!
Hiei: the onna doesn't own YYH, so quit bugging her about it.
NOTE
(Author notes)
"Singing" (minus when in memories)
'Telepathy' (minus when in memories)
Memories POV change Scene change Scene change in memories'Thinking'
"Talking"
INDEX
Commence: start, begin, etc. (I did this one just in case you don't know what it means)
REVIEW REPLIES
How did Shadow's parents find her? Ah, now, I can't go spoiling the story, now can I? You'll just have to wait and find that out for yourself soon!
Is she gonna kill them? Nope! But she will be pissed as hell!
REQUESTS!
I would greatly appreciate if people would e-mail me a few FEMALE characters so I can pick two to be paired with Youko and Koronue. If you do that, it would be wonderful and help me out a lot! Well, read the chapter and enjoy!
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Chapter 3
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Last time
Hiei, Youko, and Koronue,
Some stuff from before I became a thief that has come up again. I have to get this settled and work some other stuff out before I can return. I really wish that I didn't have to leave you with a note. I wish I didn't have to leave at all, but if I had stayed, some things would be happening soon that will cause several questions to come up that I can't truthfully answer at the moment. Please forgive me for the sudden departure, and I'll return as soon as I am able to. I swear this on the thief's code! No matter what, I'll always be your friend. I will miss all of you very dearly and will think of you often while I'm away. Maybe, when I return, I can tell you everything. But until then, don't forget me and I promise I will never forget any of you!
Much love, Shadow
At the end of the note, she draws a small crescent moon blocked slightly with a dark cloud. If one doesn't know what it is, then they will think it's merely a spot of spilled ink. Hiei will definitely know what that symbol means, because he's the one who came up with it as a code between the two of them.
This time
Hiei
Hiei stares at the note and rereads it for the tenth time. The other two are sitting in their chairs and are wearing similar shocked expression. He knows what she had left for. The "spot of spilled ink" tells him exactly what she left for. But the question is why? Did … did her parents find her! 'No, that can't be it. But that's the only logical reason,' he thinks, very unhappy. It's been nearly twenty years since she had run away, and they've found her. 'Dammit! Why did they have to find her! Why!' he yells in his head. But he doesn't dare say it out loud. They had never told Youko or Koronue, believing that particular part of her life long gone. And he won't tell them without her here. He had promised her that. There is no way he's going back on that promise. 'I can't forget you, Shadow. I love you, and I won't ever forget you. I swear it on the thief's code!' he whispers in his mind.
Youko
Shadow's gone? Why? Where did she go? It has to do with her past, but that's all he knows. He doesn't know anything about her life before she had become a thief. She and Hiei had both been very secretive about that, saying that what is past is done and gone. But apparently, that hadn't been quite true for her. 'Shadow, come back soon,' he whispers in his mind. 'Hiei's going to go crazy without her. He doesn't think that Koronue and I notice, but we can see that he's in love with her. We can also see that she returns the feelings for him. But we can also see that neither knows that the other loves them. Kami, I hope she returns soon.'
Koronue
'Shadow! Why'd you have to leave? You said you'd teach me how to fight with a sword so that I can use a sword or my scythe! Shadow, come back, soon. We're all gonna miss you, but Hiei's gonna be the worst. You stupid girl! He loves you, dammit! Why'd you have to go!' he yells in his mind. He looks out the window. They had all gathered in Hiei's room. The only window in the room has a perfect view of the inside of Shadow's Grotto. He knows that Hiei is gonna be very hard to deal with until she gets back. 'Come back soon, Shadow. We all need you. Especially Hiei.'
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That's it for chapter three. I told you it would be short. Chapter 4 will be up soon, I hope. Well, I hope that if you have something that you don't like about this, then you would tell me in a way that will help me fix the problem in the future and not just yell at me about the problem. I don't listen to reviews that just yell at me about a problem the reviewer has without an explanation on how to try to correct the problem. I won't even count it as something worth my time.