A/n: sorry if its not 2 good but it's my first one so plz just read it and if u have any ideas plz tell me in your review or just email me at I would prefer it if u just reviewed instead of e-mailing me because I don't check my e-mail 2 much.

One day Inuyasha & the gang were looking 4 Naraku when suddenly Inuyasha caught Naraku's sent.

Sniff Sniff,"what is it Inuyasha," asked Kagome. Naraku! Hop on Kagome. Kirara! Get on Miroku. Ok Sango.

A couple minutes later

"Look there's Naraku's castle," said kagome. We see it. HA HA you've fallen into my trap. AHH! INUYASHA HELP ME! KAGOME! Naraku u bastard. Tetsuaiga! I'll get u Naraku, wind scar! Damnit he disappeared with his castle & kagome. Its ok will get them. No it's not ok Sango. I've got 2 find her. "Inuyasha wait," said Miroku. "He did it again," said Sango. AHH! Smack Miroku. Well I tried.

Meanwhile

At Naraku's castle Kagome was being tortured.

Ahh! "Inuyasha won't come 4 u," said Naraku. Huff huff, "your wrong he will come," said kagome with her last oz of breath before she passed out from lack of blood. If she wasn't saved soon she would surely die.

Minutes later

Kagome awoke from her deep sleep minutes later 2 see Naraku kill tons of shoulders that probably came 2 save her.

Hmp, "AHH!" Screamed Kagome & the solider. Naraku turned around 2 see Kagome escaping leaving a trail of blood. "No stop," yelled Naraku. "Never,' screamed Kagome. Kagra make sure Inuyasha doesn't get any closer 2 the castle; I have some business 2 take care of. Ok!

Meanwhile in the forest

Inuyasha & the rest of the gang were right on Naraku's tail. "Inuyasha wait up," yelled Sango & Miroku. NO! THE FASTER WE GO THE SOONER WILL FIND KAGOME! Hold on I smell something sniff sniff it's Kagra. We must b getting close. "Inuyasha look out!" yelled Miroku. Dance of the Dragon! (Inuyasha jumps backwards dodging the attack) "Kagra! What has Naraku done with Kagome?" asked Inuyasha. He's going 2 kill her of course. Not if I kill him first. Hiraikotsu! (Kagra dodges the attack)

Meanwhile at Naraku's castle

Kagome is trying 2 escapes from Naraku's castle, but Naraku's right on her tail. If only she could get back 2 her time.

Huff huff, which way do I go? "You'll never escape," said Naraku. (Kagome runs even faster sill loosing lots of blood.) I've got 2 find my way out of here. Wait a second is that yes it is…..

Cliffy, I no it's not that interesting yet but plz keep reading and plz review.