Ok I decide to nice and type up the next chapter instead of working on some poems. But I won't have a new chapter ready untill Wed at the latest. As for Anakin waking up. I'm stcking to my timeline, "Ah love being evil" But you don't have to wait for chapter 30 either.

Now I defintely threw out some hard Star Wars Canon on Anakin's parents, out the window.(Hopefully it landed in the garbage can). I could never buy it.Especailly about his father. Lucas, my idea is better.

inuyashasdragonballs - Yea send your battle droid! I fixed my lightsabe and it's a red blade too.

Alley Parker - Yes I know about the grammer errors. I have learning disablity, so I just don't get it. I use wordpefect grammer chack but I still get confuse. As for the pov part.I know I switch that around. Hey this not a traditional Star wars story. Beside I like keep you people on your toes.

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Anakin's Girl - Yoda talk is confusing and hard to write. Now the big questition is . How in these past couple chapters. You have been the first to post a reveiw? I hope your not sitting at the computer all day waiting for me. ;)

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"Yes, let him rest. Master Yoda, thank you for moving him. I was going do that later. I was the one who moved him more to the edge. Anakin would have caused one major disturbance with his little war. Don't try to wake him. He needs to rest. He needs to heal. After all, he going to be the Daddy soon and he not going to be the only one either.

"Master Yoda, don't throw Anakin out the Order. It will haunt you. Then send you down the wrong path. Besides, his father was a Jedi too. He used the Force to help Shmi conceived. Hence the high midi-chlorians count in him." Qui-Gon stopping to chuckle. "You should see the twins count. They will keep him busy."

"Anakin's father is alive. He was told that Shmi was killed, when her ship was attacked by slave traders. With that news, he went missing from the Order 23 years ago. Search enough, and you'll find him. Then you'll understand Anakin's point of view on things. Despite his sadness of losing them, he has another family. In time he'll make the connection that Anakin is his son. Brothers have a habit of looking alike sometimes. But don't tell Anakin this, there is another father. Waiting for him, to help him to recover and grow. Beside, that Father needs his son to recover too."

"Search your heart Master Yoda, not the Force. Hear the young Jedi's voices and in the end. The Jedi's will be stronger. Ignore them and you'll die with the Order. I will leave you now. I'll be for Anakin later in his life. He is the Chosen One. But not as you expect him to be. Goodbye Master Yoda. Also, tell no one of this little chat. Better that way."

With that Qui-Gon slipped back into the shadows and was gone

Yoda pulled himself out the Force and called them back in.

"For young Skywalker, Yes and No for coma. Better place in the Force to sleep. Much confusion in him. Another job, poor Obi-Wan must keep him there."

Yes, I sense him much better. He's much stronger too. Can when pull out the coma now?"Mace quickly asked.

"Needs rest. No." Yoda replied.

"That and he still have the Galeriana in him. That has totally leave before he can wake up. He seems more at peace but still has that cough. Ah, there's my old wayward padawan."Obi-Wan, getting sense where he was. "How you get him to move. That's very tricky to do. Especially in the state he in."

"Practice, years! And with him."Yoda pointing at Anakin."Good luck."

Yoda chuckled some more and smiled. "He, good Jedi. But much better. Father,"

"Yes, we need to discuss the twin's future."Obi-Wan said.

"Well discuss that with his wife."Mace quickly answered. "Don't worry. We won't claim the twins." And looking at Obi-Wan."Just say the Jedi Order was threatened by annoyed Chancellor and one very angry Queen of Naboo. Need I say more."

"No, you don't."Obi-Wan laughing

"Laugh. Laugh. Mine ears, still ringing." Yoda, then added "From the Chancellor. Very cross. "

"And your ears are going ring some more, if you don't quiet down."Naporta with K'amott at the door. Then pointing at the door, Out! I need to do a full scan and finishing talking to Dr. K'amott. Bye! ."

"Master Kenobi. I do believe that's your 10th yawn this hour."Mace said as he finished his dinner.

"Sick Jedi, heading for that."Yoda added. "Ah, we stay with Anakin, tonight."

"Yes, that's a brilliant idea Master Yoda. We'll stay with Anakin and you go home and get some sleep. We're not planning to leave until tomorrow afternoon. So take a rest or should Master Yoda order you."Mace, drumming his fingers on the table.

"I'll do it, as long you call me if there's a problem."Obi-Wan said, knowing they wouldn't unless it was terribly serious.

"Home, good!" Yoda replied, getting up from the table."Come, different voice from Anakin's ear."

Obi-Wan paid the bill and call Ruwee to come and get him.

"I would walk home but I'm too tired. I'll admit. It will be nice to sleep in a bed instead of a cot."

"Well I told Jobal you were coming home. That set her off. Padme wants to talk to you. She has been quiet all day. Something is bothering her."Ruwee said.

"I'll find out what's bothering her. I know Anakin's condition is getting to her now. But I do have some good news for her. She might not understand but it's better than nothing. Ah home." Obi-Wan said, getting out the speeder.

"Ah Obi-Wan, there is a pot of Tesca on the table for you." Jobal said, opening the door for him.

"Thank You. Padme?" He called for her."Is she upstairs? I would like to talk to her."

"I'll get her"

Obi-Wan poured himself some Tesca and waited for her to come.

"Hello Obi-Wan. Heard you got a break for the night" Padme, taking her seat.

"Yes. Master Yoda and Master Windu are getting the pleasure of spending the night with Anakin. However, I do have some good news. Anakin is doing better. Still has the cough but they were able to get him to the move. So his days of hanging by the edge, are over. He's right where belongs. I can keep a better eye on him. Know you don't understand this and sometimes I don't understand either. But trust me, Anakin is in better shape now."

Padme said nothing but look out the window.

"Padme, what's wrong?" Obi-Wan, taking her hand."Anakin is doing fine. He's going pull through."

"I know. But today I had to do something in case he didn't pull through. Actually, it's something that should've been done when the Clones Wars started. We just couldn't talk about it."

"What Padme?"Obi-Wan getting concern.

"Today I went to the memorial park and chose where Anakin going be buried. This is where he wanted to be buried, here on Naboo. Anakin just wanted simple ceremony. Didn't really care for much the Jedi ceremony. I can't ignore this feeling of what if Obi-Wan. I'm not going let him live the rest of his life in a coma. Part of me, is afraid I'm going have to make that decision." Padme said, putting her head on her hands.

"Padme, that's a decision you shouldn't have to make on your own. Padme" Obi-Wan reaching for hands and taking them again. "Padme listens me! Anakin will pull through. Trust me when I say that he in the better place in the Force. The Force can do some healing. Why he even tried to give Master Yoda a toss, using the Force. Almost succeed too." Obi-Wan, slightly chuckling over that.

"Anakin almost tossed Master Yoda in the Force but he is a coma. You told me he wouldn't be able to use the Force in that state."

"I know. He should have not been able to do that. But somehow, Anakin used the Force, to tried give Yoda the heave ho. Master Yoda said he never heard anybody doing that, especially in a coma. Makes you wonder what's going. Unless Anakin is recovering and gaining more consciousness. And hate to say this for me, more strength. I have to make sure every day that he stays put and if he moves. Oh lucky me. I got moved him back." Obi-Wan laughing at that thought.

"Yes that has to be it. Anakin is getting better now." Padme breaking into a much need smile.