Ok so I have finally made a decision...I love 'wife of a kingpin' it is my favorite dream and story, unfortunately I feel like I did a half as job for the last dozen chapters...I really do...I know that they lack dialogue, tension, and well, I don't know pazaz! So I have been thinking and I got this idea from one of my faithful reviewers...I should first off go back and edit my beginning chapters because lets face it I was a horrible speller. Second I should combine some of the chapters to make them longer and less suspense incase I do have to leave for a longer period of time then any reader cares for...thirdly I should take off the last couple chapters, save them, but add to them and maybe take away some of the actions that took place...I feel like this might get me back into really writing my dream. I know that it is crazily cruel of me to take this long to update and if it counts as an excuse I just moved again, and I think that I am happy here to the point where I feel like taking up my true passion, writing. For those who oppose me changing anything tell me, and for the majority who want me to go back and slow things down and add romance, and funniness and all that stuff my story lacks tell me also. I will be making my decision final and will have a new chapter ready by Monday of next week. If you have input please add it or else you will just have to deal with my choice. I really am sorry for all the inconvenience my delays have bestowed, but I'm ready to write again if you will give me a chance, and stay loyal to me.
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