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Chapter three
Jareth laughed lazily upon his throne with Sarah laying practically lifeless upon his lap.
He couldn't help but chuckle at his victory as he ran his fingers through her silken hair, and stroken her black silk covered thigh.
"Heh, you are mine" he whispered huskily in her ear.
Sarah cringed inside, though she didn't dare to do so outwardly.
Oh how she longed to change her clothes.
Jareth had her dressed in a floor length, form fitting black silk dress, with a plummeting neck line, exposing in her opinion, way too much breast.
As if reading her thoughts, Jareth bent down his head and lapped at her exposed cleavage.
'Somebody help me' she pleaded silently, hoping the gods would take pity on her.
Raven Draztinoff silently walked the nightnight streets trying to figure out the starnge disappearence of his only friend, Sarah Williams.
Now Raven wasn't just any man, he was a vampire, a good one though, nothing like those jerk offs that go and kill people for sport.
Brushing his jet black bangs out of his violet purple eyes, Raven sighed and took a seat on the curb, this was getting him no where, it was as if Sarah has completely disappeared.
"Sarah, where are you? I need to know in order to save you" Raven murmured softly "Just as you saved my ass on multiple occasions".
"Raven..." Sarah murmured, lifting herself from her bed and going to the window, gazing into the bright orange sky "Raven"
Sarah, taken by a bout of weaknessm slumped to her knees "Raven..."
(A/N: Sorry this is so short, but I didn't want things to go too fast, after all, raven is just making his intorduction, and yes incase you are wondering, Raven is to be the hero, now please lave reviews and I will update soon, luv ya! Bye!)