Okay listen peoples. you are going to cause me a nervous breakdown. im gonna be pullin my hair out and the peoples in white uniforms are gonna haul me away. I AM TRYING TO MAKE LONGER CHAPTER. BUT IT ISNT WORKING!!!!!! It's not like i can spend all day online! I am going to discontinue this story...permanately!
unless you people start telling me it dosent stink. because all I hear when you say "longer chapters" is "we dont like this story as it is". THAT is what im hearing!
hides in a corner, sucking my thumb, rocking back and forth its not good enough ...its not good enough....WHY ISN'T IT GOOD ENOUGH!!!!!??????
i cant't write worth a crap!!!!! I thought it was a good story...but noooo, its not good enough for you!!!! please, i need some approval here. some good reinforcment. i'm a young writer, for petes sakes! takes deep breath, and exhales slowly okay, my nervous ranting is over. on to the happy things! i wrote some poems you guys have to look over. i dont know if they are good or what. just click on my pen name at the top and that will take you to my bio, then scroll to the bottom and click " poems with tears" stupid sounding, i know. okay, keep the POSITIVE reviews coming. bye!
ps. i will continue to TRY to make longer chapters. i just have problems writing all the details, i think thats why my story is so short. but i'm trying!
unless you people start telling me it dosent stink. because all I hear when you say "longer chapters" is "we dont like this story as it is". THAT is what im hearing!
hides in a corner, sucking my thumb, rocking back and forth its not good enough ...its not good enough....WHY ISN'T IT GOOD ENOUGH!!!!!??????
i cant't write worth a crap!!!!! I thought it was a good story...but noooo, its not good enough for you!!!! please, i need some approval here. some good reinforcment. i'm a young writer, for petes sakes! takes deep breath, and exhales slowly okay, my nervous ranting is over. on to the happy things! i wrote some poems you guys have to look over. i dont know if they are good or what. just click on my pen name at the top and that will take you to my bio, then scroll to the bottom and click " poems with tears" stupid sounding, i know. okay, keep the POSITIVE reviews coming. bye!
ps. i will continue to TRY to make longer chapters. i just have problems writing all the details, i think thats why my story is so short. but i'm trying!