Revan's Last Enemy
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So, this story is set right where Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic left off, if you chose the Light Jedi path. You and your crew have gotten medals, everyone's an honourary jedi, and all is well, apparently. This is my first fanfic, so give me some constructive criticism.
Part 1
Chapter 1: Back to Taris
Revan bowed before the Jedi masters and after some quick congratulations and thanks, he and his crew, Bastila, Carth, Canderous, Juhani, Zaalbar, Mission, T3-M4, HK-47, and Jolee got back on the Ebon Hawk and soared off, headed for the crumbling remains of Taris. The planet that the late Darth Malak had destroyed. Why? Bastila sensed something about it, something they had missed before. A powerful force of the Dark Side. As they approached, Revan shivered, and he called Bastila, Jolee, Juhani, and T3-M4 to the center of the ship. Something wasn't right.
"T3-M4, scan the planet looking for any life forms."
The maintenance droid beeped in annoyance.
"Well than get HK-47 to, or Carth, it doesn't matter to me."
T3-M4 beeped and buzzed off to find HK-47.
Revan turned to the other Jedi, "Now, you can all feel the power of the dark side here, can't you?"
Everyone nodded in agreement.
"Yes, I expected as much, something very powerful is on Taris, if you feel any sudden pull of the dark side, get back to the ship, alert the others and we'll get off of the planet. I've got a bad feeling about this. I can sense it, something's going to happen here unless we're able to stop it quickly."
Bastila spoke up "I've had a dream. When Malak blew up Taris, he had his warships attack every side of the planet, correct?"
Revan nodded, Bastila continued, "Well they only destroyed the upper city, their lasers weren't maneuverable enough to reach the ground of the city. I believe that the people on the city's ground may still be alive. But the rakghouls are all over the place. Nothing we can't handle, but there's more. I couldn't tell what, a sort of large portion of the Dark side. Living, breathing, and somewhere on that planet."
"Could it be nothing more than a rancor?" Juhani asked.
"I doubt it. I'm not even sure if there was a rancor on Taris, or a kraiyt dragon."
Revan spoke, "There was a rancor, but I killed it, that can't be it."
Jolee, Juhani, and Bastila, who hadn't seen this were impressed. Jolee said, "Don't worry, we've all been through enough to be able to resist the dark side."
Juhani flinched. Revan dismissed them and when he went to his quarters, he found the pacing Carth. "Revan, finally, the planet looks pretty deserted in most areas, but there are people down there. Not savages, not sith, just people. They seem to be almost celebrating. Still, it makes me uneasy. I remember the rakghouls, and the rancor. Even though it's dead, I still just... don't think it's right down there."
Revan nodded and said, "It's not right down there, something is wrong, but there's something important down there. Something we've missed. We've got to go down. Did you see anything else suspicious?"
"Well, HK-47 got excited when he saw all those helpless people, and Canderous is acting paranoid, but that's normal. But I think Canderous knows something isn't right down there either. Or maybe he just remembers Davik and Calo to clearly."
Revan nodded. "Set the ship down near those people. Have everyone on their highest alert, and get them into their favourite fighting gear. There's something big down there. But it wasn't counting on us. Just watch your back down there, Carth."
"You got it."
In minutes, they were on the planet's surface. Carth was wearing Mandalorian armour, and had his pistols, Canderous had Calo's armour and his favourite gun, Bastila had her single yellow saber and Jedi knight robes. Juhani was wearing her Jedi knight robes and had her purple two handed saber, Jolee was wearing his Jedi robes and had his green single saber. Mission had her street clothes, and her vibroblade, along with a small blue lightsaber she was being taught to use by Bastila, and Zaalbar had his modified bowcaster. T3-M4 had flamethrowers and heavy armour, while HK-47 had a heavy sith gun. Revan was ahead of them all wearing Star Forge robes, and he had two yellow sabers in his hands.
As they approached the group of people, Revan immediately recognized Gendar, but couldn't see Rukil anywhere.
Gendar spoke, "And who are these? Hold on, I recognize your face. And you! Mission, is that you? You've grown, and that's... Carth, isn't it? Yes, that's your name. And how could I forget our hero? The one who helped us when no other would. The man who slayed the rancor, destroyed the gamorreans, and cured the infected villagers. What did Rukil call you? Revan. It's great to see you again, I can't believe you came back."
"Happy to be here, Gendar." said Revan, even though he would rather be anywhere but here. The dark side was pulling on him, and he was fighting hard to resist.
"And Juhani! Look how you've grown. A jedi now, and Mission too? This is wonderful. And I remember Zaalbar, and is that the droid Igear helped build? The T3-M4? Of course! And..."
He stopped with his eyes on Canderous. "What... is this? Canderous Ordo." several of the people behind him flinched.
Revan stepped forward, "It's alright Gendar, he's on our side now."
"Good then. Well it's great to see you all again. This calls for a celebration."
"Looks like they were already having one." Mission whispered to Carth.
"If you don't mind Gendar, we are strictly here on business." said Bastila.
"Oh, well then do what you need, if we can help at all, we will gladly. After all, it's the only way we can ever repay you Revan." he bowed and backed away, towards the group.
As they marched away, Carth said, "Well wasn't that a nice little reunion?"
They decided to split up and search in four groups, while the droids guarded the ship, with one jedi in each group, or Mission, who was getting in touch with the force incredibly fast, so that the groups could communicate across the land. Revan went with Bastila, Canderous went with Carth, Mission went with Juhani, and Zaalbar went with Jolee, who complained, "Oh sure, put the old man with the walking carpet. Too funny Revan."
And HK-47 stood outside the ship as T3-M4 patrolled the inside. But HK-47 didn't know, and T3-M4 found out too late that someone was already on the ship. Someone who posed the last large threat to Revan.
There, if you want me to continue, please tell me to, this is my first ever fanfic so tell me what you think honestly.