The True Gods Chapter 3

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"Blah" speaking

"Blah" thinking

"Blah" mind speak

When Daniel saw that the door to the secret chamber had opened he immediately started to move towards it until of course Jack stopped him. "Uh uh Danny boy we don't know if the Goa'uld left any traps now do we?" he said while stepping in front of Daniel to cautiously check the door. "All right all right I know I'm just excited." replied Daniel bouncing slightly while trying to peek over Jack's shoulder into the room. Jack smiled indulgently "he's like a little boy waiting for a present" he thought while he grabbed his radio "Carter come in" he said. "Yes sir" was the reply back. "We opened the chamber, and entering it now." he informed her "on are way sir we should be there in 5 minutes" was the reply. "While lets go in shall we" Jack asked Daniel "right behind you was the reply.

They entered the room cautiously and found even more statues as well as skeletons chained to the walls all around the room. Above each skeleton was a message in Goa'uld. "What does it say?" asked Jack. Daniel went over to the nearest skeleton studying it carefully "This person appears to be a middle age female" he replied looking at the wall "Here lies a traitor to the gods any who betray us shall suffer the same fate." Daniel translated "And that fate was" asked Jack "apparently though I can't be sure without further examination, starvation" Daniel replied. He was moving onto the next skeleton when suddenly he stiffened stopping dead in his tracts "whose there he asked?" While carefully scanning the room for other occupants.

When Ares flashed into the room he saw two men wearing strange clothing the older one appeared to be holding some kind of weapon which he had never seen before. The younger one surprised him he seemed to know Ares was there immediately, demanding to know who was there. Ares decided not to reveal himself just yet.

"Um Danny theirs just us" the older man said looking at the one named Danny strangely. "No Jack there is someone or something else here we just can't see it," The one named Danny said. Ares was very surprised in his time no mortal could sense him, these human's must be much more advanced for even one of them to sense him. Ares smiled maybe it was time to show himself.

"Are you sure Danny" Jack replied slowly bringing up his weapon and scanning the room. "Ok this is a bit odd but Danny's hunches tend to be right more often than not." However before Daniel could respond a man appeared in front of them a man identical to the statue in the other room right down to the leather britches. Jack immediately had his weapon trained on him. "Who are you? and how did you get in here?" He demanded.

The man looked at him not seeming to be intimidated in the least bit.

"I am Ares god of war" He replied "Who disturbed my statue?" He demanded looking back and forth between them. "That would be me" Jack replied not relaxing his guard in the slightest. "Well than Jack was it?" Jack nodded Cautiously "I owe you my thanks you woke me from my long slumber" he said. Before Jack could find a suitable reply Daniel interrupted "Excuse me" Both Ares and Jack looked at him "How do we know your Ares and what did you mean when you said Jack woke you up?" Ares looked him up and down. "You are named Danny?" he questioned. "Daniel" Daniel replied "Well Daniel you are quite an intelligent mortal and also a fine specimen" he mentioned seemingly totally ignoring the question well looking Daniel up and down more slowly. Daniel stiffened and Jack was on full alert. "But how did you sense my presence when no mortal has ever done that before." "I've seen a lot of weird things and have a very good third sense" Daniel replied stiffly.

Before Ares could respond they heard a noise than "Colonel are you in here" as Sam and Teal'c stepped into the room. Ares looked up and stiffened "Jaffa" than before the occupants of the room could react he lifted his hand and through a fire ball at Teal'c. Teal'c immediately dodged out of the way and brought up his staff weapon but by than it was too late Ares had disappeared and with him Daniel and Jack.

Well that's another chapter done feel free to give comments or suggestions for me.

kahless21

Make you a deal. I'll keep reading if you keep writing. If i had anything to suggest it would be to make these chapters a little longer.

It's a deal and the chapters are starting to get longer the more I get used to writing so you'll get longer Chapters in the future.

Athenais

Liked it a lot. Was waiting to see a fiction like this.
Why not let have Jack is little sweet time with Ares. I think they would make a cute cuple somehow. It has not ever to be Danie or Sam. Would it not drove Ares a curveball if Jack were Xena great great (... great) great grandson. Maybe even from he child that she was having with ares. that would not hinder a little roll in the bed between them, if you look at the gree mythology. they were ofthen having it with there children, grandchilder and so on and ofthen both female and male lovers.
I am really for a Ares/Jack pairing up.
That story has a lot potiental, if you going at it so as you have ... it is a great storie in the making.

Thank you for the compliments, and having Jack team up with Ares is an idea but I'm not totally sure where the story is going so you'll have to wait and see.  However I do know that nobody is going to be descended from any of the mortals on the show have yet to come to a decision with the gods. Oh well guess you'll have to wait and see. 