Author's notes: Yes! I've finally caught up with Fantastic Story! Now when ever I update, I can post them together and then finish them together!
Thanks to you who reviewed.
To shaman-duelist - I didn't mean to offend you in anyway. Listen, I know what school can be like, wasn't exactly one of the 'populars' either, but I'm glad to put that all behind me, now that I'm in my 2nd year of college (wha-hoo!). So this is my advice, don't worry about the future yet (you've got ages to go yet) or the other people at your school.
Tea: (jumps out from the story) As long as you've got friends you'll be all right
Author: Ah! Where did you come from? Get back in there! (Shoves Tea back in) And stay in there! She does have a point though. Think about it.
Anyway…
Last time on A Spiderman Story… Yugi's father died after being shot by a carjacker, Yugi then went after the 'killer' but as he attempted to swing across the streets of Domino City, he crashed into a building and fell. Can our hero get back on track?
A Spiderman Story
Chapter 11 - Justice?
"That must off hurt!" Mai said.
"Yeah, I did," Yugi replied. "I still keep on crashing into buildings, even if it is two years later!…Anyway, as luck would have it…"
---Flashback---
When Yugi came concuss again, he found that he landed on a speeding car.
"Oh, my dad's car," Yugi said calmly as he was still half knocked out. Suddenly, he woke up fully. "I mean, oh god! I'm on my dad's car!…All right, killer, let's see if you like some of this!" Yugi yelled as punched through the roof of the car at the carjacker.
"Ah!" he screamed before picking up his gun and began shooting towards the roof. Yugi tried his best to dodge the bullets.
"Hey! No far!" Yugi yelled as he climbed to the front of the car and punched through the windscreen and grabbed the carjacker by the throat. Suddenly, the car turned into a gateway. "Uh oh!" Yugi jumped up out of the way and the car crashed into the gate.
The carjacker got out and ran into the building just as the police cars came onto the scene.
Inside of the building…
I creped in the shadows, as the killer nervously wondered about. I could hear his breathing getting faster and faster in fear.
Yugi slowly moved across the ceiling. Suddenly the carjacker heard him.
"Who's there!" he yelled as he saw Yugi's shadow and started shooting at it.
He then ran over to the door with two glass windows on it. But it was locked; he then tried to find somewhere else. But suddenly, Yugi jumped behind him, grabbed his head and clashed it against the little windows on the door, breaking the glass.
"Ah!" he screamed before Yugi punched and kicked him until he was up against one the big, but little broken, windows. Yugi took off his mask. "Don't hurt me. Just give me a chance. Just give me a chance!"
"What about my father?" Yugi asked. " Did you give him a chance? DID YOU!"
Suddenly, Yugi grabbed him by the collar and lifted him up. But then a light that was coming in from outside revealed his face.
Yugi gasped and backed away little.
At that moment, I knew who he was and what I had done. I remember everything falling into place in my mind.
He had robbed that guy and then ran away. I could have stopped him but I let him go. He even thanked me for it. After he escaped the building he needed a get away car. My father was waiting for me as he said. The thief tried to take his car, but my dad mustn't of let him. So the thief shot him.
As all this went through my mind, he held his gun to my head and laughed evilly…
"Ha, ha, ha, see ya," he said before Yugi suddenly snapped out of it, grabbed his shooting arm, knocked the gun out of it and twisted it until the bones cracked. "Ah!…no…no please!"
He started backing up, but suddenly he tripped on a pipe and fell backwards through the window.
I looked out of the broken window and saw his lifeless body lying on the ground.
Suddenly a spotlight shone on Yugi from a police boat.
"Freeze!" they said. "We've got the place completely surrounded!"
---End Flashback---
"(Gasps) Oh my god, did you get out?" Mai said. "And after?"
Author's notes: What does happen to Yugi after? How will he cope? Find out next chapter on A Spiderman Story
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P.S. I just thought I'd let you lot know that I am starting DareDevil soon. I've already picked out a YuGiOh character to be the hero, but all I'll say is that it's not going to be Joey! I wonder if any of you can figure it out!
Also, I don't know what to call the story, any suggestions?
