And so the flame wars continue. Here we go!
To the many flamers who have commented on my incorrect grammatical errors, I would like to introduce a writing technique that apparently is unfamiliar to you: exaggeration.
'Mines' was merely a word used to emphasize and stress Starfire's stupidity.
However, I do admit to some flamers such as the aspiring and creative writer, Princess Starfire of Tamaran, that I have many errors in my language. My sentences were not clearly elaborated and correctly worded. Thank you very much, Princess Starfire of Tamaran. Although we may be disagreeing in our views, it was very kind of you to point out the mistakes I made in my story.
Oh, one more thing. I would just like to congratulate the cowards who flamed my story and rejected me from reviewing theirs. That was very professional.
Moving on… here is the continuation of the story I have dedicated to destroying Starfire's reputation.
In the presence of the shining moon, a young alien girl standing on the roof of her home looks over the river and rests her eyes upon the glittering city. A strong, autumn wind brushes past her, with her long, red hair flowing softly in its current. She then turns her attention to the stream, sparkling like diamonds in a pool of darkness.
The beauty that resides in this young girl can bewitch any man or woman, trapping them in a cage of passion and desire. Lust lingers in those who witness this… perfection and as kind and gentle she may appear to be, her heart is truly tainted with selfishness and hatred.
"Hey Star." A cool voice creeps from behind her.
Shocked by this, she swiftly turns around and aims an emerald powered hand at the rooftop door.
"Whoa, it's only me." Robin steps out of the shadows and reveals himself to the Tamaranian princess. He slowly walks to where she is standing and allows a small grin to escape his lips.
Starfire contorts her face into a nasty-freak looking hundred watt smile, pretending to be relieved that it was merely her Boy that had startled her. She rushes over to him and wraps her thin, yet extremely powerful arms around Robin, leaving Robin with the only choice to try and return her embrace.
His unwanted attempt to hold her was relinquished the moment those authorative arms tightened its hold on him.
Starfire enwrapped Robin's entire body with her right arm, while her left arm was left to wander.
She rubbed his back in an affectionate way, where every stroke seemed to make its way farther and farther down. In a matter of seconds, Starfire laid her hands on his--
"Starfire quit it out!" Robin was obviously straining to get the words out due to the lack of air he had to talk, let alone breathe. His entire body was stiffening up, using all of its strength to release himself from that firm hold. Starfire sneered and let go of the suffocating Boy Wonder.
"My boy, how wonderful it is to see you! I welcome you to share this magnificent view with me." With that, she grabbed his left arm and pulled him towards the edge of the roof. "Isn't it the most beautiful thing you have ever seen?" Her jade eyes sparkle wildly from the reflection of the water. Starfire watches Robin, expecting a 'No Star, you're the most beautiful thing I have ever seen' type of reply.
"Yeah, it really is nice up here. Uh… listen Star, I…" Before Robin could continue, Starfire smiled and tackled his body with her own, masculine one. They landed on the floor, in a position where Starfire could easily trap him. Her hands encircled his wrists and pushed them against the cold, concrete ground.
Robin saw her advance even before she moved, but her heightened speed and strength were two Tamaranian assets even the boy wonder himself could not evade.
"Let me go Starfire!" Robin yelled almost as loudly as Starfire did earlier that day. His wrists were being crushed from the pressure and his entire body felt as if it had been broken into a dozen pieces.
Starfire, though strong, still had to struggle to hold Robin in his place. She used her knees and chest to push him back down. 'He's so beautiful. I've never seen him open up and become vulnerable to me until now.' Starfire smiled even wider at that thought, forcing her muscles to stretch so roughly that she appeared to look psychotic.
"Oh, Robin, I have been waiting for you to finally take me! Oh please, do it now before I faint. When I dressed up in your costume, I took my Starfire doll and rolled around with it on my bed. It was so exciting! I was Robin and my doll was … well of course me! It was so enjoyable; the way I rubbed my doll all over my body while I was still in your costume. Now, I can finally give you what you have always wanted. You will play Robin, and I will be Starfire! And we will roll around on the floor and I will rub myself all over you! I love you MY BOY!"
Author's Note: That was really true. If you watch that True Warrior episode (sorry I don't know what it's called) Starfire, dressed in Robin's outfit, took her doll and played with it. Now what's the word for that again? Oh yeah that's right, it's called
O-B-S-E-S-S-I-O-N.
Robin's eyes went wide the moment he heard those horrible, worse-than-death words. Just imagining himself rolling around with Starfire was, well, hormonally exciting, but emotionally nasty.
"Please NO STARFIR—hmph" Once again, Starfire silenced the boy wonder. She drove her face and smacked it hard on Robin. Her mouth bit and slobbered savagely all over his face, causing some parts of his mouth to bleed.
Author's Note: I used "bit and slobbered savagely" because in Betrothed, that's what she does to her food. Hah… wow, this is really fun.
Starfire's huge, mustard sucking mouth was engulfing and bruising his entire face, causing more pain than any of his previous enemies could inflict on him themselves. The only way he could avoid this ruthless assault was if he attacked Starfire.
As he was thinking of a way to escape this alien monster (… oops… I meant princess ), the roof door opened up and revealed two pairs of eyes that seemed to extend longer that the Great Wall of China.
Starfire's head darted up and stared at Cyborg and Beast Boy for a very, very long time. After a few minutes, Starfire broke the silence and yelled so strongly, that it seemed to have created a mini whirlwind, forcing Cyborg and Beast Boy to hold on to either sides of the door's entrance. "FRIENDS! Please, come and help me with My Boy Robin!"
As she said this, Raven phased through the floor with Terra. Seeing Robin in this… condition, Raven created a telekinetic duplicate of Robin.
"Uh… Starfire… that's not Robin." Terra informed, on the verge of releasing the bubbly laugh that desperately wanted to escape.
Starfire's head darted towards the two girls.
"Robin! Oh My Boy! Why are you there when you are over there? Which one is the real one… hmm…" Starfire, still in the same rape stance she was in before, truthfully contemplated as to which Robin was real. For a few seconds, she thought both Robin's were real.
"Since it is night, and you are covered in black, I pick you!" Starfire exclaimed. She removed her hold on the real Robin, and darted after the telekinetic, ebony replica. At this moment, Raven had her Robin replica jump over the roof.
"Oh MY BOY! I will come and scoop you up like the masculine member of our relationship I am!" With that, she dove after the telekinetic clone. Terra, Cyborg, and Beast Boy all exchanged glances with one another, and then turned their stare to the harassed Robin on the ground. His face looked so violated and abused…
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" All three laughed in unison with the passion of a "Tamaranian Kinorfka". Raven levitated over to Robin and began to heal his wounds. The walking traffic light finally regained his senses and turned to Raven.
"Uh… how long will that shadow thing of yours last?"
Raven smiled underneath the hood of her cloak. "Long enough for her to be satisfied with your… well… you."
"I have you MY BOY!" echoed Starfire's voice. By now, the three laughing submitted to the pain throbbing in their stomach and fell to the floor.
"MY BOY! I have saved you! Do not worry, MY BOY, I will let no one hurt you" her voice, though distant, could be heard, humming and whispering to HER BOY.
Starfire's P.O.V.
"I have you MY BOY. I will not let anyone take you from me. You are safe now. I will take care of you." The ebony clone of Robin lay lifeless in her arms. Seeing Her Boy's condition, Starfire decided to fly Robin away from her teammates and care for him herself.
Back On the Roof
As the image of Starfire holding the frail body of the ebony Robin flying into the moon disappeared, Robin stood up and started his way towards the roof door.
"Where are you goin'?" Cyborg asked straightly with a hint of pure concern. The other two were still laughing at the site of she-man Starfire, and he-lady Robin flying away.
Robin turned his back and glanced at his team. The one thing he despised in the world was being humiliated, and Starfire's actions were doing just that. "This has to end, and I'm going to find a way to stop it." He turned back around and disappeared through the door, into the blanket of darkness that cloaked both the stairs, and his pride.