Apparently I didn't give up on this poem writing. I am SO happy that you reviewed! Hugs and smiles at the reviewers Well, this one is gonna be for Alanna/George. Yes, Dom couldn't be that serious, but, it was sweet of him in that way…
Oh yea, this might sound like "Addicted"
I've sat around and waited for you
The tomboyish knight
That I loved
And always admired
When you looked at me
My heart jumped a beat
I'm addicted
Addicted to you
The times you always quarreled
The times you always fought
You never thought anything
Only to charge
I never have truly loved till I met you
The dozens of suitors
Whom I never accepted
You were the one
I was addicted to
I can't help but love the way you hit me
I can't help but smile when you stomp away
Cos I love youuuuuuuuuuu
And that will never change
We'll make it through
I promise you
Don't give up on me
Just at this point of time, Alanna stomps into the room and starts yelling at him for leaving her alone with Jon.
Oh, the nagging
It makes you adorable
I can't help
But love you more
And now, Alanna's getting really pissed and is threatening to letMoonlight trample on him.
That mare has a temper
And it complements you
You two look cute
When you charge in together
I don't know
But somehow
Everything you do
Seems so cute
And I love you the way you are
Cos I'm addicted
Addicted to you
Alanna's getting even more pissed than pissed. She's wondering why George is sitting there and not replying and somehow looking like a moron.
Your violet eyes
Make you stand out
Don't beat me up
With your Shang moves
I can't help
But submit to true love
Now, she's getting REALLY angry. And she starts screaming at George.
(Now, whatever goes on the poem, is EXACTLY what George is saying to Alanna)
Why can't you shut your bloody mouth
Stop spouting violence in your words
I should have bought a arrowproof vest
To shield myself from your stings
Alanna's face is getting RED. She's gonna blow…
Stop with the temper
I can't take it longer
Though I love the temper
That you always had
I can't live with you until you cool
So, sit there, and shut up
Before I approach you
Ooooh, she's REALLY gonna blow.
Just shut up
And listen to me
3
Stop bickering
And fighting with me
2
Just shut that mouth of yours
And listen to me talk
1!
I lo-
She pounced on him…
(Okayyy, he's been silenced, but the next part is sweet)
I just have to push you off
Show you I am the boss
And pick you
Right off your feet
(Hmmm… I can't think of what to do between these two… A bit of help here?)
You know your beautiful hair intoxicates me
And makes me so aware of you presence
You are like one red in a million blacks
Insanity overcomes me
Whenever you're around
I feel like doing crazy stuff
But that stupid Jon
You like him so much
It's like you don't notice me around him
But You know I love you…
And this is the part where she is swept off her feet, by her knight in shining armour, GEORGE!
Ladeeda, thanks to Mystique Phoenix again for helping me with this part.
Hugs and cookies to all those reviewers!
Sorry this might be kind of a letdown compared to Kel-Dom…