I didn't really plan on this, but something someone in one of my reviews interested me, so I decided to give it a shot. Hope it's as good as the first one. Enjoy!
Fool SupPorT: Lol, I think we all want Eyes searching for us. Damn Kanone...he doesn't know how good he's got it...or at least how good he had it. I do have to call him an idiot on that move. He had Eyes, then just...left him. Anyway, glad you liked it so much, and thanks for reviewing!
Polaris18: Wow, really? I didn't think a poem could be held in such high regard...thanks! Thanks for reviewing, too!
freya kurenai: Aw, you're just being nice. Well, Eyes is replying now! Congrats, you've inspired this poem (whether or not that's a good thing, I don't know...).Thanks for reviewing!
CeTe: Yeppers, I wrote a Trigun poem. That was a while ago (when I wrote it, I mean, before I even knew about this site). Lol, who knows what proper english is? Thanks for reviewing!
A/N: As noted above, this poem is dedicated to freya kurenai; basically because she gave me the idea for it. Thanks, and enjoy!
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A deceptive smile, hauntingly entrancing those whom you meet
That friendly facade, lying to the ones you will leave behind
A nonchalant man, hiding alternative motives of deciet
Those expressive eyes, ones which I remember were once called mine
A deadly angel, one with wings stained to a velvety black
Manipulating, hidden by your irresistable charm
With devils' intention, yet a true smile aimed at my back
A silent promise, assuring you will do me no harm
Say you understand, and stay by my side until it is over
I'll take your hand now, only if we go to the beginning
This is my only stand, our end appearing now even closer
I'll take your hand now, only if we go to the beginning
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Ugh, that one was a little harder. That middle part took me the longest, and I still couldn't get it quite right...oh well, hopefully it was still good. Review!