I'M FINALLY BACK! Thank you Jodi Crystal, DannysGirlForever, Biscuts and Muffins, Moody Maud, Sevkitty, purrbaby101, PhantomWriter92, digidestened7, purpledog100, and Anne Camp aka Obi-Quiet for finally making me see how much of a jerk I am and not continuing this story. But guess what…….HERE COMES THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Disclaimer: don't own Danny Phantom…..never will….enough said…..
The muscular ghost threw Danny in forcefully. His head hit the bloodstained wall on the other side of the room, adding yet more blood to it. Danny slid to the floor and groaned as a headache came over him along with the fact that blood was seeping out of his head. The brawny ghost shut the door to the room, leaving himself outside. He was eagerly awaiting the sounds of agonizing screams. For some odd reason, he enjoyed the sounds of pain. Two ghosts appeared before Danny. One was very well built and looked similar to the one that just left the room, and the other was skeletal but had a huge head to compensate. The gaunt one held the device that was on both Jordan and Brittany's necks. Danny's eyes widened in fear at the sight of the piece of technology. It resembled pain, slavery…….a life without free will. He didn't want that thing on his neck. He didn't want to be somebody's pet. He wanted to be free to make his own choices. An anger that was unknown to him until now had risen to the surface. It was flailing like a wild animal locked in a frail cage. Finally, it took control over him. As the muscular ghost approached him, Danny stood up firmly and looked it in the eyes. One moment, the halfa was there, the next, he was gone. The big spirit was confused and looked to his partner who staring behind him. The ghost turned around and there was Danny, creating an energy blast that would obliterate his opponent. The halfa had literally lost all sense of humanity and was helpless over his actions. Danny had a wild look in his eyes and his teeth seemed to be very slightly pointed. The half breed released the enormous power within his claws. The ghost was barely able to dodge it in time and the energy blast scraped off fragments of his shirt. Danny noticed this and moved faster than the eye could track, catching the ghoul in the stomach in the middle of its fall. The technical ghost was trying to track the halfa's frantic movements and finally got fed up with it. He pulled out a very small makeshift slingshot and put the tag in the rubber sling. The halfa's actions were so random that the skeletal geek had trouble aiming it right so it wouldn't hit the other ghost and so that it would get Danny in the right spot. He found the precise moment and fired the tag. It hit the demented semi human in the choice spot of the neck. Danny was overcome by shock and confusion. He gave a sullen laugh before falling to the ground. The boy's features returned to his normal half human state and it was then that he realized the pain in his neck. The device was giving off tiny robots into his bloodstream so that if he disobeyed an order he'd get a painful shock throughout his body. It hurt like hell to have something inside of his neck and when the locks went even further into his skin he screamed so loud that you'd think they we skinning him alive. The ghost outside smirked and opened the door.
"Alright, enough entertainment you two," the ghost said as he came in. He looked at the writhing halfa on the floor. He was clutching his neck and clawing at the device to get it off. But it only mixed more of his blood with that that had already spilled. The ghost smiled malevolently and grabbed Danny by the collar. "You think that was bad? Wait for the testing." The ghost said still smiling. Its breath made Danny want to vomit along with the pain he was feeling in his neck and throughout his body. So he did. Liquid came forcibly out of his mouth and it got all over the ghost. The spirit was disgusted and threw Danny aside. "You'll have double the tests for that!" the ghost said firmly. He kicked Danny in the stomach, expelling anything that was left in it out of his mouth again. The helpless half ghost peered up at the other two ghosts and blacked out.
Danny woke up in the cage again a few hours later. He looked around but suddenly stopped in the middle of turning his head. Stinging pain shot through his neck and into his chest. He felt for the tag, hoping that what he saw before was just a bad dream. To his horror, it was on the right side of his neck in all of its stale silver menacing glory. Danny's bright eyes dulled and he slowly pulled his hand away from the abomination. He started to crawl over to the lone boulder in the middle of the cage. His hands fumbled a little before he got there and he fell on his chest. Danny didn't bother getting up to try to reach the rock. What was the point in getting there anyway? To look for support? Forget it. He was never going to get any here. He sighed deeply as he remembered Jordan's last words to him.
'Don't let them tag you Danny! DON'T LET THEM TAG YOU!' Danny remembered. He silently curled up into a ball on the sand. He'd let him down. No, not just him…..them. Danny started to cry. At first lone tears escaped his eyelids and slid down his cheeks and onto the ground. But soon more followed, until his chin started to quiver. He was a slave, he was a pet……he was worthless. Danny curled up into an even tighter ball and wept. The sounds of agonizing screams and wild yells from varieties of ghost creatures filled the air. And that was Danny's lullaby to sleep.
I hope this is good enough for you since I've been gone for sooo long. So, do you think my writing skills have improved or have they gone down the toilet? Don't be afraid to tell me, I'll be more than happy to fix anything you need.