Hello again, first I would like to remind you that me no owny the world and inhabitance of Tortal! Secondly I would like to coment on some reviews.
Dreambringer: thanks for being last chapters 1st reviewer but Alan is coming (sorry I like him and he likes my character.) And Tomy and Susan will not get together atleast not right a way they are just good friends.
I'm glad that you liked Tomy, Kat, Krist and Susan (and Aly is one of my fave Tamora Pierce characters) unfortunatly Kristy will probably not be in the story. She has school and live in a different state than Susan; Also Aly will probably not come to our world but I will include her. And now on with the story
Susan opened her mouth and said "Alan!" and ran up to him and gave him a big hug. Tomy hung back and waved to the others who had suddenly appeared in Susan's livingroom. Tomy looked at Susan who was just staring at Alan as though she couldn't believe her eyes.
"Hey Sue I hate to break up this reunion but uh your sister and parents are going to be home soon ..."
"Oh no what am I going to tell them." a look of horror crossed her face as she turned to Alan and said "My father is going to kill you."
"Why?" asked Alan a little confused.
"Because I'm still his 'little girl' he doesn't want me to date let alone love someone outside the family."
"Oh well I doubt that he would actually kill me."
"your right its just..." there was a knock on the door and Susan went to open the door. She opened it to reveal Kathleen. "What are you doing here?"
"We were going to the movies remember?"
"Oh yeah come in I need to put my books away."
"Ok. Hi Alan, Thom, and people I don't recognise." then she relised who she had seen. "Alan! Thom! Susan what is going on here?"
"No idea, but we have to do something before..." but it was to late her family had just driven up to her home.
Susan braced her self as the door opened and her father stepped into the house.
Mwahaha serves you right for not reviewing I apologise to my one reviewer from the last chapter which was a authors note. now either start reviewing or I will get only cliff-hangers for endings. I am serious about this.