Chapter Nine

Hello my wonderfull readers. Sorry it took so long to update but I started school this week so I've been busy. I still want to know your opinions but please don't tell me that you want to see Susan and Tomy together. Tomy has Rachel and he and Susan are just friends the relation ship is completely platonic. So just for review Susan and Tomy will probably not get together in real life or in this story... I'll let you know if the former changes. Anyway on with the story

Disclaimer: me no owny the world and inhabitance of Tortal!(this is getting annoying.)

(a/n Rachels' POV)

Susan and I were yelling as loudly as we could to atrack the attention of the Men-at-arms who's job it is to protect Pirates Swoop. All of the sudden everything went black and I couldn't see anything. I woke up later in a jail like cell along with Susan and other girls our age. Susan was still knocked out and had a strap of leather soed around her neck. I reached up and touched my neck and was suprised to find out that I had one too.

When Susan woke up I let her know what I knew which wasn't much.

"Thisn't good." said she said when I was done talking.

"No duh we don't have a clue what is going on."

"Accutually I think I know what's going on."

"That's great! Isn't i?"

"Well it all depends on your definition of great."

She went on to explain what happened to Aly, Alan's sister, and said how the situation sounds the same.

"So if that's really what's happening here then were are we going?"

"I'm not sure but I know that both the Copper Ilse and Carthank have slavery and that Sarain and a few other places aren't to happy with Tortal."

"What does the last part have to..."

"Think about it Sarain and the other countries(yet to be decided) saw me at the very least when I was here last time and know that Alan likes me. And the pirates could probably tell that we are important and probably have some noble status in Tortal."

"So..."

"Just think about it if they have us they have something to keep Tortal from atacking or..."

"I get it."

I thought for a moment and then said "This is all your fault!"

"How is it my fault?" askedSusan.

"Well it isn't my fault that we are stuck in a differentworld and got seperated fromTomy and the others in Tor... whatever."

"It isn't my fault either!"

"Really you're the one who fell in love with Alan!"

"So!

"So... If he haddn't visited this never would have happened!"

"How do you know."

"Because it was Thom or some other mage from here who..."

"No it wasn't remember no one knows who did it.

Just as we finished yelling one of the other girls came over

"you two, stop fighting and yelling! do you want to get us all in trouble?"

"No" Susan said before I could ask the girl what she was talking about, "We're sorry. Aren't we?" she asked turning to me.

I nodded and the girl walked back to her friends as Susan and I started talking.

Alright it is still not to late to let me know where they should go and if you want any boys to get taken. Please review, because I don't know what you want if you don't Review. So please if you want this story to go on REVIEW! I would also like to thank seabiscuit0810 and dreambringer for reviewing.