Hello all and thanks for the reviews. I have decided to asks you something please answer via review:
1) Where the girls (Susan and Rachel) should be taken.
(a) Carthank
(b) Copper Ilse
(c) niether
if you chose (c) you better have a good suggestion.
2) Should they be together or seperated?
Disclaimer: me no owny the world and inhabitance of Tortal!(this is getting annoying.)
After the fight on the beach
Alan and Tomy were looking every where for Sue and Rachel.
"You to should just give up I think they were taken by the pirates."
they jumped and turned to see Steven.
"must you sneek up on us."
"Yes, come on the sooner you send people after those pirates the more likely you are to catch them.
"He's right lets go."
The boys ran up to see Alanna and George.
"The first thing we need to do is tell Jon, then we should send word to your sister and Kally."
When Steven looked confused Alan explained about Aly and Princess Kalisin(being married to Kadar).
"Well lets go" said Tomy.
Everyone looked confusedly at Tomy.
"I know that I want to make sure the message gets through and I know that Alan does to."
Alan just nodded.
The next day the Thom, Alan, Steven and Tomy set off towards Corus about two hours before they reached Corus the horses spooked...
"What the..."
"Tomy...TOMY! Tomy can you hear me. I think he's uncontious."
"We have bigger problems." anounced Thom. A herd(?) of Hurroks aproached by air as some Centaurs came towards them on land.
"You think they're friendly."
"Ah probably not"
Sorry this is it for this chapter I have some news though: first and most relevant I am going to edit the first story I've written so if there is anything you've been wondering please let me know. Second I just started taking Drivers ED so in six weeks or on October 3rd I can get my permit. Third I am going to a concert on the 30th. And last of all I am getting my own computer soon so chapters might come slightly faster.