Hello all due to real life events beyond my control I am going to have to cut Rachel from the story… she will be replaced by someone. If there is anyone from the last story you want included please let me know and please if you have any problems with Susan and … going to Carthank let me know.

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"Ahhh shiznit what happened and why do I hurt so much?" Tomy asked groggily

Neal, who had been helping his father, looked up to see Tomy awake for the first time since he fell off his horse almost a week ago.

"So you finally woke up. I'm glad that you are alright."

"What happened the last thing I remember I was on my way to Corus and now…"

"You fell off your horse and…."

(Flash back)

"What are we going to do we are out numbered!" asked Steven

"Well let's hope someone notices and comes to help us"

(End flashback)

"They were lucky the King's Own had heard that there were immortals attacking villages in the Royal forest and were out looking for them when you and your friends were being attacked they got there just before the centaurs and Hurroks attacked. They brought you here and you've been asleep ever since."

"So how long has it been?"

"About a week."

Neal left to go tell Alan, Steven and Thom that Tomy had finally woken up.


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