Hello all I don't know why I'm updating this especially because I got absolutely no reviews! But I was on my computer working on a character analysis for English so… I guess I'm going to be nice and update anyway.

Disclaimer: Me no owny the world and inhabitance of Tortal.

Susan and Rachel were talking about home.

"So why were you and Tomy acting awkward around each other… OH NO NOT AGAIN! You broke up and I'm the last to know again aren't I?

"Well… You may not be the last to know."

"What… but then why were you… Rachel... Rachel where are you? Uhoh this isn't good."

"Hey what happened to your friend?"

Susan looked up to see that one of the other girls had walked over to her.

"I… I don't know she just… disappeared."

"Wow! So it is true."

"What?"

"That your mages."

"What! No we are not mages we…. We just sorta ended up here and we had nothing to do with it. Hey you look really familiar."

"Oh well you met my brother."

"Who?" asked Susan suddenly interested in the conversation.

"Nick. Nickolas of Dolphins Cove, I'm Leslie."

"So how did you end up here?"

"Well…"

Flash Back

Leslie and her younger brother and sister playing on the beach at Dolphins Cove.

"Aaron, Angel be careful don't go out to far."

"Alright" called Angel and Aaron.

"Look it's Nick!"

"Look! Look! Who's that riding with him Les."

"Those are his friends Brian and Alexander."

Nick came riding up to his brother and sisters.

"Hello did you miss me?"

"No why on earth would we."

"Hahaha very funny do you want to go swimming"

"Yeah!"

"How about you guys."

Brian and Alexander nodded and took off their Tunics, shirts and weapons, and ran into the Cove. Nick and Aaron ran after them.

"Hey Angel lets go get some seashells."

The little girl bounced up on her feet and ran towards the edge of the water.

About a half-hour later Angel and Leslie where talking to each other on the beach and getting ready to go up to their home.

"You go on ahead and I'll get Aaron and catch up."

"Ok"

"Aaron, Aaron! Come on we have to get ready for dinner. Come… Nick look behind you!"

End Flashback

"Well Aaron and the boys got up to the house and Leslie made it before they did but…"

"Wow! So…" Susan cut off when she saw a bright silver mist coming towards them.

"What's that?"

"It's a long story I'll explain later."

So was that a good enough chapter for you? Well good now review. And by the way is there someone who you want to be in the story who was in the last one. Or does someone have an idea for a character please let me know.