Hello everyone I have two things to let you know first I have narrowed it down to two people to replace Rachel in the story:
1 Anna who is Kathleen's 12 year old sister.
2 Elise Devin's 16 year old sister.
Personally I think I want to use Elise but I want your opinion.
Second recently I only have two people letting me know what they think of the story, maliaphire and my sister(and I have to force my sister to readhow sad is that), so I have decided that because maliaphire is the only one to review in a while, beside my sister,maliaphire's vote is worth more than anyone else's except mine.
And now on with the story:
Disclaimer: I do not own anything in this story that comes from the Tamora Pierce books.
Carthank
Empress Kalasin and her husband Emperor Kaddar rode up to the stable after their ride through the city.
"You know my parents and I talked today" Kalasin said as she and Kaddar headed up back to the palace.
"Really? Was something wrong?"
"They were fine but… a group of pirates kidnapped a girl who means a lot to a good friend of mine and…"
"They asked you to keep an eye out for her."
"Exactly, so anything interesting happen to you?"
"No, things are fairly boring."
"I wonder where…"
But she was cut off by two children running up to them
"Mom can we go in to the city please!"
"I don't know… it isn't safe for the two of you to go out on your own."
"We won't be on our own mom,"
"Yeah were never alone."
"Well, I don't know, Kaddar what do you think?"
"As long as they agree to stay with their escort and listen to what they are told, I don't see a problem."
"Alright but be back by dinner."
"Yes Mom" the twins yelled over their shoulders as they ran off to get ready to go out."
By the time they got back their escort was ready and the servants that were going with them were waiting. As they left Kalasin got a little worried she had a bad feeling as she watched her five year old son and daughter leave for a visit to the city.
Later in the city
"This is so boring."
"Yeah look over there they look like their having fun."
"Let's go play with them."
"O.K."
They ran off in to the crowd and disappeared. When the guards and servants looked up the young Prince and Princess were no were to be found. Everyone ran off in search of the heir and his sister.
Mean while
"That was fun but we have to get back."
"Yeah let's go."
"Wait… were is everyone? I don't see them!"
"I…"
"You what… Ka…"
Well that's the chapter for you. Just remember I may be doing this because I enjoy it but with out reviews I'll stop posting the story and just write it for myself.