Disclaimer: Wow…haven't done one of these in a while…anyways, I don't own Inuyasha or any of the other people in this fanfiction. Kinda duh, considering it's a fanfic…but, whatever. Also ,I don't own any of the sites that I refer to later on…I just used them as examples for stuff, ok? So…DON'T SUE ME!

Last chapter:

"I promise," he whispered. "Nothing will happen to you. Not as long as I live."

Kagome kept crying and Inuyasha kept holding her, whispering comforting words to her.

Kagome's last thought before she fell into exhaustion was, 'I know I shouldn't…but I believe him.'

Now:

Chapter 14

As Kagome fell asleep, Inuyasha set her gently on her back on the bed. Then, thinking it might make her sleep better, Inuyasha set…

'What had Kagome called her?' Inuyasha thought. 'Oh, right, Aoyama.'

…next to her. Aoyama, who was also tired from rolling around in the sheets, curled up on Kagome's chest and at once was asleep. Inuyasha smiled slightly and left the room, closing the door behind him.

'While they sleep I'll look through those books and put the cloths away…Kagome can try them on later.'

Inuyasha sighed once and started down the hall. He turned a corner and a moment later another one before he entered a bedroom.

"If I fix this room up, she can sleep in here." He said to himself. "Then no more waking up and seeing her…" he stopped, blushing slightly.

'Ok, just calm down. She'll sleep in here and everything will be fine…I think.'

He sighed again and left the room to get the packages that were down stairs. He dragged them up, and set them on the floor of the room before he started to take the items out of the bags.

"Ok," he said. "We have a dresser and a bed…a closet…and…that's it. I'll have to go out and get different sheets and stuff…and a desk for her. This is going to take forever."

He unpacked the bags, all except one, and set them into the dresser. Then he turned to the last bag…and blushed, knowing what was in that bag.

"Ok," he said to himself. "It's only girl's underwear…and bras…I can do this."

He reached into the bag and pulled out the first item…a thong.

"Miroku…" Inuyasha growled out. "I'll kill him the next time I see him."

"Inuyasha?" said a voice from the door. "What is that?"

Inuyasha shoved the thong back into the bag and turned around to see Kagome standing in the doorway with Aoyama in her arms.

"Nothing!" he said. "Wha…what are you doing up? I thought that you were asleep?"

Kagome shrugged and said, "Aoyama woke me up. Then I saw that you were gone so I followed the way I felt you had gone."

Kagome tried to look around Inuyasha to see what he was trying to hide.

But she was distracted when Inuyasha said, "What did you do with the present from Sango?"

Kagome blinked, thrown by the sudden question.

"Oh," she said. "I…I left them in your room. I'll…go and put them on if you like."

Inuyasha shrugged, still trying to make sure that Kagome didn't see what was behind him. Kagome left to get the jewelry on and Inuyasha quickly put the rest of the cloths away, hoping that Kagome would never wear some of it.

When she returned, Kagome found that Inuyasha was looking around the room, as though looking where to put something.

"What's wrong with the room?" she said, hoping that Inuyasha would tell her what he was doing.

Turning, Inuyasha found that Kagome did have the jewelry on…and that it only made her look cuter. He swallowed and tried to answer her calmly.

"Um…I was…just looking where…where I should put the things that are going to go in your room."

Kagome cocked her head and said, "My room? But…" she stopped, embarrassed.

"What?" Inuyasha said., not lost on her sudden silence. "You're quiet all of the sudden…you sick?"

Kagome glared at him and replied, "No! It's just…um…" the next part she whispered, hoping that Inuyasha wouldn't hear but knowing he most likely would because of his ears. "I…I like sleeping in the same bed as you."

Inuyasha's eyes went wide. She liked sleeping in the same bed as a dirty hanyou like him? Never in all of Inuyasha's life had he met anyone like Kagome. Most, if not all, of the people he had met had taken one look at him and either laughed or swore at him. The only people that he knew who loved him were his family. Though…even some of them hated/feared/whatevered him.

There had only been one other person who had wanted to share a bed with him, though Kikyo's reason was totally the opposite of what he knew Kagome had in mind. Kagome was, supposedly, afraid of the dark and wanted Inuyasha there to protect her.

Kikyo, though, had only wanted to, uh, do you-know-what with Inuyasha. Every time that they had been over at Inuyasha's, much to the displeasure of his mother and whoever else was over at the time, Kikyo had always tried to make Inuyasha go to bed with her. Inuyasha, knowing what a bitch and slut Kikyo was, had refused each time.

"Inuyasha?" Kagome said, breaking Inuyasha's thought off.

"What is it, bitch?" he snapped, not liking to be interrupted when he started thinking…which wasn't a lot of the time.

Kagome glared at him and said, "Do you kiss your mother with that mouth?"

Inuyasha smirked and said, "No, I kiss her with the other one on the back of my head…what do you think?"

Kagome snorted and said, "So brain damage isn't your only defect, is it?"

Inuyasha stood up and went to Kagome, who cowered back in fear, wondering if all of Inuyasha's kindness had been an act and that she had pushed him to far. But all that happened was that Inuyasha took Aoyama from her and set the puppy onto the mattress of the bed.

"Sit," he said.

Aoyama sat.

"Stay," he said.

Aoyama didn't move.

"How…how did you do that?" Kagome stuttered out, amazed.

In response, Inuyasha twitched his ears and said, "You figure it out."

Kagome, glancing up at the cute little ears, thought, 'Oh…I guess being an inu-hanyou gives you the power to talk to dogs…I never knew that. When…if…I ever get back to the castle I'll have to put it into the history books.'

Kagome sighed, and left the room, knowing that Inuyasha's confused eyes were on her.

"Hey!" he said.

"My name is not 'hey'." Kagome called back, at Inuyasha's room now.

"Why you!" Inuyasha growled out, going after her.

"My name is not 'you' either." Kagome called back again.

Kagome was now in the room, and at the desk, fastening the necklace on, the rest of it she had already put on.

"Kagome," Inuyasha said when he got to the room. "What…"

"Wow," Kagome cut him off. "You got my name right."

Inuyasha stared at her then growled out, "What the hell has gotten into you? First you're all happy and nice, now you're like…like…" he said the next word as a curse, "Kikyo." And he totally regretted saying it.

Kagome spun around, blue light crackling around her hands. Inuyasha gulped, his ears going flat against his head.

Kagome took two steps and said, in an evil little voice that Inuyasha could not believe was coming from her mouth, "What…did…you…just…say?"

Inuyasha gulped again and said, "Nothing…nothing…sorry…"

The blue energy faded and Kagome came back to her senses to see Inuyasha standing in front of her, a look of slight worry, or was it fear, on his face.

"Sorry!" Kagome suddenly cried. "I didn't mean to…sorry."

Inuyasha just stared at her. Where had this little girl of a thing gotten all of that power? It wasn't the jewelry, he knew, she had had this power before that…she where had it come from?

Kagome started to cry again and Inuyasha was, once again, pulled from his thought.

'Every time that I get close to something, she always seems to pull me back to reality,' Inuyasha thought, going over to Kagome and leading her back to the bed.

"Shh, Kagome," he whispered to her. "Nothing going to happen to you. Not while I'm around that is."

Aoyama yipped and trotted into the room, apparently tired of waiting in the other one, and Inuyasha said, smiling, "Or while Aoyama's around."

Kagome giggled a little and the giggle turned into a hiccup which turned into another sob. Inuyasha sighed a little. He couldn't stand it when women cried…and for some reason, Kagome effected him more then anyone else did.

Inuyasha picked Kagome up and laid her on the bed again before he said, "Go to sleep."

Kagome started to protest…something about wanting to do her 'job.' But Inuyasha cut her off.

"No," he said, firmly, and he placed a hand on her arm to keep her from rising. "Either you sleep now or I'll knock you out and you'll sleep then."

Kagome giggled again and replied, "Yeah, I'd like to see that."

"Really?" Inuyasha said, flexing his hand. "That can always be arranged."

Kagome shook her head and laid back down, muttering stuff about 'evil little boy', and 'I don't wanna sleep.'

But even as she muttered this, she yawned and was instantly asleep again.

"Go on," Inuyasha said, looking at Aoyama. "Get up there are don't let her out of your site."

Aoyama yipped again as though saying, "Oh, yeah, she'll run away when she's sleeping…smart today aren't we?"

Inuyasha just glared at her and pushed her up on to the bed.

"Either stay or it's back outside you go."

One last yip and Aoyama curled up against Kagome, closing her own eyes and trying to sleep as well. Sighing, Inuyasha left the room, closing the door once again behind him. Then, going into his study room, he unloaded his books and started to organize them.

"Kami…" he said, dropping a book. "I'm my own mother! Organizing…" he sighed and picked up the book, putting it in to place beside the others. "I'm gonna die."

It took him a while but Inuyasha was finally able, after an hour, to get all of his new school things in place. After he was done with all of this he turned on his computer, intent on going onto the Internet to look some things up.

'Kagome,' he thought. 'Please don't come in.'

Now, even though Inuyasha is a male, that is not the reason he was going on to the Internet. He didn't approve of women showing themselves off on the Internet…he just thought it was wrong. He sighed, once again, knowing that most, if not all, of the guys he knew liked that sort of thing. Now, Inuyasha didn't 'swing that way'…he just didn't like the idea of looking at naked girls on the Internet.

'Enough of that,' he thought to himself. 'If you're going to get any work done you'll have to think of other things.'

'Like…' said a little voice in his head. 'Kagome?'

Inuyasha growled at himself and ignored that little voice in his head that was most of the time right about things. Once his computer was up, and it didn't take long since the computer he had was always the latest model, he opened his Internet and went to his mail.

Ignoring all of the one's from a little bitch he knew, for all of those who don't know who it is it's Kikyo, and looked for anything that wasn't from her. He had a few from some of the online places he was registered at.

Knights online, reminding him to come and play. telling him he had a review…yes, Inuyasha wrote fanfictions. There was even one from Neopets, though Inuyasha ignored it, telling him that his pet was going to die. There was also one from anime crave telling him to come and visit the chat room again some time.

He scrolled down more, deleting or ignoring most of them, and found what he was looking for. An e-mail from his friend, Rin.

He opened it right away and read:

Hi Hi Inu Inu,

I'd love to come and visit you! It's been so long since we last talked, not including chat rooms. I can't wait to see your new home! Heehee, Rin is happy that Rin gets to see Inuyasha again!

Um, Inuyasha? I was wondering, is your older brother Sesshomaru going to be there? I think he's so cute! Oh, don't tell him I said that! I'm online right now, so IM me and tell, kays?

Oh, did you hear of that new club that they opened in your town? I think it's called Club New Moon or something…I want to go! Will you take me there when I come? Or, better yet, could you make Sesshy take me? Oh, I'm so happy I'm coming over!

Tell Sesshy hi for me, ok? Ok!

ByeBye!

Love love,

Rin Rin!

p.s. can we please go to that club? I was told it's suppose to be really awesome! Byebye again!

Inuyasha clicked the reply button and thought about what he was going to write before he wrote back:

Hey Rin Rin,

I'm glad you're coming to visit…it's been hell for me for a while. You know, you talk in third person a lot?

No, he wont be here. Why would he be? He's an ass and besides, he doesn't live with me any more…or, I don't live with him that is.

Rin, I don't need to hear that! I'm going to be sick for a while now! Ugh, he is not cute…just a stupid ass son of a bitch.

Yeah, I heard about it. I'd go, but I'm not sure if you're allowed to take your slave into the club. Yeah yeah, I know you're screaming right about now. I got a slave for a gift from my idiotic uncle…thought I needed a girl around to do stuff for me. Anyways, I didn't want to get, I was forced into it so don't yell at me!

If I'm allowed to take Kagome, my…slave…hate that word…to the club then I'll take you. I'm not even going to try and convince Sesshomaru to take you. He doesn't like to be told to do stuff. Whatever…I'll ask him but only if I can still come. I need to get away for a while and I think that Kagome needs to have a little fun to.

See ya later,

Inuyasha

p.s. I'm isn't working so no. Also, go and see if Kagome will be allowed in the club for me, ok? She really needs to get out more.

He closed the window and scrolled through the rest of his mail, looking for something interesting to read. Nothing came up. So, deleting most all of the mail, except the things from his school which he didn't feel like reading right now, he went to his home page and thought about what would be the best phrase to put into the search bar.

Finally he decided on 'slavery' and pressed the 'search' button. 45,000 things came up, though not all on the same page. Inuyasha started to scroll through the list, looking for what he wanted. But none of them had anything to do with freeing a slave.

He saw thing on how to beat one, on how to treat one, on where to buy one, on where to get one that was good at a certain thing, pictures of runaway one's, and a lot of other stuff. But nothing on freeing a slave.

There were things on when slavery began (600 years ago), stuff on where it began (on the northern most tip of Japan), and things on how it began (an evil King placed all eleven of his daughters into slavery and forced his people to do the same…he also forced disobedient people into slavery…things like that and all happening because of Kagome's really really really great grandpa, though Inuyasha didn't know that)…but nothing on how to free a slave.

Inuyasha sighed, yet again, and went to the top of the page, trying out another phrase: 'How to free slaves.'

This time only about 200 things came up. And once again, there was nothing on how to free a slave.

There were things about the back slave trade (happened in America), things about how people thought freeing slaves was a waste of time (they were the ones who were most likey slave owners themselves), and other things about how no one has ever tried to free a slave…or, if they have, it was never recorded (maybe because most of those people were paid to keep their mouths shut?)

"Damn!" Inuyasha said. "What the hell is wrong with people? Don't they know it's wrong to try and keep some one as property? Or even to say that they belong to you?"

Inuyasha growled and went again to the top of the page.

"ok, this is the last time for today. If I don't get anything I'm just going to have to look again tomorrow or something."

He typed in to the little search box: 'freed slaves in Japan.'

He got 3 hits.

1 was for a game about freeing slaves, but it was a game from America.

The next was for people who wanted to know why there were no free slaves in Japan.

Inuyasha, almost desperate now but not quite, looked at the third one…and almost yelled.

There, in bold black letters, were the words he was looking for: 'people who have freed their slaves and how they did it.'

Ok, so maybe it wasn't exactly what he was looking for, but it was close. He clicked on the link and looked at what the page had to offer.

Welcome new face! Here is a slave free zone that we all hope that you will enjoy!

Welcome to the Free Slave Company! Here, we all try and free as many slaves as we can!

Slaves freed so far: 8

Slaves that are still slaves: To many to count!

Brother or sister, do you have a slave? Would you like to free them? Then click on the link below!

Inuyasha clicked on the link, getting a little excited now.

Please click on a name and we will tell you about that judge/lawyer! They are the best that we can offer on the little pay that we get.

Inuyasha clicked on a random name, Hojo, or was it Hobo, something or other. His e-mail was also displayed: page came up…

STUPID! YOU ARE AN IDIOT TO THINK THAT ANYONE WOULD EVER WANT TO FREE A SLAVE! HOW DUMB DO YOU HAVE TO BE TO GO AND LOOK FOR A SITE THAT TELLS ABOUT FREEING SLAVES? I'D HAVE TO SAY ABOUT AS DUMB AS YOU ARE!

Inuyasha stopped reading and went back a page, pissed off as hell. He copied the e-mail address down and went back to his own e-mail page, clicking on the compose button.

A/N: I know, I know, you all hate me, don't you? Yes, a cliffhanger…but I like to keep you guys on your toes…or…whatever it is that you stand on…hey, some people could stand on their hands!

Knight online, neopets, and anime crave don't belong to me. I was just using them as examples. Anyways, it was true though…anime crave does have a chat room!

IMPORTANT!

Anyways, I have a new rule…yes…a dreaded rule! I must get at least seven reviews, for any chapter that is and by anyone, before I will post the next one. Now, I know that this isn't to hard since I most get at least 10 right away…but I just love reviews and I made the new rule…so…whatever…

SOME OF THE VOTING IS OVER! HERE ARE THE RESULTS!

Inu/Kag: DUH!

Kikyo/Naraku!14! (done voting)

Kouga/Ayame!16! (done voting)

Sesshomaru/Rin: !34! (done voting…has the most votes!)

Miroku/Sango: DUH!

Shippou/Souten!4! (done voting)

Souta/Kanna!3! (done voting…mostly I did this because they are closer in age…I think…)

Now, I still need votes for these people:

Hojo?

Kagura?

Kohaku?

Now, don't vote for them to be with some one who is already picked, ok? Thanks!

Please read Aoyama Kori Narasaki's fanfictions, and Griffin Gal's fanfictions, and my other fanfictions.

Did you see the part I took from the first few episodes? Heeheehee! I thought it would work there.

Oh, and I have another thing to say…um…I don't remember now…

Yes, a short chappi…I wanted to post the next chapter though. If you want me to put up longer chapters, then don't complain so much about me taking so long. A great mind cannot be rushed!

Oh, I remember now! I really would like people to register at anime crave…I like that place and you can chat there, watch the 3rd Inuyasha movie, and listen to cool anime music. Tell me if any of you get, or are, registered there. I am and I'm under the name Nene in the chat room, ok people? Ok.

Yes, very long a/n…here are the answers to some of your questions, ok? Oh, and if I spell your name wrong, sorry.

KagomeKissez
2005-05-03
ch 14, signed

Wow, it's so cute, when he said he promised to protect her i was like: Aw. But anyway. I really like it so far, keep it up

Thanks, I thought it was cute to!

grrlpower
2005-05-03
ch 14, signed

hey wats up! the last chap that u updated it was a little weird but the story was funny

Bored, you? Thanks for your review!

Kathie
2005-05-03
ch 14, anonymous

yeah it's been so long since you last update what's wrong having probs anyway your story is too good for you to let it down for a couple of weeks i mean that you need to update more ok please with puppy eyes :( pretty please update asap i give you a thousands of hundreds of billions of trillions /10

I know its been a long time. No, no problems…just school stuff getting in the way. Yes, I'll update more…I don't have any more makeup work so I have more time now.

dracochick
2005-05-03
ch 14, signed

AW! Thats so cute! I love the way you made Inu nice!

Heehee, thanks, I like nice Inuyasha to…though…I'm thinking about making him a little more, oh I don't know, doing what he usually does…cussing…though…maybe not.

OneMorning
2005-05-02
ch 14, signed

I like...No..Wait..Love, Your Story! I Hope You Update Again Soon! Neopets! OMG! Neopets Rocks! WooHoo!
My Neopets Name: monkeythe123
Dont Ask.. About The Name.. Lol.
Bye! Hope You Update Soon!

OneMorning

Oh, thanks! Yeah, neopets is cool. Oh, did you get my neomessage thing? I asked you to be my neofriend…you don't have to be if you don't want to be. I love the name!


SE
2005-05-02
ch 14, anonymous

GREAT! WONDERFUL! FANTASTIC! Heart-felt story, with a pinch of anguish to finish it off. This is a very b-e-a-u-tiful story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

SE

I'll update as soon as I can…that is…right after I finish the chappi, okays?

Arifel-Lil-Fairy
2005-05-02
ch 14, signed

I really like where you're taking this story! I can't wait for another chapter to read.

Arifel

Here's that next chapter! Yeah…I know…a little short…the next one will be long, promise! But remember, that means that I have to take more time to write it.

The Spiked Dragon
2005-05-01
ch 14, anonymous

Old love?Sounds like Hojo if you ask me lol,will Kagome ever tell Inuyasha her orgins?What I mean by her orgins is will she tell Inuyasha how kikyo killed Kagome's father,how Kagome got into the Slave Center in the first place,the reason that kikyo can't enter the castle anymore,how Sango became a slave as well as Kagome,will Kagome ever tell Inuyasha that she is the Missing Princess?And how come Souta hasn't tried to find her yet?Anyhow it's a really good story update soon please.

Oh, it might be Hojo…but me no gonna tell! Yeah, she'll tell him…just not yet. Oh, and the Souta thing, that's because…well…he has to keep the castle safe from the bitch…er…Kikyo? Maybe, but I'm not going to say if that's right of if I'm teasing, ok? Kagome will tell later, okz?

Snow Lepord
2005-05-01
ch 14, signed

Pretty cute chapter with the puppy and Inuyasha conforting Kagome. I hope that the next chapter will be a little longer though.

Sorry, not so long…I wanted to put up the answers to some questions…and I couldn't resist making another cliffhanger! Oh, did you see that I used my friend Aoyama Kori Narasaki's name for the puppy? Shh, don't tell her! Though…she already knows, but still, shh.

Rinstwin

2005-05-01
ch 14, signed

I'm going to cry that was so sweet keep writeing it is very good it almost mad me cry wha but it was very good peace out :)

gives Rinstwin a tissue here, it'll help…I think. Heeheehee. Hope you like this chapter!

Moon-Dragon 1288
2005-05-01
ch 14, signed

good chapter. i like.

Thanks, here's another one.

Keyo-Red Angel of Hope
2005-05-01
ch 14, signed

Not bad, not bad. I have to say, alot of the moments that relate to Kagome's past life tend to lessen the goodness of your fic, but otherwise this was a very good chapter.

Keep it up!

Why do they lessen the goodness? Tell me really, I have to know. I just don't see it, so…tell me, please, ok?

badassgemini12
2005-05-01
ch 14, anonymous

ok now im like done with 14 so like ya. nice story, no kikyo, im happy.

No Kikyo for now that is...she'll be back to be a bitch again soon…damn.

bluekatz
2005-05-01
ch 14, signed

Dude your story TOTALLY ROXS! i hope Inuyasha and Kagome make out soon! grins sorry i couldn't control myself! later gaiter! keep up thee good work!

Thanks, I like the story to…I made it so I should! Oh, you might just get your wish soon…heeheehee.

badassgemini12
2005-05-01
ch 8, anonymous

ok, im only on chapter 8 but u had better have inuyasha and kagome together cuz kikyo SUX big time. o and i like ur story.

If you had read the voting thing you would see that they are a definte couple…it's a smart thing to read a/n's you know. But, yes, I agree, Kikyo sucks.

Akeryou-Inuyasha-2112
2005-04-30
ch 14, signed OMG! That was awesome! Update soon please!

Thankies! Here's another chapter for your enjoyment!

Rose
2005-04-30
ch 12, anonymous

Look for bookwormsunited!

Heeheehee, I know! Hey, you going to be on anime crave any time soon? I just talked to you today and I was wondering if you were going to be on later or another day.

Rose
2005-04-30
ch 1, anonymous

pair kikyo with someone thats as slutty as she is.

Will a rock do well? It's not slutty, but it is a rock…and I think Kikyo would like it, don't you? Or, I could make her go with some mold…mold and Kikyo seem to go together, don't they?

the best
2005-04-27
ch 13, anonymous

ur story is kool u have 2 finish it or else jk but plz do

I'll finish, just don't hurt me! Heehee, kidding, but yep, me is going to finish.

kagomeof
2005-04-26
ch 13, signed

it a good story plz write more chapter.

Yep, here is another one. Tell me if you likey, ok?

Arifel-Lil-Fairy
2005-04-24
ch 13, signed

I'm really enjoying this story! Please add the next chapter soon, I want to see what was in the package that Sango gave to Kagome, plus how Inuyasha will react when he finds the puppy. P

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Here is the next one! Did you think what was in the package…well…was going to be in the package? How did you like the way Inuyasha found Aoyama.

Arifel brittany 13, anonymous

OMG i love ur story and i think kag/inu make a very qute couple, but kouga/ayame are still my fav couple i dont kno why but all the minor charaters out of a series are always my favorite i'm not sure y tho.:S

Inuyasha and Kagome are already a definate couple. Heehee…I know…some of the most minor charcters in series are some of my favorite!

warlord
2005-04-18
ch 13, anonymous

you need to finish the story for this one and if that is the end its a sucky ending

Wow, very inspiring aren't we? Duh it's not the ending, there is something called writing the next chapter!

FallenInsaneDemon
2005-04-17
ch 13, signed

lol cute update soon!

I updated, you like?

animelover
2005-04-16
ch 13, anonymous

please update soon its a really good story please! i would love to read more please!

Here's the next one for your enjoyment. Hope you like this one as much as you did the others!

ryuchi
2005-04-16
ch 13, anonymous

keep on writing!I love it!

Yep, me is still writing!

ryuchi
2005-04-16
ch 4, anonymous

I love u!...I rilly rilly do!...I love u..I love you better than icecerem!

Keep going!

o.O Oh my…um…thanks? But um…I…uh…HELP! j/k thanks for the review!

RYUCHI
2005-04-16
ch 3, anonymous

Inuyasha and kagome!MIROKU AND SANGO!

Inuyasha and Kagome, yes, Miroku and Sango still being voted upon..though…I'm not sure for how much longer.

ryuchi
2005-04-16
ch 2, anonymous Inuyasha/Kagome!Miroku/Sango!Kouga/Ayume!YA!

Inuyasha and Kagome, of course, Miroku and Sango, maybe, and Kouga and Ayume, also a maybe.

ryuchi
2005-04-16
ch 1, anonymous

cool sweet love it!

Thanks, I hope you love this chapter to!

Kylria
2005-04-16
ch 13, signed

please update. i love this story.

Here is the update, thanks!

fideal mollicia
2005-04-16
ch 13, signed

this is really funny... and weird... ILOVEIT! anyways update soon!

I know it's weird…that's what makes it great! Thanks, here is the next chapter!

yoriko
2005-04-16
ch 13, anonymous

you should put fluffy with rin

If it has the highest vote then I will.

catnappay
2005-04-15
ch 6, anonymous

Kagura and fluffy should be together and keep writing the story. IT'S GREAT.

Thanks, and they'll be together if they get the highest # of votes.

dracochick

2005-04-15
ch 13, signed

Yay! You updated! does happy dance Update son!

Oh, nice happy dance! Heehee. Here is that update for you!

InuYasha-luver235
2005-04-14
ch 13, signed

cute!i like the puppy

Thanks, I like the puppy to! I named her after my friend Aoyama!

KagomeKissez

2005-04-14
ch 13, signed

Aww it's cute. I really like it. When is it going to get to the princess part?

Thanks, I'm glad you likey. That'll be later in the story, but not right now, ok?

Bloodangeloffire
2005-04-13
ch 13, signed

this was great thanx

You're welcome!

Cinnamon bun
2005-04-13
ch 13, signed

Inuyasha/Kagome-(of course)
Miroku/Sango-(perfect)
Sesshomaru/Kagura-(Not Rin b/c she just a little girl)
Kouga/Ayume-(Both are wolves and have bad temper)
Rin/Kohaku-(closer in age and cute together)
Kikyo/Naraku-(They belong together b/c I hate them both. Besides putting them with someone else is just plain cruel.)

Yes, maybe, maybe, that's true but still maybe, yes cute and yet still maybe, I agree…but once again maybe. Thanks for your votes and review!

smokie
2005-04-13
ch 13, anonymous

good story cant wait to see what inu says about the dog though sense its kagome he can't exactly say no can he anyway hope to see more soon

No, the puppy isn't Kagome's…she just found it, that's all. Now don't ask how it got into the backyard because even I don't know that. Heeheehee.

Anime Dragon Miko
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

hahhaahahahahahah that's so funny! i think my rib-cage cracked!

Thanks, at least I know one person liked it!

Devil's Assistant
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

I liked it! I used to be on neopets, but i kinda drifted away from it if you know what i mean. hey, email me some time! i can give oyu some tips on neopets that i got! Keep writing!

Ok, I'll e-mail you some time…I need help!

kagome112593
2005-04-12
ch 13, signed

HI I LOVIE! please write more can't live without em and nice dog! UPDATE! or else...

Thanks, I'm glad! Oh, no, don't die! Here is the next chapter, don't kill me! j/k

Ryine Kuriso To'oname
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

Wow thats really good and the nonchapter was very funny update soon. Ayame/kouga

Thanks, you're the second person who likes the parody chapter…(sarcasticly) I feel so loved by everyone! (Not!) Thank, I'm glade that you liked it!

Miko of Pure Souls
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

Taht was incredibly funny! Way to go! Anyways, please update!

Thanks, here is that update! Me hope that youz like it!

Cinnamon bun
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

lollollollollove your story, please write more soon.

Wrote more! Here, read read read! Hope you like!

Keyo-Red Angel of Hope
2005-04-12
ch 13, signed

Not bad. Miroku's getting exhasperated.

I find it hard to believe that based on her past ways of acting, Kagome would so easily take the Puppy into the house, she would be more likely to try and hide it first. But otherwise this chapter was quite alright, though you need to apply more detail to your writing.

Otherwise it was very good. Keep it up.

Um…she did try and hide it.

inufan0719
2005-04-12
ch 13, anonymous

sorry about the review for 14. Didn't see the notice

That's ok, not many people did…wonder why I took it down? Well, that's the reason.

inufan0719
2005-04-12
ch 14, anonymous

the last chapter really dissapointed me and was really gross.

Since I got another review from you saying you haden't read the BIG announcement, I'll not be mad at you, ok?

IceErines 14, anonymous

I really like your story...Your very good at the anime writing. Your parody chapter was pretty funny too! Laterz..

Also- when you write Sess into this, are you going to diverge from the icy exterior or will you leave him like the anime? I personally find the icy exterior sexy- but that's just me..lol

Thank you, I love to write fanfictions. Oh, thanks! You are the thrid person to like the parody chapter. I will leave him like the anime…I think he's cool that way. Heehee, a lot of people do.

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 14, anonymous

00 okay please don't do that randomishis that a word kind of stuyff please because it seems "special" no offence if you like it i just have particular attuide towards people who because of a d$# person in my class can't get rid of him. anyway enough of my bi.
rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

I wont anymore, well I wont post them on this fanfiction any more that is. I've made a new fanfics for my parody chapters. Whatever if you don't likey, some do and some don't, I, at the moment, don't really care.

Bishojo
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

XDD thats a crazy chapter! I luv your story! Please update soon!

Thanks, I know it was a little crazy…heeheehee.

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 13, anonymous

heh heh i quess books are replacing stones in this fic and are everyone the same age in this fic as they are in the show. and i always wondered if miroku would be thrown in jail if he was in our time.
votings
rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

No, they are not the same age…well…not Inuyasha anyways. He'd have to be, like, 60 some odd years old! Anyways, yeah, there the same ages. I think he would be…I mean with all of the molestation things out there now a days, you'd think he would be.

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 12, anonymous

hey souta made an appearance and it was to bash kikyo with magic hope to see him bashing her again.
rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

He'll be here again soon.

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 11, anonymous

rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

I'm only going to say this once, ok? Don't keep sending in the same voting! I get confused and I don't like being confused. Also, it just seems like a waste of my time to go and see how many time's you posted the same thing. Please, don't do this again.

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 10, anonymous

rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 9, anonymous

rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

whispeonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 8, anonymous

rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 7, anonymous

rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 6, anonymous

rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 5, anonymous

rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 4, anonymous

rin/kohaku
kanna/souta
ship/souten
kahura/sess

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 3, anonymous

rin/kohaku
souta/kanna
ship/souten
kagura/sess

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 2, anonymous

ship/kanna
rin/kohaku
souta/kanna
kagura/sees

whisperonthewind
2005-04-12
ch 1, anonymous

souta/kanna
ship/rin
sess/kagura they are closer in age and i like
rin/kohaku's better
ship/sotenspelling might be souten not sure

have not remebered title so it's been a while and i'm happy with the kikyo bashing second most hated anime character next to amon don't know why lord sesshomaru

Hmm, thanks. Me is glad you like, I hope you like this chapter to.

(travis)
2005-04-12
ch 3, anonymous

what the hell does baka mean

Baka means idiot, fool, or small insults like that.

catherine
2005-04-12
ch 14, anonymous

real gd! nothing else can be sed!

Thanks, I'm glade you liked…do you like this chapter?

Kei-Ookami.kara.mori

2005-04-12
ch 13, signed

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON!

Here is the update and I'm glad you love it.

Jade
2005-04-12
ch 14, anonymous

The chapter was not the best thing in the world. It can be a lot better. I'm hoping this will stay as a pradigy chapter. My reason is becuase I like how the story is going before you and company came up with this pradigy chapter. Keep on updating and writing. I like the Rin/Shessomaru pair.
Thanks.

(sarcasticly) oh, no, I'm going to make it into a chapter, yeah, I'm that stupid. (Not!) Anyways, here is the update.

mouko-star
2005-04-12
ch 14, anonymous

I canèt stop laughing! Bakja french comp... Keep it up!

Frence comp? Heeheehee, Whats that about.

shikonjewelsdarkshadow
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

hey, very funny, hahahaha

Thanks, I'm happy that you liked it, you are, I think, the third person to like.

FreakTurd151
2005-04-12
ch 14, anonymous

hahahahahaha...its funny...update soon

Thankies! You might be the 4th person to like it!

Inuyasha's hamster
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

Don't make this acctully a chappy Kagome riding off with koga donsn't make sence lord sesshomaru

I wonder why it doesn't make sense? Oh, I know! Maybe because it is a freakin PARODY!

(travis)
2005-04-12
ch 1, anonymous

sesshomaru & kagura

Ok, I got your vote.

fluffyrachel
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

LOL! So messed up! UPDATE SOON!

I know, messed up! You are the 5th person to like it, I think.

fluffyrachel
2005-04-12
ch 13, signed

LOL! SO FUNNY! I love it! More fluff is coming right?

Yes, more more and more fluff!

Lil'Ally
2005-04-12
ch 14, signed

um... ok? dat was a bit weird. neway, keep up da great work!

Thanks, did you like it? I thought that it was weird but funny…heeheehee.

Lil'Ally
2005-04-12
ch 13, signed

hey sup? neway, y do u always take long to update? oh and plus dat's not how u spell clothes, it's c-l-o-t-h-e-s. ok? well i'm off to read da next chappie!

I take so long because of school work...so much make up work I have no time. I know that now…for some reason my computer didn't pick it up…evil little thing it is. Good, I need people reading!

Inuyasha's Yuki
2005-04-12
ch 13, signed

Opps! I'm sorry, I should of paid attention...GAH! I SSO sorry...starts crying of guilt I feel like such a yaro baka! Gomenisai Neo Staff-san...bows I am not worthy! cries like shippo Slap me next time I do something stupid like that! Gomeni, gomeni, gomeni!

It's ok, really, it's fine! I know you didn't read the thingey…not many did. Please don't cry, it'll be fine. But no, I wont slap you, ok?

Inuyasha's Yuki
2005-04-11
ch 14, signed

What in the hell is this? WTF? This is the most stupidest chapter I read! It doesn't make a bit of f-ing since! Please tell me this isn't a real chapter, because if it is you NEED to do it over again! Your story was going great until this chapter came up! Gr...sorry...until next update, Ja ne!

I saw your other review, so I won't respond to this one, ok?

ArwenRivendell
2005-04-11
ch 14, signed

(O)(O)
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oh my...

(i can still send another review... anonymous)

Um…thanks? Love the review.

ArwenRivendell
2005-04-11
ch 13, signed

AW and Inu baby! how cute! he he...
runs off to next chapter

by the way, i still luv how you make Kikyo queen of the ditz!

Thanks, I love making her the queen of stupid people to!

Akihanah
2005-04-11
ch 14, signed

interesting...liked the parody..though i have been "kissed" by my dog..and its gross. I wonder how inu will really react to a dog in his house...on his bed, in his sheets. Until next time, have fun on your spring break.

I know it's gross…that's why I put it in! Tell me if you like this chapter, ok?

Kei-Ookami.kara.mori
2005-04-10
ch 12, signed

GREAT STORY! I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON! I VOTE FOR RIN/SHIPPOU!

Here, I updated! Do you like?

animestone
2005-04-07
ch 12, signed

UPDATE!

Heeheehee, here is the update!

Inuyasha's hamster
2005-04-05
ch 12, signed

KikyoXthe wall Mirokusango InuKag now update!

james

YEAH! KIKYO AND THE WALL!

Lee
2005-04-03
ch 12, anonymous

love the story! Please update soon!

Thanks, I updated! Here is the next chapter, I hope that you like it, I think that you will! Tell me if you do, ok?

Miko of Pure Souls
2005-04-02
ch 12, signed

One word: awesome. That's really all I have to say, oh and I voteMiroku/Sango and Kouga/Ayame. Anyways, update soon!

One word: Thanks!

Caprisha
2005-03-30
ch 12, anonymous

I vote for Rin/Fluffy.

Thanks, I got it down.

darkangel29
2005-03-28
ch 12, signed

hey im registered at neopets o yea i love ur sotry!

Hey, could you tell me your neopets name? Mine is moonbeamchan. Oh, and thanks!

demonslayer206
2005-03-28
ch 12, anonymous

here's a thought. wouldn't kagura and naraku be incest? chapter's great, though.

Um…whatever…thanks…I think…whatever…

demonslayer206
2005-03-28
ch 12, anonymous

here's a thought. wouldn't kagura and naraku be incest? chapter's great, though.

Not going to reply this time.

FallenInsaneDemon
2005-03-28
ch 12, signed

awesome story plz update soon! here for insperation hands you a teacup yup there u go a tea cup

Oh, me love the teacup! hands over another chapter heeheehee there you go!

corpone
2005-03-28
ch 12, anonymous

i like fluffy/rin as a couple

Ok, thanks for the vote!

Yashinu
2005-03-27
ch 12, anonymous

K I think the parings should be
fluffy/Rin
Miroku/ Sango (Please make that a definate)
Ayame/Koga(although I think that Koga should like kagome first and then Ayame, Just to bug

Thanks for the votes and I'll tell you what the out come is when the votes are over. Sorry, your review got cut off a little so…um…yeah…sorry.

Inu Yashinu
2005-03-27
ch 3, anonymous

I havent read all the chaps yet but I REALLY think sessh and Rin should go together , Great Fic though keep up da good wrk ().()

Thanks, and it's ok if you didn't read them all yet…I know you will!

U InuyashaLoverRr
2005-03-27
ch 12, anonymous

great story far! i love it..and these are the couples that should be together...

Inuyasha/Kagome

Thanks, but they are already a most defenate.

kagome112593
2005-03-27
ch 12, signed

UPDATE SOON! i love it you are a true writer oh and i vote for the one and only KAG AND INU BTW: KILL KIKYO FOR ME thank you oh can you email me i'd like to ask you about something

Oh…thanks…I'm flattered…is that the right word? Yes, Kikyo might die…still not sure if I should do that or torture her a lot!

jiarra
2005-03-27
ch 12, anonymous

do rin/fluffy

Ok, got the vote but you'll have to wait for the voting to be over, ok?

ImmortalSlayers
2005-03-27
ch 12, signed

FLuffy/Kagura

Got your vote, wrote it down, and there we go!

fluffyrachel
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

Wow! Really creative plot! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
your new fan,
fluffyrachel

Thanks, I thought the plot was good to.

jojo
2005-03-26
ch 12, anonymous

i wanna vote for fluffy/rin !

Ok, got it down…but…you know they might not be together? It might be fluffykins and Kagura…both are close.

blue-buggy
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

Well, it cerntainly took you a while. But it was great as always! Keep going!

I know…school work….SO MUCH PAPER!

Lana L.
2005-03-26
ch 12, anonymous

Add another vote for Fluffy/Rin please.

Ok, thanks, I'll make another tally.

KagomeKissez
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

I enjoyed this chapter. I also can't wait to see Inuyasha's reaction when/if he ever finds out that Kagome is a princess. Update soon!

I hope that you like this chapter to.

InuYasha-luver235
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

hey i still love ur story and yeah im registerd at NeoPets my username is blazegirl149 if u wanna talk to me there u can! and i have a guild to! do u know HTML? I do anywayz back to the story its really good and yeah! im tired so i cant think right now!
Luv
Mandi

Ok, thanks for the name! No…HTML will be the death of me, I know it!

Keyo-Red Angel of Hope
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

Put me down for MirokuxSango please. I do so love them.

Nice chapter, just the thing to help cure a sad mood. Keep up the good work.

Ok, got it down. Oh, I cured your sad mood?  good, I hate it when people are sad.

817
2005-03-26
ch 12, anonymous

i vote for .. drum rolls fluffy/rin !

drum roll ok!

Asahi Minako
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

Yay! How about... Shippou and Sailor Chibi Moon! bwahahahahaha! (Sailor Mini Moon) sorry... I couldn't help myself... I'm on Neopets! Kougragirl9 Yay! you added sailor moon into the fic (okay it was mentioned but it makes me happy just the same!) (Um yeah I have issues)
-Suki (love)
Minako

Ok, me going to make a new vote! Shippou and Chibi Moon! Think anyone will vote for it? Lol, thanks for the review!

Lil'Ally
2005-03-26
ch 6, signed

i 4got to say something before i cud submit from chappie 11 sry, um... i noe i keep telling u about mi stories but i juss want u to read it, um... i hab a new story called,"Since I Have You" ok? well bye:D:)

I read it…I'm not sure if I reviwed though…can't remember…

Lil'Ally
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

finally u update! where the hell were u! anyway great chappie! update soon!

I had school work…heeheehee. I hate school work…love school though…

Phalon22
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

Wow great chapter, maybe Kags can call Sango. Inuyasha did say she could do ANYTHING whe wanted after all. Update soon!

I vote for:
Fluffy/Rin
Inuyasha/Kags(obviously)
Kikyou/Naraku
Miroku/Sango

Yeah…but still, she is a little afraid still…so…whatever…

shikonjewelsdarkshadow
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

Yay, you finally updated :-) You play neopets? so do I :-) I also registered at Anime Crave :-) sigh, me and my smiley faces :-)

Oh, cool, what names are you under? On neopets and on anime crave. Neopets: moonbeamchan. Anime crave: Nene.

Phalon22
2005-03-24
ch 11, signed

Wow great chapters! I hope you post more of this story. Love the fluff. Great that Inuyasha has her free-like. Maybe he should look into setting her free some how. Please update soon!

I'm thinking about that but I'm not going to give anything away.

rosabel
2005-03-21
ch 11, anonymous

i think the rin/fluffy pairing fits better with this story

If it gets the most votes then sure, that'll be the pairing.

dracochick
2005-03-21
ch 11, signed

yay! you updated! Hmm... it wold be interesting if the wolf that howled was Koga.
You are an awesome writer! It'll be interesting to know what happens with Kagome without a shirt! This chapter mad me laugh so hard! I love your writing! Keep up the good work!

Oh, you might just be right about that…but me not going to say! Oh, thanks! Your reviews are always so inspiring! Heeheehee!

Akihanah
2005-03-21
ch 11, signed

Ah, thats sweet. Kawai. Anyways, back on track. yea, the chapters are short, but thats ok. Lets see, i think i am one oft he few non Kikyo haters around here, ne? Not that I want her to fall in love with Naraku...ugh...shudder. Lets see, I'm all for Kagura Sesshomaru pairing too. Well, till next time.

I know that chappies are short…I don't want to make you all mad about me and taking to long…'' Ok, thanks for the vote…yeah…you might just be the only one here who doesn't hate that soul sucking bitch…

gUrLuShkagOme
2005-03-20
ch 11, anonymous

You ROCK! The story is awesome! I cant quit reading it...although it's 3 in the morning... (and my moms telling me to stop)... its interesting and well... i have to admit...I hate cliffhangers... i love your story so please...please...UPDATE as soon as you can! I wanna know of what will happen next...and curiousity is killing me! Anyways I have lots of school stuff to do 2morrow... so I think I need some sleep... by d' way... i want everybody to know that... i hate kikyo as much as others do!

Yeah, I do the same thing…stay up late reading. No, you can't die! You have to finish the story! . Anyways…yeah, another Kikyo hater!

shikonjewelsdarkshadow
2005-03-19
ch 9, signed

You didn't update sfter chapter 11 FOR SO LONG, please update, ps. This review was supposed to be on chapter 11, but I reviewed that thing already and I got rejected :-)

I know…I've had so much school work lately, as I have already said millions of times. I think that they should let us review the same chapter at least two times, ya know?

KagomeKissez
2005-03-18
ch 11, signed

OMG THIS IS GREAT and so mysterious. I really really like this story, update soon. Hey i'm working on one called: Suffering Soul, The locket and the fang. check it out if you want. Keep up the good work.

Sorry, I don't think I've looked at them yet…I'll look at them now though, ok?

Inuyasha2435605
2005-03-17
ch 11, signed

Please update and I want more fluf! OR ELSE...

No, me no want to be hurted! j/k Wow…threats over the Internet…isn't that scary? Heeheehee. " I'm going crazy!

shikonjewelsdarkshadow
2005-03-26
ch 12, signed

Yay, you finally updated :-) You play neopets? so do I :-) I also registered at Anime Crave :-) sigh, me and my smiley faces :-)

Oh, cool, what names are you under? On neopets and on anime crave. Neopets: moonbeamchan. Anime crave: Nene.

Phalon22
2005-03-24
ch 11, signed

Wow great chapters! I hope you post more of this story. Love the fluff. Great that Inuyasha has her free-like. Maybe he should look into setting her free some how. Please update soon!

I'm thinking about that but I'm not going to give anything away.

rosabel
2005-03-21
ch 11, anonymous

i think the rin/fluffy pairing fits better with this story

If it gets the most votes then sure, that'll be the pairing.

dracochick
2005-03-21
ch 11, signed

yay! you updated! Hmm... it wold be interesting if the wolf that howled was Koga.
You are an awesome writer! It'll be interesting to know what happens with Kagome without a shirt! This chapter mad me laugh so hard! I love your writing! Keep up the good work!

Oh, you might just be right about that…but me not going to say! Oh, thanks! Your reviews are always so inspiring! Heeheehee!

Akihanah
2005-03-21
ch 11, signed

Ah, thats sweet. Kawai. Anyways, back on track. yea, the chapters are short, but thats ok. Lets see, i think i am one oft he few non Kikyo haters around here, ne? Not that I want her to fall in love with Naraku...ugh...shudder. Lets see, I'm all for Kagura Sesshomaru pairing too. Well, till next time.

I know that chappies are short…I don't want to make you all mad about me and taking to long…'' Ok, thanks for the vote…yeah…you might just be the only one here who doesn't hate that soul sucking bitch…

gUrLuShkagOme
2005-03-20
ch 11, anonymous

You ROCK! The story is awesome! I cant quit reading it...although it's 3 in the morning... (and my moms telling me to stop)... its interesting and well... i have to admit...I hate cliffhangers... i love your story so please...please...UPDATE as soon as you can! I wanna know of what will happen next...and curiousity is killing me! Anyways I have lots of school stuff to do 2morrow... so I think I need some sleep... by d' way... i want everybody to know that... i hate kikyo as much as others do!

Yeah, I do the same thing…stay up late reading. No, you can't die! You have to finish the story! . Anyways…yeah, another Kikyo hater!

shikonjewelsdarkshadow
2005-03-19
ch 9, signed

You didn't update sfter chapter 11 FOR SO LONG, please update, ps. This review was supposed to be on chapter 11, but I reviewed that thing already and I got rejected :-)

I know…I've had so much school work lately, as I have already said millions of times. I think that they should let us review the same chapter at least two times, ya know?

KagomeKissez
2005-03-18
ch 11, signed

OMG THIS IS GREAT and so mysterious. I really really like this story, update soon. Hey i'm working on one called: Suffering Soul, The locket and the fang. check it out if you want. Keep up the good work.

Sorry, I don't think I've looked at them yet…I'll look at them now though, ok?

Inuyasha2435605
2005-03-17
ch 11, signed

Please update and I want more fluf! OR ELSE...

No, me no want to be hurted! j/k Wow…threats over the Internet…isn't that scary? Heeheehee. " I'm going crazy!

Miko of Pure Souls
2005-03-15
ch 11, signed

I totally luv your story! Oh my gosh! The whole dog-ear purring thing is so kawaii! Hope you'll update soon! I'll be waiting!

Lol, I thought that it was cute to! Here's the update!

shikonjewelsdarkshadow
2005-03-15
ch 11, signed

update, please! maybe I should say this nicely and slowly,
U P D A T E:-)

Oh, that's mean! Wait…I'm…not…slow…I think…huh? Lol, just kidding!

ArwenRivendell
2005-03-15
ch 11, signed

gawk come on now! I love fluffiness as much as the next gal but COME ON! ok so when do u plan on updating? by the way, when i was singing, i kept wanting to say this, but i was stuck on the song, you are very creative with how many ways you say "chapter" n' stuff, its fun...

Yeah and the whole insomniac thing... im suppose to be finishing a project and its 3 am, so thanks for the pick me up... much better than coffee... coffee blak!

Heehee, fluffiness good! Here's the next chappi! You were stuck? Oh…that's not good…anyways, thanks for the review! I love being an insomniac! Oh, I'm glad…you must stay awake to read more!

ArwenRivendell
2005-03-15
ch 10, signed

was still singing SING IT HIGH SING IT LOW... AND SHE'S NOT ONLY MEERLY DEAD SHE'S REALLY MOST SINCERELY- (music comes to a halt)

RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!
(I'm having way too much fun with this...)

Hahaha, run run run! We're all gonna die!

ArwenRivendell
2005-03-15
ch 9, signed

YAY breaks into song DING DONG THE BTCH IS DEAD THE WITCH OLD BTCH THE WICKED WITCH... DING DONG THE WICKED BTCH IS DEAD

Well gone at least...

sings along with no one since it's been a while since this review was made… DING DONG THE BITCH IS DEAD THE WITCH OLD BITCH THE WICKED WITCH... DING DONG THE WICKED BITCH IS DEAD! Yeah, dead would be better.

ArwenRivendell
2005-03-15
ch 8, signed

RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! THE QUEEN OF GIRLIE DITZ'S HAS RETURNED! (LOL LOL LOL)

AHHHH! It's the apocalypse!

ArwenRivendell
2005-03-15
ch 3, signed

LUV how you kept inuyasha's violent character about... i usually end up softening him up, but my stuff is usually... well ya, me likey

Oh, thanks! You're so kind to likey!

ArwenRivendell
2005-03-15
ch 2, signed

WOW did you just make Kikyo the girliest ditz ever... I LOVE IT! LOL!

Thanks…it was totally what I was going for! She's such an idiot to!

Kagome's girl
2005-03-14
ch 11, signed

MIROKU! GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME AND TAKE YOUR GOD DAMN PERVERTED MIND AND THUGHTS WITH YOU!

Um…whatever…please don't cuss in the review…mostly because you are not Kagome and also because I'd just like it if you didn't. Unless you have good reason to…like I was an idiot about something…then you can cuss…just don't…well pretend as though you are Kagome and say this…it pisses me off to no end.

kaginu
2005-03-13
ch 11, anonymous

keep writing! love the story!

Ok, here is the next chapter! Yes, I'll keep writing!

blue-buggy
2005-03-13
ch 11, signed

Keep writing!

Ok, and here is the next chapter!

Anonymous miss
2005-03-13
ch 11, signed

hahahaha, cliffhanger, was freaking.. hilarious! this story is so funny, and its so sweet too... inuyasha is such a sweetheart! lol, and yeah, uMM... update soon! because this story rocks!

I know, I thought the cliff hanger might freak a few people out…and I think that it did! Thanks, here is another chapter!

chena
2005-03-12
ch 11, anonymous

go with rin/fluffy

Ok, got your vote. I'll make sure of that if they have the highest votes, kays?

Inuyasha's Yuki
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

Oh I LOVE THIS! is hopping up in down (I'm hyper at the moment) I know this might be asking a bit(whole lot) too much but...blushes Well there be lemon later? thinks 'Great I'm embarrising myself! GAH!' I know I should be so hentai, but I can't seem to help it right now. 'Now I'm even making myself even more embarrased! Just shut up and apolegize!' I'm sorry! You don't have to heh! smacks herself for asking and bows to the writer Gomenisai Lord Neo Staff! 'Ok, now I know that I've gotten too much into this story.' Until next time Ja ne.

It's ok, don't be embaressed! I was thinking about putting one in, even though that's not the sort of thing that I like to write…I thought that it might just go with the story…but…since doesn't allow them I might not be able to. Haha, it's ok, all right? Anyways, just in case you didn't know, I'm a girl…heeheehee.

The Soultaker
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

Well in most cases this one day love thing really sucks but then there comes a story like yours (which I do really like) and let's the character acknowledge that they have in fact fallen in love in a single day and I really like the way that you've put it too. well Overall the story is good and no one seems out of character so it makes it even better. It's also pretty funny with all the situations that they're put in and now Kagome wakes up topless. But there is one thing that makes me wantr to scream at time and that would be a cliffhager and you have way too many of them. Although it just makes me eager to read the next chapter. Well that's it I guess. Update soon.

Sorry about all of the cliffies…I'm cliff happy? It's a new illness! Anyways, thanks! I'm happy happy that you like it! Here is another chapter for you!

kargralover
2005-03-12
ch 5, signed

so boring (sorry) you need to makeit more exciting

How about you shut up? Because with all of the other reviews that I've gotten, well, it really doesn't seem boring to me. So, how about you shut you trap and be quiet and I'll forget all about you?

Lin of the water
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

o... I hate chiifhangers but this story is worth it

I know, I hate cliff hangers to…but it makes people want to read it more…I think…heeheehee.

souless one
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

your chapters are too short and you need to write in paragraph form because trying to read your story hurts my eyes but, the plot is interesting you just need to develope it more. your story is also interesting but you need to add a little more detail to your stories. one more thing, you said inuyashas mother got him a huge house and that there where lots of rooms in it, but there wasnt another bedroom that kagome could have stayed in? i mean who buys a mansion with only one bedroom? its ludicrous. anyway, maybe this will help you or maybe it will hurt you but , your story aint so bad so, please update soon. thanks

sincerely, Souless one

For one, I know the chapter are to short…I don't have a lot of time in my days so, well, yeah. And 2, I do write in paragraph form…something must just be wrong with your computer. Well, yes, there are other rooms…but none of them had and furniture or anything in them. He's not done moving in, as I will say later, so there was no sheets or anything on the bed.

souless one
2005-03-12
ch 1, signed

mm

Big help…

Sarcasm Girl8
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

This is such an awesome fic I hope you update soon and that my votes helped you somewhat.

Yep, they'll help!

Sarcasm Girl8
2005-03-12
ch 10, signed

Awesome story so far and i vote for souten/shippou. I Love your story.

Thanks, and I've got your vote! Thanks a lot again!

Sarcasm Girl8
2005-03-12
ch 8, signed

Your really good at cliffhangers. Awesome chapter.

Thanks, the cliffies are mostly because everyone wants chapters fast.

Sarcasm Girl8
2005-03-12
ch 6, signed

Awesome i completely agree with kikyo and naraku but kikyo isn't necessarily(sp?) evil. Just annoying

right…she want to take over the world, though she never says it, and you call her not evil…lol, whatever.

Sarcasm Girl8
2005-03-12
ch 4, signed

If your still excepting votes,
Rin/Khoahku
Fluffy/Kagura
Awesome story

Yes, I am, thanks for the votes.

Sarcasm Girl8
2005-03-12
ch 2, signed

Are you still taking votes? If you are I go for Sango/Miroku

Yep, and thanks for the voting!

InuYasha-luver235
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

keep writing!

Kays, here is the next one for you!

fanficfein
2005-03-12
ch 11, anonymous

more! very good. bye

Haha, you sound like my little cousins! More more more more more more! Heeheehee, thanks for the review!

evilteddybear
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

Update PLEASE!
I like this story a lot because you have done the impossible, keep Inuyasha in character without making him seem like a jerk. Bravo! I also like Kagome's personality in this one, which is rare, because I usually don't in fanfics, they make her bland and boring. Thanx for writing and keep up the good work!

Thanks, I tried to add a little spice into the mix!

Keyo-Red Angel of Hope
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

This is gonna lead to certain people thinking certain things...

Who'll walk in? His mum or Miroku?

Yet another great chapter, I really, really enjoy this. Your work really cheers me up. Keep up the high standards and have a nice day

Oh, they aren't there any more…I said that they left. Thanks, I'm glad. Heres another chappi for ya!

Mitsue
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

Wow that was a good story so keep it up1
p.s. sesshomaru & rin if you don't mind

Ok, I will! Got the vote, thanks!

Neo Staff (ME!)
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

Neo: I'm reviewing my self...thats sad.
Aoyama: Yep, it is. At least your getting reviews, though.
Neo: Huh? What do ya mean?
Aoyama: Well, no one knows about my fanfics so they're not reviewing me!
Neo: Oh...that sucks...
Aoyama: Ya think?
Neo: Yes, as a matter of fact I do.
Aoyama: (mutters) Doesn't seem like it.
Neo: (Pulls out Reaper, her sword) Wanna say that again, Aoyama?
Aoyama: NO! I didn't say anyhting, just talking to my self.
Neo: Great! Kagome has a Master who talks to him self and I have a sister, not really but close enough, that talks to her self! My life can't get any weirder...
Aoyama: Yeah it can...
Neo: What do you man?
Aoyama:...Look behind you.
Neo: (Looks behind herself and sees her brother playing with her weapons) Changa! Those arn't for you to play with! You might hurt your self and I don't want that! There'll be such a big mess!
Changa: Stupid head sister!
Neo and Aoyama: We're not stupid heads!
Changa: Right...
Neo: Come here you little...
Aoyama: Yeah!
Neo and Aoyama: (They chase Changa then Neo stops in front of the...review thing...)
Neo: Sorry folks! This might take a moment...See you all laterz!
Neo and Aoyama and Changa: BYE!
Neo to Changa: You're so dead.
Changa: Crap...not again...

This is sad…I reviewed myself…cries I'm such an idiot!

sun-kissed-rose433
2005-03-12
ch 11, signed

Update!

Ok, I did! Here is the chappi!

AniNagFreak
2005-03-08
ch 10, anonymous

I love your story.I vote Miroku and Sango to be a couple, and don't worry we all make speling mistakes.I think Kikyo should like kidnap Sango to lure Kagome into a trap.ookies bye

Oh, that's a great idea, I'll have to think about that…thanks, glad you like it!

dracochick
2005-03-08
ch 10, signed

AWESOME!-as usual.

  You really think so?

dracochick
2005-03-08
ch 9, signed

Yeah... you got me strted on Gryffin-gal. Shes an awesome writer... and so are you! update, update... UPDATE!

I did? Oh, good, cause I realy like her fanfics! Thanks, I'm happy to hear…see…that you said that…typed that…I'm confused!

dracochick
2005-03-08
ch 8, signed

Ha ha! Youve got Miroku casted perfectly! Omg, omg, my sides hurt from laughing! Keep it up :)

Oh, don't get hurt to much, you have to read this next chapter and tell me what you think!

shikonjewelsdarkshadow
2005-03-08
ch 10, signed

I don't understand how anyone could write so much, for me, just chapters are too much.

Oh…well…I can't understand it either. I love writing but I'm not to good with having a lot of time.

angelicjapgurl
2005-03-07
ch 10, signed

Love It Like Yeah! Update Soon!

Ok, heres another update! Tell me what you think, please! I have to know!

blue-buggy
2005-03-07
ch 10, signed

Ek! Screams in deilight You better keep writing!
I mean it!

Ok, here is another chappie for you! Yep yep, me is going to keep writing for a while!

Kasatka
2005-03-07
ch 10, anonymous

lol, great chapter! Update soon please!

Thanks, love the review, here's another chappi.

Shadow Of A Lost Soul
2005-03-07
ch 10, signed

Hi i really like your story! i'm adding it to my favorite lists cause it is soo good! I vote for fluffy/kagura. there a good couple. please update soon i really wanna see what happens well later!

Oh, thanks! I love being on people fav list!

demonslayer206
2005-03-07
ch 10, anonymous

keep going. i hate being left in suspense 4 too long

Oh, sorry, so do I.

Anonymous miss
2005-03-07
ch 10, signed

hey, freaking awesome chapter! that was so funny, with the part about kagome changing... aw.. and yeah, freaking greta! update soon! this story rocks...

thanks! I thought it was sort of cute to.

The Forgoten Child
2005-03-07
ch 10, signed

I vote for Miroku/Sango and Rin/Kohaku ohh and be the way THIS STORY ROCKS ! I LOVE IT ( lol)

Thanks for the votes, I've got them down. Oh, and thank you, I'm hapy happy that you like it.

smokie
2005-03-06
ch 10, signed

write more soon

Ok, I did, here is the next chapter.

acrony
2005-03-06
ch 10, anonymous

fluffy/rin please

They got the highest vote, so ok.

Asahi Minako
2005-03-06
ch 10, signed

Wow... I don't know how I'm typing this... In my little rubber room... still in my straight jacket... anyone have pocky? um... BREAKS OUT OF STRAIGHT JACKET AND MURDERS NARAKU AND KIKYOU (do you plan on killing them off in this story?) 0 LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPPIE! by the way... LOVE the preview 0 it practically gave away the rest of the story! but I like when Inu says " " (lol can't you tell I'm hyper?) YAY for you and your awesome story preview!
-suki
Minako 0

Oh, little rubber room! o.O O.o O.O o.o I might kill them off…though…I might also plan to torture them a lot to. Yep, I'm hyper to! To much SUGAR! SUGAR? Where? Who said sugar? Lol, thanks for the review!

rena
2005-03-06
ch 10, anonymous

i like your story and even if i do not review often i am still reading it. Keep going and upsate soon.

Ok, as long as you keep reading I'm happy.

InuYasha-luver235
2005-03-06
ch 10, signed

lol glad to see u hate Kikyo too i call her Clay Pot!
anywayz luv ur story keep writing and can u write some more on that one with kagome and she has the dreams and then Miroku comfrots her?
Wait mabye i got the wrong author srry if i did!
Luv
Mandi

Yeah, another who calls her that! No, you got the right author…but…I'm sort of focused on this story at the moment…sorry. I'll update that one as soon as I can, though, ok?

SESSHYS LIL HOTTIE
2005-03-06
ch 1, signed

Sorry i didn't read the chappie yet but i gotta get of my computer so i will read it later

Oh, it's ok, I know you'll read it later.

Lil'Ally
2005-03-06
ch 10, signed

damn u! y u always make da chapters short! wha! anyways update soon! g2g! bye bye!

P.S. hab a new story called,"Shikon Hills"

sorry, I don't have much time on my hands lately. I know, I saw…and I think I've read most of it by now.

Sedaika
2005-03-06
ch 10, signed

first things first, Make longer chapters... Next the voting thing...rigghtt. Don't get me wrong, i'm here in my chair wiggling for the next chapter. Love the plot line!

Ok, I will. ? what do you mean rigghtt? Wiggle wiggle wiggle!

chura
2005-03-06
ch 10, anonymous

please go with rin/fluffy

they got the highest votes, and the most votes at that, so I will.

Keyo-Red Angel of Hope
2005-03-06
ch 10, signed

Excellent as always. I hope Kikyo broke something too
This story is nice and sweet, but not too sappy. Needs more fluff though. Keep up the great standard.

I'll put some more fluffyness in soon.

sun-kissed-rose433
2005-03-06
ch 9, signed

hey you weren't supossed to leave a cliff hanger! no fair! lol well hurry and update soon i'm really getting into your story

sorry, wont happen again! fingures are crossed heeheehee, she'll never notice!

InuYasha-luver235
2005-03-06
ch 9, signed

heheheh whtas gonn happen?

You'll see!

ImmortalSlayers
2005-03-06
ch 10, signed

lol i was reading chapter nine and all of a sudden there was a chapter 10

lol, aren't you glad that you got to see what heppened?

PixiePam
2005-03-06
ch 10, signed

This is really good. I hope that you update soon and since I hadn't read your story in awhile because I had lost it I got to read like 4 chapters so I'm happy. This is a good story adn this plot is different and these are the parrings I like: Kouga/Ayame Kag/Inu Miroku/Sango and I don't really care who Kikyo is paired up with or Seshomaru, Sota, Rin, Kagura, Naraku, Hojo... and the list goes on and on but I'll just give you those people. Hope you update soon this is a really good story!

Ok, thanks for the votes! Oh, you lost it…that sucks…glad you found it agianthough!

Anonymous miss
2005-03-06
ch 9, signed

hey, great new chapter! i love it.. its so funny! hehehehe, and yeah... update soon!

Thanks, I was hopeing for a little bit of funnyness.

Kasatka
2005-03-06
ch 9, anonymous

Great story! Update soon please!

Thanks, next update right here!

mara
2005-03-06
ch 10, anonymous

i like fluffy/rin

ok, thanks, I got ya down…they won so they will be together as well.

Well, that's all for now. Yes, I know that I didn't get to a lot of you, but I really wanted to put this chapter up! Also, I have over 290 reviews...it's going to take a while to respond to them all!

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