Readers please read!
Okay this isn't the next chapter but I need some great reviewers and writers help.
I wrote a new story but like only one person reviewed it so if you don't mind could you please stop by and read the first two chapters that are posted and tell me what you think the problem is.
After a get reviews with some tips I'm planning on deleting the story and revising it then I will post it again later to see if I get any better reviews. On the story.
Here is the name summary and link please read the story and let me know anything I can do to fix it.
Just Friends or more?
Summery: When an old friend of Raven shows up and brings back Raven's past will her and this friend be just friends or will they be more but what will Robin think? Please R&R and I'll update. Pairings: Rob and Rae
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