Chapter 16
Vows and Memories
Note: I have changed Flamedramon's appearance since I realized improvements were needed so I suggest you go back and read the last bit of Chapter 15 of Flamedramon's change before continuing on to read this chapter
"Hello Miss Osman?" Shibumi said as he leaned back in his office chair from his lab at Hypno HQ. He had spent most of the night studying Wayne coding and intrigued by the complicity, and arrangement of it. It was quite amazing, but still he couldn't find a cure for Wayne's transformation, and was now phoning his mother. It was wrong to do this without the young man's permission, but still during the day, Shibumi had watched the news seeing the mother cry her tears on camera asking for information of her missing son. Thankfully, it was 12am now making it in the afternoon where the United Kingdom, and wouldn't be phoning her like in the middle of the night.
"Yes, who's this?" a female voice came over the phone.
"Hello this is Shibumi, I am phoning regarding your missing son Wayne."
"Look I will not answer anymore questions to you bastard from the media. If you need to know how I feel just go copy the notes from another news group because I still feel the same so just leave me alone!"
"Oh no no I'm calling from Japan." Shibumi said trying to calm her.
"Oh great now Japan wants to get a piece of the poor mother in sadness I just want my son back, but no you news guys don't give a shit!" she said sniffling with tears Shibumi guessed, "Just leave me alone…"
"Miss Osman I am phoning to tell you we found your son." He said before she could hang up the phone. There was a long silent on the phone and for a moment, Shibumi thought she had hung up.
"You…you found him? Where is he? Please tell me." She said with her voice filled with hope and happiness.
"Like I said, I am phoning from Hypno, a government agency in Japan and we found your son a week ago in a park."
"In a park, but why would he be there in Japan and in a park?" she asked with confusion, "Never mind, please can I speak with him?"
"I'm sorry Miss Osman, but he's not here at the moment, and well…he's different." Shibumi added feeling a sinking feeling cross him.
"Different? Is he alright?!" she said with worry.
"He's fine don't worry just…when we found him he…actually it would be better if you came down to see him."
"Mr. Shibumi your words don't sound very comforting could you please tell me this isn't a joke…did you really find my son?'
"This is no joke mam. We found Wayne unharmed, but it would be best for you to come and get him. Hypno will pay for all the expenses for your flight. What time would be best for you to come?"
"I..I'll come as soon as possible." She said with both high hopes and sniffles in her voice. By Shibumi's guess she was overwhelmed with happiness.
"Alright, Miss Osman I will tell your son you're on your way, and I'll see you tomorrow if all things go well."
"Mr. Shibumi…"
"Call me just Shibumi." He said with a smile.
"Shibumi…thank you for all this I will see you soon."
"Alright good night mam." Shibumi said with a smile as he hung up the phone. "Well everything seems to be right so far. All I have to do now is find a cure." Shibumi turned on a monitor, looked at the numbers of Wayne's coding, and sighed. "This is probably going to take a lot of coffee to figure out." He mumbled and started to type on his keyboard.
KaiserFlamedramon…
Flame moved a bit as he opened his eyes to the sunlight creeping into the window. He turned his face to his side to see Renamon sleeping beside him with one of her arms over his chest. She looked so peaceful as she continued to sleep causing Flame to smile. "Like an angel." He whispered as he kissed her cheek causing her to stir a bit and sigh with content. She opened her eyes slightly and smiled at her new mate.
"Good morning." She whispered kissing him back.
"Same to you." He replied stroking her cheek with his hand. "Did you sleep well?"
"Mmm…very." She said pushing her cheek into his smooth hand.
"Good I'm very happy." Renamon smiled at him and sat up at bit in the bed.
"So now…were mates right?" she said being a bit nervous.
"Yeah unless last night was…a trail run." He kidded which caused them both to blush.
The two digimon smiled, and they kissed one another lightly on the lips. "By the way you were amazing last night." He whispered into her fox ear.
"So where you dragon boy." She chuckled as Flame nibbled her neck in affection, "But…how do we tell the others about this?"
Flame stopped his affection and looked at Renamon remembering the tamers. "Yeah…it's kind of going to be a shocker that well…we are mates now to them."
Renamon nodded, "Yeah especially for Rika…she never thought I well could love someone. I didn't realize that myself."
"Well it's nice to be the mon that changed that." Flame smirked, but got a playfully slap from Renamon.
"Don't be a smart mon now just because we are mates. I have certain standards you know." She said smirking.
"I guess I will have to keep your standards in mind." He whispered cuddling her closer causing a chuckle to escape Renamon.
"Even as a powerful digimon you can still be weird."
"Why thank you…love." He said kissing her deeply once more, and then pulling back slightly. "We should get up before Rika or anyone else wonders where we are." He said as he turned to get out of the bed, but he felt Renamon touch his arm.
"Just a few more minutes Flame please?" Flame looked into her beautiful eyes and smiled once again. "Alright." He replied hugging her once more.
Rika…
Rika stretched her arms out as she sat up in bed, and walked to her change room. She had promised Davis she would up his card classes to the mornings on the weekends now since with the latest attacks, and wanted to get dress before he came over. As she started to put on a par of jeans she noticed Renamon's bed was empty. "Uhm must have gone out to the roof to watch the sunset." She thought throwing her shirt on top of her and brushing her hair. She looked at her face for a moment and took her hair and put it into a pony tail with spiked ends. She smiled at her look now seeing her old hairstyle was something she liked. "I'll go with this for now." She said making her way to the outside door and pushing it open. "Hey Renamon, you coming in for something to eat?" she called out, but no answer came back. "Renamon you up there?" she added moving into the courtyard and looking up to the roof. However, the kitsune was no where to be found. "That's odd…" she said walking back into the house, and looking at Renamon's bed. That's when she noticed that the sheets of the bed had not been moved at all. They were still tucked in and cleaned showing no signs that anyone had even slept in it. "She didn't even go to bed? Where is she then?" she thought worriedly, but soon heard the door knock at the front. She quickly got to the door and saw Davis standing there with his deck in hand, and a tired expression.
"8 am just like you said." He muttered in a tired tone, "Where do we start?"
"Not right now Davis, I have a bigger problem."
"Like what?" he yawned.
"Renamon is missing?" Davis eyes went alert at the news and placed his cards in his pocket.
"Have you checked around the house?" Rika nodded with a worried look.
"I just don't know where she could be…it's so unlike her to do this."
"Let's ask Flame. Maybe he'll know where she is."
"Alright." Rika said quickly walking down the hallway to the guest room. "I just hope he knows where she is." Rika added.
"If I know Flame he'll be able to find anyone in a second." He said just as he pulled open the door to Flame's room. The two stared at the bed wide eyes as Rika saw her digimon holding Flamedramon in a loving embrace under a sheet of blanket.
"And I guess he knows where she is." Davis finished off causing Flame and Renamon to wake up and look at the two tamers. Rika's hand shook a bit and her temper boiled. "What the hell!" her voice yelled echoing throughout the house.
Minutes later after KaiserFlamedramon and Renamon got their clothes on…..
'I know this must be a surprise to you both." Flame said as stilled tried to get over the embarrassment of being caught with Renamon in bed by his tamer and Rika. "And we we're going to tell you…"
"We just found it well hard to come up with the right time to." Renamon said holding Flame's hand in hers, and looking at Rika for approval. Rika looked at Flamedramon sternly. "So the right time was for us to walk in while you two are sleeping together?"
"No Rika…I'm sorry that had to happen, but we were going to tell you all about us this morning." Renamon said feeling somewhat ashamed for Rika for seeing her like that.
"Well I don't have a problem with this at all." Davis interrupted, "Sure it's a surprise that you are together, but it's your own privacy, and we shouldn't say anything bad about it. Right Rika?"
Rika looked at her partner and could tell that the once stern and emotionless Renamon that she knew for so long wasn't there anymore. Instead, it was now a Renamon that was filled with emotions, and worry for her judgement on the relationship she had with the dark dragon that now held her hand closely.
"I guess…just this is a surprise for the books." Renamon nodded to her tamers, and looked at Flame then back to Rika.
"Yeah it is…but Rika I don't want you to be angry at me for…for what I feel." Rika chuckled at her words causing everyone including Renamon to look in confusion.
"Rika? What's so funny?" she asked.
"Nothing Renamon just...every since we met you have always been like my mother watching over me. Being protective, watching who I associated with. Just now…the way you're talking to me. It's like I'm the mother now, and you asking for my blessing on your new found relationship." She added with a smile.
The kitsune smiled at her tamer and nodded.
"Well…it depends on him." She said looking KaiserFlamedramon, "Tell me Flame…do you love her as much as you say?"
Flame blinked and nodded, "Of course I love her. I would risk my life again to keep her safe."
"Is that on your word as a digimon?" Rika questioned as she took the look of a mother once more.
'Yes that is my word." Flame said holding Renamon's hand with his.
Rika smiled and stood up from the table. "Well then I see no reason for you two not to be together, and I congratulate you both."
"Thank you Rika." Renamon said looking at her tamer with appreciated eyes.
"It's alright. Why don't you and your new love go out and train or something. I have to teach Davis some new lessons in cards." Renamon nodded and stood with KaiserFlamedramon.
"Rika…" Flame started causing Rika to look at him. "Thank you for approving"
"Just go and enjoy your selves." The two digimon smiled and nodded and quickly left the room to go out and train.
Rika closed the door and grabbed her cards from night table that was inside her bedroom.
"Hey Rika, that was well nice of you to do that. Flame has had a crush on Renamon for a long time and it's good you accepted him."
"You knew he liked her!" Rika suddenly yelled, "Why didn't you tell me!"
However, Davis didn't answer her question as he was already running down the hallway with Rika in hot pursuit.
"Get back here goggle brains!"
ShinjukuPark…
"Uhh you guys sure about this?" Wayne said as he watched Guilmon holding up a large cardboard target that Terriermon has made the night before. "Monmentai Waynemon." The bunny digimon said as he hoped up to a tree branch to get a better view of the area.
"Uhh Terriermon I hold the target like this?" Guilmon mumbled as he tried to hold the target up in the air stumbling sometimes.
"Yup Guilmon heheh." Terriermon giggled, "Now hold it still that's it. Now Waynemon-"
"It's Wayne." The Raidramon interrupted.
"Wayne fine. Now you're going to send an attack at that target, and burn it."
"But how do I attack?" Wayne questioned.
"Well you just picture energy inside you and try to concentrate it into a single moment." Terriermon said bouncing to the ground beside Wayne. Wayne blinked at Terriermon's words and titled his head.
"Just close your eyes and concentrate!" Terriermon yelled.
"Uh okay…" Wayne slowly closed his eyes and started to concentrate on an attack. At first nothing happened, and for a moment Wayne thought Terriermon was joking with him, when suddenly a feeling passed over his new digimon body. It was not a bad feeling, but an odd one that seem to bring power into every cell of his body, and it started to grow.
Terrimon smiled as he saw small blots of electricity spark along the Raidramon's body signalling his attack powering up. "Got to admit he catches on quick." He said as he watched Wayne become engulf in a blue aura of lighting.
As this was all taking place, Guilmon was moving around feeling a bit bored at holding the target up for so long. He was about to say something when he noticed a flower behind his foot that he had never seen before. It was white with beautiful blue ends on it's peddles, and its aroma was intriguing to him. "Hmmm pretty." Guilmon said as he put the target down and bent down to sniff the flower with his back to the still powering up Raidramon.
Terriermon looked over and saw this causing his eyes to bug out. "Wayne! Don't fire! Don't Fire!" the bunny digimon cried out to the Raidramon.
Wayne heard Terriermon's voice and he opened his eyes to see Guilmon was bending down not holding the target up. He had to stop the attack! The power surged through his digimon body even more now as his attack build to its limits. "I can't stop it!" Wayne cried out as his body surged with more power. "Blue Thunder!"
A surge of blue electricity flared out from Wayne and headed towards the red dino that was bent over. "Guilmon get down!" Terriermon shouted.
"Huh? Uh oh." Guilmon muttered as the attack hit him right in the backside causing him to scream and run around with his steam coming from his behind.
"Hot hot hot!" Guilmon yelled waving his claws around as he tried to find something to cool down. Terriermon was on the ground laughing at the sight of a big dino like Guilmon running around like a chicken.
"Guilmon go for the lake!" Wayne yelled hoping his new friend wasn't hurt that bad from his attack. Guilmon jumped into the lake with a sigh as the cold water-cooled his burn.
"You okay Guilmon?" Wayne asked with worry.
"Yup me ca okay. Water feels nice." Guilmon answered.
"Guilmon has a pretty thick skin so I doubt your attack hurt him, but just…gave him a set of hot buns." Terriermon giggled, but soon felt Guilmon grab him by the ears pulling him into water with him.
"Guilmon!" the bunny digimon cried out as his fur was drenched.
Wayne laughed along with Guilmon as they saw Terriermon walking out of the water shaking his ears.
"That was fun Waynemon, and you ca did a proper attack." Guilmon added as he too got himself out of the lake shaking the water off him.
"Uhm thanks Guilmon. I'll try well…to aim better next time."
"Yup, but me ca hungry we ca need some bread." Guilmon quickly took off to his house and started to dig through the dirt looking for his buried food.
Wayne followed and smiled at Guilmon wondering if food was the only thing on the dino's mind 24/7.
"Hey Wayne." A familiar voice called out from behind the bushes causing the Raidramon to glance behind him and see Shibumi standing there in his coat.
"Mr.Shibumi, why are you here? Don't tell me I have to come back to the lab for more tests." Shibumi smiled knowing how much Wayne hated staying at the lab.
"No, I just came by to see how you were doing."
"Oh just doing fine. Guilmon and Terriermon showed me how to do an attack."
"That sounds great." Shibumi said as he sat down on a rock beside Wayne who was so much larger then himself.
"How about physically? You're not feeling any pain in your insides?"
Wayne blinked and sat down too on his four legs much like a dog sat so he could be levelled with Shibumi.
"I'm fine Mr. Shibumi, but why do I get the feeling you're not here just for a house call." Shibumi smiled at Wayne and nodded. "Yeah no house call, but I came here to bring you some news."
"News? What kind of news?"
"News about your mother."
Wayne fell silent to Shibumi's words, and his eyes went wide.
"I talked to her last night, and…she's been worried sick about you. Heck you have made news all over BBC from your disappearance." Shibumi added.
"You…You talked to her. What did she say?" Wayne questioned with excitement, "Is she alright? Does she know I'm here? Please tell me."
"Whoa whoa Wayne, she's alright just a bit sad, but she was lifted when I told her you were here, and invited her to come down here to Japan."
"What? She's coming? Here? When?" Wayne questioned more as he walked around Shibumi with wonder.
"Clam down my dear boy before you give yourself a digital heart attack." Shibumi said placing his hands on the Raidramon's shoulders to clam him. "Yes she's coming, and she's coming later this afternoon to Hypnos to see you." Wayne's eyes went wide at the thought of seeing his mother again, but then sad eyes came over him and he turned away from Shibumi.
"I can't see her."
"Can't see her? Wayne this is your mother you have to see her."
"I can't!" Wayne yelled back, and looked away with tears streaming down his armoured mask. "I can't walk up to my mother looking like this okay! She's expecting the old me that she left home for work not a four-legged digimon that she will scream at the mere sight of."
"Wayne it doesn't matter what you look like she's your mother and she wants to know her son is still alive.She has a right to know that you're still alive no matter what." Shibumi stood up, walked behind Wayne, and placed his hand on the Raidramon's shoulder. "It's your choice to come to Hypno later…but if you don't it will break her heart to think that her son is dead when in fact he stands before me worrying about her feelings."
Slowly Shibumi let go of Wayne's shoulder and started to walk away. "I hope to see you later Wayne."
Wayne looked up at the old man with his teary eyes, but soon turned his gaze back to the ground. Shibumi was right that she needed to know he was alive, but would it make her worse to find out that her son was no longer the son she knew?
He walked under a shaded tree, and laid with his dragon face to the ground in a wave of tears.
That Afternoon…
Miss Osman's hands continued to shake as she left her gate from Tokyo International Airport. It had been a long eight-hour flight to arrive in Japan, but she wasn't tired instead, her newspaper she had bought back in Britain was still shaking in her hand as she continued to be nervous. She had never travelled this far before much less fly which she really hated, but still she wondered how Wayne had managed to get to Japan and why. Was he kidnapped from their home and smuggled to Japan or did he run away from home? "I know I haven't been around much but…does he think I don't love him anymore…" Tears slowly crept down Miss Osman's face as she continued to walk down the hallway to the main gates. "I just hope he didn't get hurt or anything." She whispered picking up the pace and carrying her rolling luggage behind her. The gates opened up and she saw the faces of many as they were standing there to greet the arrival of friends or family. Mitch Osman looked around with a worried face as she tried to find Shibumi in the crowd. He never gave a picture of himself to her, but had said he had a beard and would be wearing a blue baseball cap, but much to her dismay she didn't see anyone with that description. "I hope he didn't forget…I have no glue how to get around." She thought as she wandered among the Japanese people. At the last moment, she heard a voice echo among the crowd. "Miss Osman over here." She gazed to the source of the voice and noticed a hand sticking out of the mob of people waving towards her. She quickly moved her way to the waving hand hoping that her ears weren't playing tricks on her and that this was Shibumi she had spoken to and not some old man pointing to her by mistake. "Excuse me. Pardon me…oh I'm so sorry." Miss Osman kept saying as she was nudging one person after another getting to the waving hand, which revealed a middle-aged man about her age wearing a blue baseball cap. He didn't even look Japanese at all, but more of American by her guess. "Miss Osman I presume?" he said with his hand out to her.
"Uhm yes you must be Shibumi." She said placing her hand in his, which he shook politely.
"Pleasure to meet you Miss Osman, just follow me and I'll see if we can get out of this rat nest." He said with a smile, "Did you have other luggage with you?"
"No I just brought this carry on, but can we go see my son right now please?"
"Of course let's get to train station and take a train there."
"Train station in an airport?" she questioned which caused Shibumi to smile as they walked down the hallway towards the stations boarding platform.
"Yeah lot of different things here in Japan. It gets confusing, but you'll get use to it. I had a hard time when I moved here from the states."
"So you are an American."
"Yeah born there, but moved here when I was ten anyway, this is our train."
Mitch looked up from Shibumi's face and watched as train pulled into the station and coasted to a stop. The doors of the kart opened up allowing its passengers to disembark from the train. As soon as they left, Shibumi and others started to make their way inside the train. She followed Shibumi in and he managed to find a set of seats right beside a window for them.
"Now we just ride this train for an hour and we'll arrive at Hypnos Headquarters."
"Is that were my son is?" she asked with hopefulness in her voice.
"Uhm yes he should be there when we arrive, but…I have to warn you…he looks a little different since you last seen him."
"Shibumi forgive me for asking, but that is the seventh time you have said that my son has become "different." What exactly has changed?" she said in a serious tone that caused Shibumi to stir in his chair.
"Shibumi…has he…been severely burnt or scared…if he has I don't care I care about him even if he's disfigured."
"Oh no no Mitch nothing like that," Shibumi said shaking his head and claming the worried mother. "It's…just hard to explain…you will see when we get to Hypnos."
"I would prefer that you tell me now." She said in a harsh tone, "Please…tell me."
Shibumi touched his beard a little with his hand and looked to the ground. He hoped that Wayne would be at Hypnos when they arrived and he could explain then, but…a mother in distress was another thing to think about.
He turned his eyes to Mitch and slowly placed his hand on hers to comfort her as he could see her face twist into one of concern and fear to his words.
"Mitch, have you ever heard of digimon?"
Guilmon…
"Waynemon? Waynemon where are you?" the red dino asked as he continued to walk down the path of the park. He had left a few minutes ago to eat some delicious bread, and wanted to share some of it with Wayne, but the human/Raidramon couldn't be found. Guilmon's nostrils flared up as he sniffed the air hoping that Wayne's scent was still in the air.
"Ah there's Waynemon's smell." He said with happiness, "Now to follow."
He quickly brought his nose to the ground and slowly started to follow the smell. Guilmon pushed back bushes and shrubs as he sniffed, and could tell the scent was getting strong meaning Waynemon wasn't far away. As Guilmon rounded the corner, a sound could be heard just past a set of bushes. He tilted his head to the sound with his ears opened a bit, and realized it was the sound of crying. Guilmon pushed aside the last bush and saw lying on the ground his dragon face to the ground in tears was Waynemon.
"Waynemon?" The Raidramon's eyes opened suddenly and he stood up quickly to the sound of his friend.
"Uhm…yes Guilmon you need something?" Wayne muttered as he wiped his tears away with his paws in an effort to conceal his sadness.
"Waynemon, why are you crying?" The dino asked as he walked to the Raidramon with concern in his yellow eyes.
"I wasn't crying…I was thinking." Guilmon shook his head.
"No, me ca saw you cry. What is hurting you?" Wayne looked to the ground and sighed at Guilmon's child like words.
"You wouldn't understand Guilmon…it's not your problem."
"Wayne, tell me." Wayne looked up to Guilmon realizing not only that he didn't use the "-mon" at the end of his name, but as well the serious look in the dino's yellow eyes.
"Wayne I know when something is bothering someone. Takato is like that when something is on his mind, and you are so exception. Now you ca going to tell me or me ca have to stay with you till you do."
Wayne's jaw nearly dropped as he heard Guilmon spoke like an experienced adult and not of a child that he sometimes acted like, but slowly Wayne sighed and looked back up at the red dino.
"My mother…is coming here to see me."
"Oh that's good to hear."
"No it isn't." Wayne said with a stern voice, "She's not going to see her son the way she wants to see. Instead, she's only going to see a monster. A four legged freak that calls himself her son."
Guilmon sat down on the ground and slowly picked a small flower and turned it in his claws slowly.
"So…you are still her son. Isn't that what is most important?"
"Look at me! I am a digimon now not a human. She will scream and run away from me. I am basically dead to her."
"At least you have a mother!" Guilmon shouted standing up causing Wayne to fall silent in surprise.
"I was created by Takato, and never had the luxury of a mother. Takato is the closest thing I have to a father, but I never had a mother…I never had someone to hold me when I was cold at night…I never had someone to sing me lullaby's when I couldn't sleep. I have never regretted having Takato as my creator, friend, and father, but… I still wish I could have had the experience of having a mother." Guilmon sat back down on the ground slowly picking up his flower that he had before. Wayne slowly looked at Guilmon with shameful eyes. "Guilmon…I…I'm sorry I…didn't know."
The red dino slowly sniffed the flower and then placed it on the ground lightly. "I will never experience the feeling of having a mother, but you Wayne…you have a mother that cares for you and deserves to know that you are still alive." Slowly Guilmon stood up on his legs and looked at Wayne with one of his yellow eyes over his shoulder. "However, that's your choice if you want to lose the only mother you have."
Wayne looked to the ground in silent as Guilmon started to walk away, but then stopped.
"If you ever need someone to talk me ca is always open. I'll see you later Waynemon."
As Guilmon brushed, back the scrubs and trees to leave, Wayne looked up his eyes looking at the red dino with surprise. There was a lot to Guilmon that he never knew, and today…he gave him answers that he needed. "Thank you Guilmon…"
Wayne whispered as he turned his head to the twin towers that stood high in the sky. With a deep breath in his Raidramon lungs, Wayne bolted to Hypnos with all the strength in his four legs.
"I'm coming mom…I'm coming."
Moments of loss, and moments of discovery, but now the connection of family remains to unveil the darkness and disguise of one's heart; memories found and lost in Chapter 17 of Digimon: A New World: Memories and Shadows…
Author Notes:
I am sorry that this chapter took so long to produce, but to be honest I had to deal with some personal issues. I will not say what it was, but I had to do something I thought I would never do, and in turn threw me into a depression causing me to lose interest in writing and drawing. You may have noticed that Digital Destiny was removed from as well as Infection from FFpress. Those were removed due to personal reasons that I will not explain here as well. However if anyone would like to use the idea of DD or Infection you may email me and I will send the past chapters to them, but sadly I will not write those stories again. As for ANW…I intend to continue the story of Flame and the others so don't worry about possible ideas of me cancelling this series. Once more, I am sorry for my absence from the writing world and hope this chapter will somehow make up for lost time. I hope to finish chapter 17 in late August or early September so please keep watch of this story.
Answering Reviews:
Gehn the Grey- Answer to your first question yes Flame managed to get the code back that was missing from him, but remember Waynemon has his other part of the code so he still remains incomplete. Your second question, I imagined that Logic's glasses wrapped around his ears so they wouldn't fall off. Both very good questions and I thank you for asking them.
Heart of Obsidian- No need to apologize; we all have our slow days just look at me. Yeah I believe in that too that darkness can be our ally and not our enemy.
Sayaoranz girl- Thank you
OmnicromXR- Lol yup no Daemon in this story, but as I answered in the questions above that's how Flame's logic side was able to wear glasses. And please don't stop second guessing I like proving you wring =)
Hope to hear from you again.
Aerol Somtaaw-A very detailed review, I love them Anyway, yes I have frequent errors, and I always try to improve so I don't make more of them. Thanks for pointing them out. I am not sure if I will bring the alter egos in again, but I will think about it . Oh and I redesigned Flame so please read back in the previous chapter and tell me what you think. And there might be more evos soon who knows. Thanks for the review.
Waynemon-Uhm Wayne you really need to control those two. They might hurt you Oo
NightDragon0- Weird I never even thought of KH when I wrote this, but then again I am a huge fan of KH so it probably somehow crawled in there I guess ;;;
Thanks for the review.