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05/30/07- I MUST BETA THIS STORY!!! My ninth grade grammar is terrible… I'm just going to beta all my chapters and give you guys a new one on Saturday! I LOVE YOU TO BITS!!!
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In a planet called Tekenesen Jedi Knight Anakin Skywalker, Jedi Master Obi Wan Kenobi, and Yoda search for a long awaited member of the Jedi Order. They are searching for a powerful member that has been missing for years. They are in search for…. the Lost Jedi….
"Be found, the lost Jedi must be" Yoda signs as he meditates on the ship. Yoda looked to his left as he saw Obi Wan Kenobi prepare himself for his search. He turned and noticed one of his own is missing.
"ANAKIN!" he yelled as he walked off of his ship.
"What." Anakin said as he frowned in hate.
"Do you want me to help you find that myth? I refuse to look for something that doesn't exist" Anakin turned in disgust as he approached Master Kenobi.
"Listen Anakin, it is important that we find this Jedi, the Jedi order is counting on us be successful." Anakin turned away with a rebellious look on his face he sighed as he said
"Fine"
Obi Wan Kenobi and Anakin searched almost every inch of Tekenesen for the lost Jedi but still no sign of him and it was almost nightfall.
"This is ridiculous, we haven't found anything," Anakin yelled. Obi Wan Kenobi walked towards him.
"Be patient, Master Yoda is counting on us."
Anakin put on his hood and slowly walked away. Master Kenobi stared at him
"Where are you going?" Anakin turns and gives Master Kenobi a look that can kill and whispers.
"I need something to drink."
Anakin enters a bar and sat on a stool next to a mysterious person in a black hood. Anakin ordered his drink and began to sip it. He couldn't help but stare at the hooded stranger. How you couldn't see the stranger's face…. Every inch of the stranger's body was concealed, which drove Anakin insane.
"What are you looking at?" The stranger yelled. "Excuse me who are you talking to?" Anakin said I shock as he stood to his feet. The Stranger stood up and took out a light saber it was a purple one. Anakin took out his Light saber and began to battle the stranger.
The stranger jumped and tried to stab Anakin. Anakin dodged and jumped in front of the stranger. The stranger tripped Anakin Leaving him on his back and aimed the Light saber in his face.
"How did you beat me? WHO ARE YOU?" Anakin interrogates. The stranger turns jumps on top of a pipe and begins to climb up.
"That's for me to know and you to never find out."
The lights went out and the stranger disappeared Obi Wan Kenobi walked in with a confused look on his face….
Well that's the first chapter please review my story thanks see ya.