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Anakin Continues to walk down the dark cold alley. Anakin is determined to find the Lost Jedi then he will be a hero. He wasn't going to tell anyone but he secretly wanted to kill the lost Jedi. Anyone who was a better Jedi than he was a threat to him. Anakin senses something he turns around and takes out his Light Saber.

"Who's there? Show your face" Anakin yells He knew someone was there. Suddenly the stranger comes from the air and lands on Anakin's back .The stranger's light saber were 2 inches from Anakin's neck.

"Say good Night" he whispers in Anakin's ear. "Never" He replies as he swings the stranger off his back and takes out his light saber. Anakin jumps and begins to swing at the hooded stranger, but the stranger blocks every move with one hand. Suddenly Obi Wan Kenobi runs in. This interference distracts Anakin and makes him drop his light saber.

" I TOLD YOU IDON'T NEED HELP" Anakin complained. Master Kenobi turned and sternly said, " You obviously do"

Then the stranger attacked master Kenobi and knocks master Kenobi to the ground. The Stranger turns and stares at Anakin and slowly walked over to him so he can finish him off. But Anakin uses his force and pushes the stranger to the floor. The hood comes off the stranger's head and reveals his face. It also reveals that he is a she. A tall caramel skinned girl, she looks to be around the ages of 20-22. Here eyes were bright blue but suddenly for an unknown reason turned green. Her hair was tied with long white ribbons into 2 long ponytails with on long Padawan braid behind her right ear. Her hair like her hood was jet black. She didn't speak as if she's never seen another Jedi before.

Anakin stares in shock, Master Kenobi does like wise. She can feel Anakin stare into her eyes like they were passages to other worlds. Anakin reaches his hand to her as if he wanted to help her get up. But seconds after she fell clone trooper came and took her back to the ship.

On The ship Master Kenobi begins to interrogate her

As if she was criminal.

"What is your name?" She looks up as Anakin peeks into the room. She slightly opens her lips and whisper " My name is Dierceice Ottowan,"(for people who can't pronounce: Dear-say-see)

That's chapter four Please Reply