Heres the next Chapter. Thanks for all you review they were great. I know acually that I kinda bullied and begged the majorite of the reviewees to review but heh, who cares, I betyou appriated it. I mean after reading this, theres no going back. Cause our stories so great I mean...yea

so roseanna and che ran down to the to where the hide out is

"oh no che" sed roseanna "we need a key to undo this giant pad lock but Tobe didnt give us one" "i'll go get one and come bak down ok?"

"ok" sez che

"hide in this little cubby hole at the moe, no one should see u there"sed roseanna.

so roseanna ran upstairs as fast as she could but as she got to the top floor but was caught up in the action .

the lockness monster has a big amry of little lockness monsters

that like to eat toe nails and finger nails. roseanna drew her sword to start fighting.

che was stuk under ground with all the women and children wen she saw that roseanna had not returned she relized that they were to be split up 4 a while so che went out her way to keep the town folk safe.

She looked around, everyone was hudled up against the wall. "Oh man," she thought, "these people wont be alright like this, I have to get that door open."

Che went over to the door and gave it a kick. "OHHHH MY TOE."

One of the woman looked over at her and laughed.

"What like you could do any better?" Che snapped, hopping round on one foot.

"Well actually I could," the woman replied, "Im a healer, but I have a few tricks up my sleeve."

Quickly she placed her hand on the door and focused. Che watched amazed as the locks clicked out of place.

"Wow that's amazing, Im Che" Che said.

"Thanks, and Im Floofy Flip Flam Flop, but you can call me Mary." Mary replied. "I think we better get all these people down here."

"Right," Che replied. "Everyone down here in an orderly fasion." She shouted.

"Say, whats the lockness monster doing here anyway, I thought it lived in Scotland?" she asked Mary.

"It migrates in the Winter."

"Ohhhh, weird."

roseanna rushed up the stairs to the top of the castle she stood bak to bak with joe...

(AN:

OH MY GOODNESS
your part of the story, pure genous

y?

one whole sentence
thats amazing

lol

so much effort

yea i no

if only I could match up to your talent

it took hours to do that

yea i can tell

End of Authors note )

OK so where were we, oh yea

Baby lockness monsters were swarming the castle; the biggest one was out the ocean roaring its head off at the others.

"Joe," Roseanna shouted as she slashed on of the heads off, "it looks like the biggest one is directing the others. Maybe we should kill that one."

Joe whirled his blade around slicing two more through their middles. He stared up at the lockness monster. "And how, pray tell, are we to do that?"

"Beats me, but we'll never do it this way!" She gasped. "There are too many."

Back down in the hide out Che could here the roars of the monsters. She looked over at Mary. "I have to do something, they need me up there."

Mary nodded. "Go ahead; ill keep everyone else down here."

Che turned to run up the stairs. "Oh and Che," she shouted, "make sure they send all the wounded down here, we have a number of healers among the woman."

"Sure thing!" Che shouted back over her shoulder.

Running up a number of stairs Che came out on the roof of the castle. "Wow it's prettiful up here," she said.

"Cheeeee!"

Che looked around. Roseanna was glaring at her. "Do you wanna give me a hand?"

"Oh yea, I spos I better," said Che.

Roseanna and Che whipped out their swords and performed and number of complex moves.

"Very impressive guys," Joe said, "but it might help if you actually KILL some monsters."

"hmmmm he's right Che," Roseanna said.

"But they're so cutsy wootsy." Che said bending down to look at one.

The cutsy wootsy baby lockness monster stretched its neck out and bit her on the nose.

"Owwww, it bit me!" she shouted.

Roseanna rolled her eyes. "You're lucky it was a little one. We need to get the biggest one of all." She pointed our to the sea.

Che looked at it. "But what if it bites me?"

"Then you'll need a really big plaster," Joe laughed.

"But Joe, I thought there was no such thing as plasters in Tamora Pierce stories; it's like, way back before they were invented." Che said.

"Yea well its way back before stereos and speakers systems too," Joe said, "but for some reason those were in this story. Now stop whining and start fighting!"

"You mean I'm just a story character?" Che gasped. "I'm not real? I'm just made up, we're all just MADE UP!"

"CHE!" Joe and Roseanna shouted.

"Ok, ok so what do we do?"

Do do dodo dooooo scary music

No Tobe in this chapter. How depressing. How deprived I feel, well I might just have to change that in the next chapter lol.

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