Yay! New Chapter! I just want to thank those people that reviewed. Even though it was a few. Hopefully it will be more this time. Ahem, Anyway so there you go and this time, i'll try to make it more readable. Enjoy!
Cobraj899
Far far away from Farnolk, a carriage rode along rocky roads (a/n haha). In the carriage were five people. Three of those people were tied up together and thrown in the back of the carriage while the other two were in the front of the carriage.
A tall red-head suddenly stood up and went to the back to face the three hostages. She knelt down close enough to a sandy blond haired woman and said "Let's just hope your daughter knows what she's doing. If she doesn't adhere to my orders well...I don't even want to say what will happen to you three. Let's just say that it won't be pleasurable."She then stood up and chuckled evilly and kicked the woman in the stomach, causing her to topple onto the ground. The woman sobbed gently, because she knew she was going to die.
In a distant forest, far away from farnolk, two people walked. One was a blond haired girl and the other a boy with chocolate, brownish,darkish hair. The boy held a sword and was swiping at trees as they walked.
The blond girl looked extremely tired. She was sweating and her clothes were torn in some places. She'd been trekking for 6 hours and she hadn't gotten any closer to finding her family. She suddenly stopped and collapsed to the ground. She sat up and put her head in her hands. The boy came up to her and sat down next to her saying "Keely are you okay?"
She looked up at him with red puffy eyes and said "Phil, we've been walking for 6 hours and we haven't gotten anywhere. Myra's probably already killed them by now. what's the use? I let my mother down and she probably doesn't want to see me anymore. I" She was interrupted by Phil's finger to her lips. She looked into his brown eyes and he said "Keely, don't talk like that. Your mother cares for you and she's not the only one. You have to keep on going. Your mom's counting on you. I'm counting on you." Keely smiled and stood up. She sighed and said "Well. It looks like i have no choice." She reached out her hand to Phil who was still sitting and pulled him up.
She looked up at the sky and she could see that the sun was rising. She continued walking and Phil followed her close behind. They'd been walking for about a half-hour when they heard a rustling sound behind them. Keely stopped and Phil bumped into her clearly not paying attention to what he was doing. He looked at her face and he could see the shock, clearly displayed on her face.
The rustling sound was heard again. This time, Phil heard it. He turned around just in time to see a jaguar leap out of the bushes. It was black and it's mouth was watering. It looked intensely at Keely. Phil stretched his hand in front of Keely and slightly pushed her back. He then took out his sword and pointed it at the Jaguar. The jaguar snarled and Phil held on tight to the sword. The jaguar then leaped at Phil and Phil swung his sword...
What happens next? I don't know and neither do you. This is where some action takes place and some Romance too. Wait until the next chapter titled"Clues" Now...Review! Review! and Review! Unless i won't continue. I can always Delete this story you know. But i won't unless you review
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Cobraj899