A/N:WOW loads of reviews :),im promising this chapter is longer ok
MoonWarrior12-yep ray and kai are the only sane ones,i was thinking of making kenny one too,but he was too boring so i changed it.
Peevish Princess- (forgot to mention u last time)Im totally cool with you not liking swearing,not everybody does,oh and kai smoking it fits in with his rebel facade plus this if FANFICTON which means not true,so piss off(oops sorry i swore!)
no name-LMFAO,god i would love to kill Kenny off,but i wont,actually i dont know yet.-evil smirk-
nb-thanks and yer i promise to make this chappie more longer.
Anatha2.0-lol im gonna keep going for a while yet :)
randomsamuriX-yes rays a little darling...not lol,i know i should have made someone applaude kai for saying that to tyson.
Yumi-Ulrich4ever-thanks i didn't know if i had managed to pull that off with them being sane around eacthother,im glad i did.:)
Sophiajisu-thankies!
DarkTrenital-lol im glad you enjoyed it :D
Lady-Nikki-i love reading attitude ficcies specially ray ones :D,yeah i was thinking about an ipod but it just ended up being mp3 player instead,but ive changed it now.
sayonara-i love kai too hes tough,thanks heres next chappie.
Renluva-thankies and everyones been saying that bout ray :)their SEXY POVS? lol!
The Komodo Dragon Pheonix-thankies,i am! specially with all the reviews im getting.
lil Red-thanks i like theirs the best too.
spitfire-hanyou14-explosive,yes hopefully specially between kai and tyson:)heres your update.
stunstar-hey stunstar thanks for the review,i dont think i will have pairings because 1)i havent gone that way with it 2)im really crap at slashy stuff so ill leave it at general.
freya kurenai-thanks,oooh what did you do to get a detention,i havent had one for ages :)lol i got threatened to pull my act together or else.
lalalalala2-yep max does have issues,i like ray being oc, i hate wimpy ray.
MoonWarrior12-yep there the only sane ones,althought i might let them go a bit,heres your update.
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Summary:5 students who know nothing about eachother meet in the detention room,ray the trouble maker,kai the rebel,tyson the prankster,max the teachers pet(i know your are thinking how he got in there but all will be explained) and kenny the nerd(him too)their different personalities lead to interesting results.
DISCLAIMER:I WISH I OWNED IT ALL BUT I DONT SO MEH!
IMPORTANT:Chapter 3 was the 1st day of detention(there are about 5 alltogether)this is day 2!They know eachothers names ok,i just couldnt be bothered with more intros.
The detention room
Chapter 4
The lunch bell sounded and Max sped down the corridor towards the detention room,near the door stood Ms Kel and Max felt his heart flutter.Ms Kel feeling someones eyes on her turned around 'oh for gods sake,he wont leave me alone first the bunch of roses now he's stalking me'she thought angrily.Ms Kel turned quickly and walked(or rather limped)away.
"MS KEL DIDN'T YOU LIKE YOUR FLOWERS,BABY PLEASE COME BACK!",Max screamed,giving up he opened the door to the detention room and stepped in.
Ray,Kenny,Kai and Tyson were sitting round a table each holding a few cards in their hands.
"GO FISH!",Tyson screamed slamming his hand on the table,Kenny squealed and ducked under the table in fear.
"I don't think so lard-ass,that's the fifth game you've won and I think your cheating ,you better not be or you'll meet my good friend Mr Fist,Kai growled out shoving his fist in Tyson's face for effect.While the fight brewed Ray sat watching Kenny an evil smirk settling on his handsome features,quickly he dropped down under the table before screaming"EWW KENNY QUIT TRYING TO JERK OFF WITH ME!"and jumping back up with a look of fake horror on his face.
"Im not!",Kenny screamed standing up.
"Like hell you are!",Tyson shouted and threw his potato chips at Kenny hitting him square in the eyes.
"ARGH,my eyes!",he screamed and started running towards them.
"RUN AWAY,HE MIGHT TRY AND JERK OFF ON US!",Kai screamed,he,Max,Ray and Tyson ran to the other end of the classroom,with Kenny right behind them."STAY BACK!",Kai screamed and grabbed a chair knocking Kenny over the head with it,he slumped to the floor unconcious.
"OH MY GOD YOU KILLED KENNY!",Max screamed"Can I take his place in 'Go Fish'?",Kai shrugged and they all sat back round the table to play.
"Ray you got a 5?",Tyson asked and held his hand out for it.
"For the last fucking time NO,if you want to end up like Kenny keep going,if not shut your gob",he growled chucking his cards down he pulled out his ipod and started to put his headphones in.
"Hey what happened to the mp3 player you had?",Max asked chewing on his cards.Ray looked at him in disgust before answering,
"Mr Ape confiscated it and won't give it back so I got one of these,happy?".Tyson who had always wanted an ipod suddenly grabbed it out of Ray's hand to look at it.
"Alright Granger,if you dont give me that back in 5 seconds I will throw you out that window!",Ray said threatingly.
"1..."
"Hold on GEEZ",Tyson snapped,Ray took a deep breath,
"2,3,4,5",he shouted charging at Tyson,he grabbed his ipod ,taking Tyson by the jacket he swung him out the open window watching as he fell and screamed in pain, "I THINK MY ARM IS BROKEN!",before passing out.
"Never mess with Ray Kon!",Ray shouted punching his fist in the air to add effect.Kai was rolling around on the floor in hysterics while Max was prodding Kenny with his foot.Kai recovering from his laughter saw Max prodding Kenny and shouted,
"Max get away from queer Kenny!",he screamed.Max looked up in confusion and asked "Why?".Kai looked in alarm.
"BECAUSE HE HAS A HAIR DISEASE MAX ,NOW YOUR INFECTED,EWW GET AWAY FROM US!",Ray shouted running with Kai to the other end of the classroom.Just then Tyson came back into the room a neon orange cast on his right arm and a sad expression on his face.(i know he cant have a cast put on that quickly,but it would be boring waiting for him to come back)
"Tyson!",Max screeched happily and grabbed his arm to pull him towards him.
"Hey Max-",Tyson was cut short from a scream from Kai,
"TYSON'S INFECTED TOO!",he then grabbed a pot of pencils on the teachers desk and threw them towards Max and Tyson.
"HEY,infected with what?",Tyson asked wearily,rubbing his head where the pencils had hit him.
"KENNY'S HAIR DISEASE ASS-WIPE!",Ray shouted from where he was graffiting on the wall with a black marker pen.Kai had a thoughtful look on his face as he stared at Max and Tyson.
"Hey I think I know how to get rid of the disease",Kai said a smirk spreading on his face he grabbed a vase,throwing the flowers out, he then chucked the plant water over Max and Tyson.
"ARGH!",they both screamed,before Max said happily,"We're clean!",he then noticed Tysons orange cast and thought outloud,
"Hey everyone let's sign Tyson's cast!",Ray and Kai rushed over with a black marker pen in hand,Kai went first putting 'Kai woz eya 05',he then handed the pen to Max.Max quickly scribbled,'Max 4 Ms Kel' and put a heart round that and Ray the put 'Ray done this 2 Tyson' but put his 'R' back- to- front.
"Ray dude you can't spell your name",Tyson put in,Ray looked up at him and glared before saying,
"Yes I can,now shut up before I give you another broken arm",Max being so stupid decided to say,
"But Ray,your 'R's' the wrong way round-EEP!"Max ran out of the room seeing the look Ray sent to him.Ray gave a huff and sat down saying,
"Now who want's another round of Go Fish?"
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A/N:LOL,i love this chapter it has to be my best one so far as you could tell i hate tyson and kenny,and max ,sometimes. As you know school starts soon so i wont be able to update so fast but i'll try :)WHO THINKS I SHOULD CHANGE THE RATING,IF SO HOW PLZ TELL ME!
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