Alright guys, I know a lot of you are waiting for me to update…and yes, I promised not to take two weeks again, but a lot of you said you were confused…so I'm going to try and summarize what I have to far. All I can really say is that it helps me a whole lot more if you guys read from chapter one. I know it gets confusing; but I don't plan my stories out. Once I start them they take on a mind of their own. Seriously.

Another reason –yes I know, me an my excuses— My brother and I are planning to "switch places" because he's out in Pennsylvania, and I'm in California. He wants a change and I want to go back. Also; my friend Heather's dad died, and I was really close to him; even though I've only known him for two years. I can't say much about my job at the moment, but I'm applying for a job…and I'm in school—straight A's for once in my life. And on top of it all, I'm getting dental work done. Y'know…two teeth pulled, two caps, five cavities, and braces. Go me.

Chapter One:

Riza and Roy split up after the fall of the military. Riza has Havoc's daughter-Jazmine. Riza upsets Havoc and end sup being poisoned. Roy finds Riza and tries to save her. They get married shortly after Jazmine's birthday and before Riza dies.

Chapter Two:

Roy adopts Jazmine and takes her to the funeral for Riza. Roy runs into Havoc and they fight for a while over Jazmine. Roy finds out later that Riza isn't really dead.

Chapter Three:

Riza takes a bad effect of the medicine to 'sustain her life'. (This is where I lost most of you) Hints that Jazmine will end up saving them all. The last scene, Roy has a nightmare that who he thought was Riza was actually Envy.

Most of my dream sequences and flash backs are in italicized. The fact that most of my chapters are written in Notepad (I get discouraged and quit when I write in Microsoft because I see how many pages I have. I like it when I can't see the pages) and transferred over to Word for Spell checking and Grammar…it automatically gets rid of the Italicized font when I transfer it to the website. Since it's already checked, I don't usually check it when I transfer it. (Did that make sense?)

Chapter Four:

Chapter four centers around Jazmine as she goes around the hospital and heals people without her knowing it.

This chapter was two weeks late, and therefore in trying to keep cadence with my 1-week rule, was very rushed. I'm sorry about the atrocious detail in this one; I really didn't try very hard.

Chapter Five:

This chapter is about—a day after; Jazmine heals them you find out who them is. After Jazmine heals them she finds out that she has markings like Kimbly. Only hers are for a good cause. Her main difference is that she gets hers when she's done five good deeds. The next few chapters will be centered around Jazmine and Roy; since the family is Jazmine and Riza.

I'm terribly sorry for my really bad chapter…and the confusion. I don't put thought into the deadlined ones. If you wish to Flame me for them; then be my guest, but please don't stop reading for one bad chapter. That makes me cry :(

REVIEWER RESPONSE:

These are from chapter 2-chapter-5. Just as a little note; yes, Kali will be plotted into this XD. You'll hate me when I get to it.

Chapter Two:

Chase Me: I'm sorry; I had to do it. It's the only way for it to work. I'll make up for it by writing an all Havoc story!

Lt. Hawkeye: I really appreciate your enthusiasm. :) It makes me happy.

MoonYashaNichi: I was seriously tempted to keep this a one-shot, but I got too many reviews and decided against it.

The Mr. Clean Alchemist: Love the name : ). I read some of your stories and as soon as my pop-up blocker is disabled, I'll review. And yes, I brought Hughes back. I just can't see him dying. It doesn't seem to follow for me, I don't know why. The story doesn't make sense without him; and so, I brought him back for all you Hughes fans out there. HUGHES LIVES!

Yasha's Girl: Your friend has good taste, lol. Glad you like it, and I will keep your advice. I'm going for twenty!

Wing Omega: as much as I would love too, I'm trying my best to keep this rated PG-13+ so maybe if I write the alternate story…(yes, there's an alternate story to this)

ChibiRaccoon: Terribly sorry that I had you crying. : ( but you read and reviewed! Bless you!

Tsunade-Chan: Yes, I like to believe they are : ) I love Hughes. It's only fitting that he's once again, a scene stealer.

SPECIAL THANKS TO: gundams forever, WolfieWolf, Flava Sava, and—OMG, I had to look at your name twice to get it right—Tsuiraku Nami

Chapter Three:

gundams forever: Everyone hates me, I'm a positively sheevyl person. Thanks for making it your fave. I think…And I had to talk to my mom and find out what I was like as a kid to get ideas for Jazz. She's based off me and my little brother XD. Which is why she's such a tom-boy.

MoonYashaNichi: I did it because I hate you 00. Just kidding. Thanks, glad you like it.

Tsunade-Chan: Read and find out.

Cashmeritan: Go back to the summary of chapter three. I didn't post it cause I forgoted.

Reiya-Chan: I don't know who Van is. Unless you mean Vash. Vash is a character from Trigun –Totally wicket show, by the way.

Special Thanks to: Hotheadedhawk, Flava Sava, unexpection, tear drops of flaming darkness, yasha's girl, and –once again, the one I can't spell—Tsuiraku Nami.

Chapter Four:

Tsuiraku Nami: I know it was confusing. That's how come I have this chapter…edit…review response…side-note…THING! And I still can't spell your name!

Flava Sava: Read the summary of chapter three : (

Special Thanks to: MoonYashaNichi, gundams forever, yasha's girl, and ChibiRaccoon

The sucky Chapter! Go me!

Chapter Five:

Yasha's girl: You are my hero. One of my ONLY constant reviewers. –huggles- Thank you!

Flava Sava: Same for you too! -huggles-

gundams forever: Thank you for the review, lol, I'll remember to dedicate you in the next chapter for the review. : )

Hotheadedhawk: I hope this note-thinggy helps a lot with your confusion. : (

Special Thanks To: unexpection, Britz, and –yes, the one I can't spell— Tsuiraku Nami

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Chapter Six will be up………………..as SOON as I can get some inspiration. So here's where I need the help of all of my constant reviewers; Tsuiraku Nami, yasha's girl, Flava Sava, unexpection, tear drops of flaming darkness, and gundams forever—since you are my constant reviewes, and know what's going on (sort of), I'm going to ask you to help me out for chapter six. PLEASE! I need help! In more ways then one! But at the moment I need help with my story! Just drop a review for this side-note, and I'll try and work in all the ideas I get. The more the better. : )

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Also; in cadence with my 46 reviews and 1440 hits, I'm throwing a party. I don't have time to edit this for errors, so LIVE WITH IT!

JAZMINE