You Were Meant For Me
Author: williz
Summary: Will/Elizabeth focus- It's just Will and Elizabeth in a big adventure in which they meet many times. OK…I'm bad at summaries. But my story is going to be really fun. I swear! Enjoy!
Disclaimer: Recognizable characters? Not mine.
Unrecognizable characters? MINE!
Recognizable characters that you just don't recognize because you're having a bad day? Not mine, though I'd like to stake claim for them just that day.
"Are we there yet?" Jack asked, grinning. He'd been bugging Ana Maria for the past three hours as they rode through the uninhabited desert lands.
Every so often, a caravan would pass by, maybe once every two hours, because of the close proximity between Tangier and Ceuta. It was a day's ride, maybe less.
"I dun't know, Jack! Please STOP bugging me and ask the whelp!" Ana yelled, turning in her seat to look back at him. Will turned in his seat behind Elizabeth and glared back, mockingy. "Hey…I thought Jack called me Whelp, I never thought you would Ana…"
Jack laughed and kept riding his horse. "Are we there yet?" Jack asked again.
"JACK! SO HELP ME—IF YOU…" Ana spun in her saddle with gritted teeth and pointed her pistol at him. "I'll shoot ye, got it?"
"Alrigh', alrigh'…I'm sorry, Ana Maria…" he shut his mouth and looked to the side. "No, really though—Will, how long 'ave we been at this?" He tilted to the side to look at Will's back past Ana's as they had been riding in a single file line.
"We still have a ways Jack, we left ten hours ago…where's your compass?" Jack shrugged and Will just turned back around and started slowing down the horse he and Elizabeth were on.
"What're you doing, Will?" Elizabeth asked. She'd been daydreaming for the past hour, leaning against Will's chest, stroking the horse's neck soothingly. It had seemed to her there was too much weight on the poor thing's back and he wasn't being in the least bit angry with them as some horses were apt to do.
"We should give the horses a rest. It may seem like we're not exactly exhausted from ten hours…but I'm sure these poor animals are." He stopped his horse completely. Jack and Ana followed suit and hopped off their horses. That was when they noticed how heavily the beasts were breathing.
The young man kissed Elizabeth's cheek from behind, earning a winning smile from her, and swung his leg off the back of the horse. Then he reached up and hoisted her down when she swung both legs to the right side where Will stood.
They just stayed like that for a small time, Will's hands on her waist, gazing at each other, before Elizabeth started to lean upwards to her lover. As their lips met, she sunk into him and ignored the exasperated sigh from Jack.
"How can they bloody be attached to each other when it's SO BLASTED HOT OUT 'ERE!" He said, throwing up his arms. Ana just chuckled and shook her head saying, "Shut up, Jack. Do us all a favor and just shut up fer once, aye?" With a glum look at the female pirate, he turned and took some of the things off his horse and gave it some water.
As Elizabeth broke away from Will, she rubbed her nose with his and giggled. "It's hot out here," she said softly, still looking into his eyes. "I know," he said, just as softly. Will grinned and tapped her on the nose, only to walk around her and untie a large bag from his horse.
"Jack, get out the map, will ya?" Will asked, carrying the bag over to the middle of the circle of horses. The horses Will and Elizabeth bought were actually intelligent, forming a circle of shade for the overheated travelers. Elizabeth gave each horse a pan of water to drink from. "We shan't forget our horses. They are working harder than us," Elizabeth said as she came back to kneel next to Will. He smiled up at her momentarily before Jack came stumbling over with the large map.
Will and Jack spread it out in front of them on the sand. "Alright, this is where we are?" Jack pointed on the map. "Yes, and that means we have a six hour ride to Cueta. Not bad," Will said, raising his eyebrows.
"We made good time," Ana said as she stood, wiping the sand off her knees. "Aye, that we did," Jack said, looking up at her. "So…Will, when we 'eadin' out, eh?" Jack asked, sitting down fully from his kneeling position and lying in the shade of the horse.
"When we feel right…I'd give it another ten minutes or so…the horses need their rest too," Will answered, looking over the map.
Elizabeth leaned against Will, looking over his shoulder at the map. "I need something to mark this with," he said absent-mindedly. Elizabeth smiled and wrapped her arms around him. "Why?" She asked.
"I'm going to map out our course from Cueta…I need to figure out where we need to be and when…we've got too many people after us to be fooling around," he said, worriedly. Jack looked up at him. "We ain't foolin' around boy," he said.
"I know that, Jack…but I still need to do this," the younger pirate said, biting his lip and looking at the map determinedly. Elizabeth gasped, startling Will out of his thinking. "What? What is it, Elizabeth?" He asked quickly.
"I've got an idea," she said, snapping her fingers. She stood quickly and stumbled to a bag. "I remember looking through the things you and Jack got from Toup Naroubi and seeing…" she paused as she rummaged through the bag hanging on the saddle. "…this!" She ran back with a small stick in her hand. The stick had a liquid the came out of the end. "They use this for drawing, I think they said…and that liquid comes out of the end and makes marks on the paper. Try it!" She handed it to Will as he grinned at her, proudly.
The young man started making a line at the top of the map. "It works! Elizabeth, you're a genius!" He said, turning and taking her face in his hands, kissing her. She latched her arms around his neck and kissed him back.
Jack groaned and flopped back down. "My God, every two seconds, will they ever stop!" He moaned, putting his hands over his eyes.
Will broke away from Elizabeth and started making his lines on the map. "From Cueta, we might have to get back in some sort of boat. And we'll follow the land bend until we get to Algiers…" he mumbled, more to himself than anyone else.
"Where's that?" Ana asked, sitting down on the other side of the map, watching intently as Will drew a line around the land bend and stopped at Algiers. "Algeria," Elizabeth answered, looking up from the map at Will.
They had been riding for nearly six hours when they spotted a town on the horizon. "That's it! I see it!" Jack said, riding in the front of the group. Will, who had slightly dozed off, jerked awake quickly. "Huh, what? We're there!" He sat up straight and shook Elizabeth gently. "Elizabeth, wake up…wake up Liz."
She slowly opened her eyes and yawned. "What happened?"
"Yeh fell asleep, lass…and I don't blame yeh, 'cause yeh kin," Jack grumbled looking over at her, nestled in Will's arms.
Will laughed and pulled Elizabeth to him tighter. "Hold on, love," he said, starting to make his horse pick up speed. Elizabeth squealed with delight as the horse started speeding towards Cueta.
"Oh, no yeh don't," Jack said, a mischievous glint in his eye. He started racing after Will, leaving Ana Maria in the dust. "Men," she growled, as she sped her horse after them.
Will and Elizabeth slid to a halt at the town's outskirts, noticing something disconcerting about it. "What styles of buildings do these look like to you, Elizabeth?" Will asked, narrowing his eyes. Elizabeth was about to speak up when Jack pulled his horse up next to them, panting harder than his horse.
"Woo! That was a hell of a ride!" He said, laughing. Ana Maria came up on their other side and rolled her eyes. "Was that really necessary, boys?"
"Jack, I have a bad feeling about this place," Will said, looking at the buildings. He swung off the horse and tied it up to the post. Then he walked further into the town. The people looked different than he'd expected. Men were brandishing swords and weapons.
Elizabeth watched Will curiously. "Where's he going?" Elizabeth asked. "He's acting strangely, yeh," Jack said, getting off his horse and tying it to the post also. Will came running back, quickly.
"No, get back on your horse Jack…now!" Will said, urgently. It took him one jump to catapult himself onto his horse behind Elizabeth, kicking the tie off the post. "Elizabeth, remember how I questioned the style of the buildings?"
"Yes, I…"
"Well, they're Spanish…Spanish buildings. We're in Spanish territory," Will said, cutting her off.
"Oh hell!" Jack said, jumping back on his horse.
"Halt, all of you," they heard from behind them. Will and Jack looked at each other helplessly, as Elizabeth clutched the hand Will had draped over her stomach tighter.
"Why sir, we aren't doin' nothin'…jus' doin' a little bit o' travelin' wif the wives!" Jack said, turning and grinning.
The grin was wiped from his face as he saw the Spanish uniform and seven identical uniforms pointing muskets behind him. Jack nudged Will as the younger pirate turned his horse around and saw them. He dropped his head dejectedly on Elizabeth's shoulder in front of him as she gasped.
"You must be Jack Sparrow and…ah, William Turner. Kidnapping the governor's daughter…tsk tsk tsk." He laughed with a sneer.
"And you must be—who are yeh?" Jack asked, leaning his forearms on his horse.
Miffed, the navyman said, "I am Colonel Gutierrez…Colonel Antone Gutierrez…and you are all under arrest," the man said, smirking. The seven men behind him came to the adventurers and put their hands on them. Jack was torn off his horse, as well as Ana.
Two men pulled Will right off from behind Elizabeth, causing him to yell and fight back when he hit the ground. "Let go of me, you bastards!" He yelled. Elizabeth yelled for him, but the men had already taken her off the horse also.
"Lock them away in rooms!" Gutierrez barked in his Spanish accent. "Which rooms, senor?" A soldier asked.
"I don't care, just make sure they won't get out, si?" He yelled, watching as the prisoners were led away. Will struggled as much as he could against the power of the two Spaniards behind him, before they got tired of it and kicked him in the stomach. When he was hunched over, they pulled him along. "Subsistencia que va, rata!" One spat at him.
When they were brought to secluded rooms, one of the soldiers unlocked the door and threw Jack in. "'Ay mate, watch it!" He yelled, smoothing down his shirt as he sat on the floor. Next, Will was shoved in. He slid across the floor and into the wall, shaking himself and standing woozily. Ana stumbled in, being caught by Jack sturdily.
"Where's Elizabeth? Where are they taking her?" Will asked, seeing them close the door. "Elizabeth!" He screamed at the door. He heard them lock it just as he reached it. He pounded on the door. "What are they doing with her!" He yelled to Jack. "Elizabeth!"
"You know, you are muy hermosa, Senorita Swann," Colonel Gutierrez drawled, touching Elizabeth's cheek.
She struggled against the bonds they had placed around her. She was tied to a chair in his office, a gag placed in her mouth and a piece of cloth tied over it and behind her head. She growled at him, a tear shining in her eye.
After more muffled obscenities, the man laughed and untied the cloth around her mouth. Elizabeth spit the gag out at his face and yelled, "Bastard!" Gutierrez narrowed his eyes at her. "What is—What is that?" He turned to his fellow soldiers who shrugged.
"Oh, let me make it easier for you—híbrido!" She was fuming angry. The man's eyes opened wide as he stood straight and started laughing. "Did you hear that, amigos? She called me a—Hahaha!" He laughed, sitting on his desk. "A spirited one, si? You know, if that English bruto, Jackson didn't want you in one piece… it would be adiós hora para usted." He accentuated the accent by dragging his finger over her lips.
"Get your dirty hands off of my face!" She screamed at him, moving her head as far away from him as possible.
"And you let that dirty pirate touch you! Or does he love you enough to let you keep you innocence," he said, laughing with his men.
"How dare you sully my honor, Colonel Gutierrez! Then it's true what the English say about the Spanish, is it?" She smirked, knowing how easy to trick this fool was. "Que? What do they say?"
"That you're all dirty, rotten, scoundrels with no hearts and can't fight unless it's for money."
He growled. "If that Jackson wasn't paying us heartily for this, I would just kill you all with my bare hands!" He yelled.
"He's paying you?" Elizabeth asked, narrowing her eyes. "Si, we're keeping you, your lover, and his friends until the English can come and claim you…then they do what they want with you."
Elizabeth's eyes narrowed.
Two hours later…
"Where is she!" Will asked. He was pacing back-and-forth in the small room, while Ana sat with her head on the desk and Jack lied on the bed. "Will, sit!" He said finally. "I can't! I'm stuck in here while Elizabeth's out there with that Spaniard and who knows what's happening to her!" Will said, sliding down to the floor, head resting on his knees. He wringed his hands in front of him.
Footsteps were heard coming down the corridor. "Uh oh," Jack muttered, sitting up.
Spanish arguing was heard outside before the door slammed open. All three of the pirates were grabbed and walked out of the room.
A few minutes later, a door was opened and Will was thrown into a furnished room. "You are staying here til morning," one man said in broken English. The other grinned at him and laughed, slamming the door in his face.
Jack and Ana were taken and thrown into a room down the hall. Jack just lied there on the floor. "Why can't we just stay in one room…why must they move us every hour?" He asked his companion.
"Dun't ask me," Ana sighed, lying on the bed.
Elizabeth was untied from her chair and practically dragged to a room. She heard banging inside of it, which frightened her immensely. Nothing could make that much banging except, maybe a contraption used for punishment…
The door was jerked open and she was thrown into strong, but familiar arms. The door was slammed shut behind her as the arms tightened their grip on her. She broke away and looked up.
"Will!" She yelled, jumping back into his arms. Elizabeth buried her head in his neck, feeling safe and warm in his arms again. "Oh, Will…I'm so glad you're alright!" She breathed in his scent and squeezed tighter. She had never wanted him so badly as she had in that room with those disgusting, putrid men looking at her.
"Are you alright, Elizabeth?" He asked, stroking her hair gently. She nodded into his neck, squeezing him even tighter. "Whoa, Liz—I have to breathe," he said, gasping. Elizabeth loosened her grip on him and giggled slightly, wiping away the tears the sneaked out of her eyes.
"Did they do anything to you? What'd they do?" He held her back a little. "Are you sure you're alright?" He looked intensely into her eyes.
Elizabeth nodded. "They just interrogated me, but I got some things out of that stupid lot."
Will grinned. "That's my girl," he said, proudly, pulling her to him and kissing her. He pulled her tighter, his hand at the base of her neck, running his other hand down to the small of her back. When they parted, Elizabeth put there noses together and giggled dreamily.
"It seems an English colonel named Jackson paid off the Spanish navy in these parts to find us. And they're keeping us here until Jackson and his men come to retrieve us…I know nothing beyond that." She walked to the bed and sat down.
"Norrington! Elizabeth, it's him! It just has to be! I have to tell Jack somehow!" Will looked around.
"How could he get word to Jackson this fast?" Elizabeth asked, standing.
"I don't know, but he'd find a way, I know it!" Will turned to the door. "I haven't checked to see if it was unlocked yet!" He sprung at the door and tried to open it, finding them locked in.
"Will, they aren't that stupid," Elizabeth said, hopelessly. Will stopped trying to get out and slumped his shoulders. The young woman stood and crossed to him. "Atleast this time our room is comfortable enough to sleep in," Elizabeth reasoned, shrugging.
"Yeah, I suppose so…I just can't believe I didn't see it on the map before." Will turned his eyes downcast. "It would've saved us all this if I had realized Cueta was Spanish. You all trusted me and I failed you," Will said, eyes wide as he walked to the bed and fell onto it. Elizabeth walked after him. "It isn't your fault William…if anyone's fault it's Corday's, if you think about it. I mean, he's the one who told us to come this way," she said, hovering her upper half over his and leaning her head on her hand.
She was completely surprised when Will shot up. "Corday! That bastard! That French bastard! It was him!" Will smacked his fist into his open hand, wishing it was Jacque's face. "He was working for them! I didn't trust him, but you all did! The one time you guys don't listen to me, I'm right!" He was going to continue, but Elizabeth's mouth crushed over his to silence him.
His comment was muffled as he sank into her kiss. Elizabeth broke away from him, looking straight in his eyes. "William, shut up now." Will nodded and brought her lips to his again with the hand at the back of her neck.
Elizabeth pushed Will onto his back, laying them both down on the bed. "Will, comfortable bed…" Elizabeth drawled as she broke away and sat up, eyeing him warily.
Will leaned up on his elbows and smirked at her, wiggling his eyebrows. "Wanna make use of it?" He asked, immediately covering his face and waiting for her to smack him. When nothing came but a giggle, he confusedly uncovered his face, peaking out from his arms.
Elizabeth moved his arms away from his face and crawled up to him. "You're despicable." Will was shocked as she laid on top of him. "Whatever happens tomorrow, Will, we'll always have tonight," she said, covering his lips with hers.
She tucked her hand underneath his head, slightly stroking his hair back. Will wrapped his arms around her but stopped when she started standing again. Elizabeth took his hands and pulled him to stand in front of her. Will put a hand to her cheek and looked straight into her eyes. "Are you sure?" He asked her.
"I've never been so sure of anything in my life, Will." A tear squeezed out of her eye, dripping down to her chin. Will smiled softly and wiped it away. "I love you Elizabeth," he muttered, before pulling her into the most passionate kiss Elizabeth had ever felt in her whole life.
They stayed in each other's arms kissing like that for minutes at a time before they both lost breath and moved their lips. Will's lips never left Elizabeth's skin though, as he trailed down her cheek and to her neck.
Elizabeth latched her fingers onto Will's bare straps, as his weapons were stripped from him when they were captured, and pulled them off of his strong shoulders. Will reluctantly pulled away from Elizabeth to get the straps off completely and went back to Elizabeth to kiss again.
She started unbuttoning the dark shirt that adorned Will's chest, but couldn't keep her mind on it with him kissing her like that, so she broke away from him to continue. Will fastened his hands to the sides of her face and set their foreheads together. "I love you," he murmured to her.
When she got his shirt undone, she pushed it off of his shoulders, dragging her hands over his chest and back, kissing his jaw line lovingly. "I love you too, Will."
The pirate's hands dragged down Elizabeth's face, down her neck, over her shoulders, and to the buttons at her front as she kissed up his face to his lips. Will unbuttoned her shirt to her middle, then waited for any sign of permission from his lover before stripping it off her shoulders.
Elizabeth broke away, feeling a slight touch from his hands on her stomach. She looked straight into Will's eyes and nodded slightly but enough for him to know.
With a sigh, Elizabeth allowed Will to remove her shirt from her body, dropping it on the floor next to him. She bit her lip in apprehension as she watched for Will's reaction to seeing her upper body exposed. Will grinned in awe and brought her bare upper half against his. "You're the most beautiful woman to ever live, Elizabeth," he murmured into her hair. Elizabeth smiled and nuzzled her head into his neck, setting a sweet kiss onto his collar bone.
Elizabeth's hands unconsciously moved down to the belt on William's pants and started unbuckling it. Will smirked against her cheek and kissed her neck, clutching her slim waist as his lover slowly pulled his belt out of the loops. Will kissed Elizabeth on the lips softly and lovingly, causing Elizabeth to lose her grip on the belt and drop it on the floor as she wrapped her arms around his neck. The young woman's hand traveled to the tie holding back Will's hair and pushed it gently to the floor.
Elizabeth broke away from his kiss reluctantly and bent down to pull off her boots as fast as she could. When finished, she looked up at Will, who had started tracing her face with callused, yet soft, fingertips. He smiled softly down at her and received a smile back. Elizabeth slowed herself down, which was more than she could say for her heart, which was fluttering faster than a hummingbird.
Standing, she kissed Will's stubbled chin and latched her fingers to the button of Will's trousers. Undoing it, she started pushing them down. Will was starting to kiss her ear and moving down to her neck. Losing all thoughts, Elizabeth let go of the hem of his trousers and placed each hand on either side of the pirate's face. Her eyes closed, Elizabeth was in a dream as she barely felt her love remove his hands from her back, due to the attachment of his lips to her neck.
Will tugged his trousers down, revealing himself completely, stepping out of the pants and pushing them out of the way with his foot. He then pulled Elizabeth plush to his body and moaned into her hair.
Elizabeth's eyes shot open as she felt him against her leg through the fabric of her pants. She looked down as saw that Will had absolutely nothing covering any part of his body. She kissed him then, pulling her trousers off her long legs and wrapping her arms around his chest. "Will, I love you," she said, looking straight into his eyes as they broke away. The darkness of the room hid most of everything, but Elizabeth still blushed as she watched Will's eye rove over her body.
Will took her hands and pulled her gently over to the bed, sitting down and waiting for her to sit next to him. Instead of sitting next to him, though, Elizabeth sat on his lap, kissing him with her hands on either side of his face. He wrapped his arms around her and laid back against the sheets, letting his hands roam over her body as she lay on top of him, still kissing him.
With one hand, as the other was busy with other things, Will clutched the top of the sheet next to him and pulled it down. He tenderly pushed Elizabeth off of him and motioned her to get under the covers, of which she did gladly due to her self-consciousness. She was so happy Will was such a caring man, because she'd never had another man (not even her father) see her completely undressed and it unnerved her to be in this state with her lover now.
Once he saw that she was completely covered by the sheets, Will laid atop the sheets next to her and kissed her, breaking her barrier with his tongue. Elizabeth broke away after a few minutes to breathe, allowing herself time to wrap her arms about him and pull him onto her.
With a sheet between them, the lovers kissed the other's body until Will moved his lower half off of her and moved his hand under the sheet. He started stroking Elizabeth's side, causing her to whimper into his mouth as he kissed her over and over again.
Finally, with a small unladylike grunt, she shoved Will off of her and lifted the sheets, waiting for him to get in. Looking into his Elizabeth's eyes intensely, he climbed beneath them and started kissing her along her face.
Elizabeth put her hands on his waist and positioned his body over hers. Looking straight into her eyes, Will pushed himself slowly into her. Elizabeth gasped, clutching at his back in pain. "I'm sorry," he whispered into her ear as he laid still, wanting her to get used to the feeling.
The young woman opened her eyes and drowned at once in her pirate lover's dark brown, intense eyes as they trained themselves on her. Without a thought, Elizabeth shifted higher on the bed for comfort, but moaned when he moved within her.
Making sure she was ready first, she nodded to Will who started kissing the teardrops away from her face as he started moving slowly within her.
After a long time, Elizabeth flipped Will onto his back, their limbs tangled together as they made love. Murmuring words of love to each other, the two lovers kissed then, unconsciously speeding their pace slightly.
It seemed hours to both Will and Elizabeth before they were finished. They had no idea how many times they'd flipped themselves over in their passion, but Will ended up on top of Elizabeth.
Will breathed raggedly into Elizabeth's hair, pulling himself off of her and lying next to the woman he loved more than anything else in the world.
"I love you Elizabeth—more than life itself, I love you," he said, looking her straight in the eyes.
Elizabeth smiled, letting a tear drip down to the pillow below her head. "I love you also, Will." She leaned closer to him and kissed his lips softly, scooting closer to him and resting her head beneath his chin. "This was the most wonderful night of my life, William Turner. Thankyou," she whispered, hugging him tighter.
"I feel the same," he muttered, hearing her breathing even out, knowing she slept.
Will craned his neck and kissed her nose. "I'll always take care of you, my love…always," he said, shutting his eyes and falling asleep with her clutching at him.
The next day was going to determine whether or not this would be there last time together or not. Both lie in each other's arms, thinking about happy thoughts, starting a life together, almost forgetting what was to come when the sun peaked over the horizon outside of that room.
(A/N:) Ok, everybody...I know this might be EYE-POPPING for all the young'uns out there, but honestly...the story seriously had to have that part. I needed to show their love and you also need to know this is what they think will be the last time they can ever be together...the ONLY time.
So, anyways...how was it?
I'm really very sorry about the OVER TWO WEEK wait...I never meant for it to get out of control like this, I promise! That first week was hectic though, I swear. I was so stressfully busy that I'd cry in my sleep. I had classes from 8 AM- 4 PM and then I'd go right to my class from 5 PM- 7 PM, right after that, I'd have to do my homework and sleep. It was a cycle all week.
And this week I started writing it, but my parents did something crapped up to the computer and made me do a bunch of chores. And THEN this weekend I went to San Diego til yesterday. I wrote about seven pages all yesterday, and now...here it is. DONE! FINALLY! (cries with relief)
I hope you guys forgive me and don't kill me! I'll die if you kill me! Then no more story! AHHH! ...well, yeah-of course I'll die if you kill me. (smacks forehead) Geez...anyways, here are the review thanks.
melleh1: Melleh! I miss you so! I hope your computer is fixed soon because I LURVE YOU! And thanks for the RP's...you know what I mean...I LURVE YOU!
rollinpeaches: Oh man, you rock, seriously! I blushed. (blushes again) There I go again. And sorry about the monkey trying to steal your Louis Vuitton. I hope my chapter didn't bring back bad memories. TEEHEE!
Things-One-and-Two: I love Will too! And yes, I understood what you meant. I'd been hoping for that effect. Ah, and si, si...el espanol en el chaptero...I don't know how the hell to say chapter in Spanish and I can't be bothered to look. Muahahaha! Love ya, MJ. And thankyou!
A Bit Closer Johnny: Thankyou! I'm excited to go there! I'll never get to though because my parents love their low budget vacations. "Oh, Karen, let's drive to Arizona! Nice and FREAKING HOT THERE!" Geez, I seriously come back from Arizona as a puddle.
Johnny'shumiliatedgrape: Teehee! I liked the first movie as it was...but if the first movie had gone like this, I wouldn't mind much because then I'd be a bijillionaire! WOOOO! Thanks for the review! (thinks about what she'd do with a bijillion dollars)
piglet12345: Thankyou thankyou thankyou times SEVEN! And I updated. See? (points to story)
JohnnysDoll84: Don't worry, Chrissy...I plan on making some darkness shine through. (sings) I believe in a thing called LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE! GUIATAAAR! Ohhh lord, forget that happened. Hehe...get it? Darkness, like the band? Hehe...ahem. HAHAH! 31 Flavors is RIGHT! Ok, so anyways, love...I LOVE YOU! You're like, my role model!
Drama Queens rule: You should take something for that cough, love. Mehehehe. Anywho, I agree she's gorgeous and the world is unfair at that! But you're hilariously cool, I must say. And I'm not dancing, you'll be happy to know. (grin)
rockergurl13: Thankyou! Thankyou so mucho! And I have no idea how they become so long. I guess it starts flowing and doesn't stop. (shrug) And I agree, longgood. Teehee. Thanks so much for reviewing, and don't worry about your absence...you're here now, verdad!
Lovely Raven Sparrow: I'm so sorry about your mum! I hope she's alright! I'd send you some cure stuff for her, but I'm kinda too dumb to make medicine or buy the right kind. You're an extremely fun reviewer and I have to thank you for being so AWESOME the whole time I've been writing. (hands you a trophy) This is for your incredible coolness! P.S. They did "IT"
WillsOneLove: I'm glad you loved my chapter so much, Cait...because you are SOOOO incredibly TIGHT! Seriously, you are SO incredibly tight! Am I repeating myself! OK, that's fine! Because you are SO incredibly tight...AGAIN!
jean: You're tight too. Teehee! Thanks for the review!
Kelsey Estel: That's the most flattering bit I've ever heard on here. You really think I could make this into a book if I change the names and some of the places? STELLAR! (hangs ten)
Alright, everybody. That's it! Smooth sailing! And I'll see you next time!
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUN!
Karen
cha-CHING!