AN – thanks for those lovely reviews! Now the story's really going to start… this chapter is called "Rhyme". I've structured it to be similar to the episode Fright Before Christmas, give you guys something familiar to begin with. I want to thank my roommate for editing this and for enjoying the idea.
For this chapter:
GW – Ghost Writer
DF – Danny Fenton
MF – Maddie Fenton
M.L – Mr. Lancer
BG – Box Ghost
DP – Danny Phantom
Oh and just one more thing; there's a petition that you can sign to save Danny and an address where you can send your thoughts by snail mail. Check out http/ hometown (dot) aol (dot) com/zcat6/SAVEDANNYPHANTOM (dot) html
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L.O.V.E.
Chapter 1: Rhyme
(GW) This story exists
To prove my skill.
They won't know I'm here
But they'll have their free will.
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We start with young Danny
Trying to write poetry
For the girl he is crushing,
But failing miserably.
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(DF) Roses are red
Violets are blue
I know you like me
And I really like you
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We should be together –
Oh man, this is bad.
(GW) Danny said as he tore
Sheet from pad.
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(DF) I will get this right
If it takes me all night.
(MF) Oh Danny, dear,
Time to turn out your light.
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(GW) Danny sighed in frustration
As he put things away
And set his clock early
To start the next day.
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Danny yawned as he woke
Before the morning sun
But worked really hard
And got the deed done.
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(DF) There, that should do it,
Poem, rose, and letter.
'From a secret admirer'
I hope that this'll get her.
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She'll meet me tomorrow
Outside of the school,
But until that time
I'll play it cool.
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(GW) Once in school, Danny took
His gifts in his hand
But between him and Val's locker
Mr. Lancer did stand.
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(M.L) Valentine's presents?
(GW) Lancer asked with a grin.
(M.L) A little advice for
The heart you would win.
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Take a look at this photo;
She's in love with me.
(GW) Danny looked and then thought,
(DF) Is that his sister I see?
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(M.L) That's how you do it.
See these gifts left behind?
(DF) Thanks, (GW) Danny said in a wince.
(DF) I'll keep that in mind.
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(GW) Escaping the lonely teacher,
Upon Val's locker he did place
The poem, the rose, the letter,
Then found a hiding space.
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But before the girl arrived,
There was a distraction.
The Box Ghost had flown in
And set some boxes in action.
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With arms overhead, old Box Ghost cried,
(BG) Fear my Chocolates of DOOM!
(GW) Gath'ring all secret presents.
The gifts filled the room.
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Already hidden from sight,
Danny turned to a ghost.
The students were running mad.
Then Dan yelled, (DP) Dude, you're toast!
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(GW) Danny shot the first blast
And blocked the counter attack.
Then through the roof threw his foe
Shouting, (DP) And don't come back!
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(GW) Some gifts were damaged,
But luck'ly not his one.
So now, dear reader, we'll leave it here
The fun's just begun!
