AN – this chapter is called "Cinquain". I've read a lot of varying rules for this type of poem, and the one I'm going with is as follows: five lines containing a specific number of words each – 1, 2, 3, 4, and 5.
New voices this chapter:
Jz – Jazz Fenton
Jk – Jack Fenton
Next chapter's going to be a lot of fun! On a different note, I just got my flight info and I'm leaving really early in the morning on the 12th, so the last chapter of this will have to be posted on the 11th. That's the closest I could get to the 14th… ah well. Anyways, I hope you guys find pleasure in reading this till then! Take care!
L.O.V.E.
Chapter 4: Cinquain
(GW) Evening.
Fenton Works.
Danny sulked inside.
What had he done?
He kissed Paulina, not Valerie.
-
Also,
His friends
Were pretty upset.
Well, Sam was, anyways.
She glared and wouldn't speak.
-
Tucker
Was torn.
On one hand,
Danny had kissed Paulina!
Then again, Danny kissed Paulina.
-
Valerie
Wasn't there.
Lucky for him.
She wanted Phantom dead.
And he kissed another girl.
-
She
Wouldn't know,
But Danny did.
The guilt was overwhelming,
And so was the confusion.
-
What
Was it
His heart wanted?
Danny sighed and paced
The length of his room.
-
Knocking,
Jazz entered.
(Jz) Hey, little brother.
(GW) She stopped and looked.
(Jz) Something you wanna talk about?
-
(DF) Um,
Not really.
(GW) Danny sighed again.
(DF) Ok, fine. I'll speak.
I kissed Paulina… as Phantom.
-
(Jz) Oh,
(GW) Jazz said.
(Jz) Does Sam know?
(DF) Yah. Why? (Jz) Never mind
(GW) Danny then told her everything.
-
(Jz) Danny,
Ghost problems
You can handle,
But matters of heart
You seem to make disastrous!
-
Here,
Let's go
Down to eat
And I'll help you
Figure out what to do.
-
(GW) In
The kitchen
They found Jack
Messing with some gizmo,
Concentrating hard to perfect it.
-
(DF, Jz) Hey,
(GW) They said.
(Jk) Hey, Danny, Jazz.
What do you think?
It's for your mother tomorrow.
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(DF) For
Valentine's Day?
You actually remembered?
(Jk) How could I forget?
Every street corner in this
-
Town's
Advertising it.
I would have
To be some kind
Of idiot not to notice.
-
Oops,
I forgot
Your dinner cooking!
Must turn off stove!
Ack! I overcooked it! Darn…
-
(GW) Suppressing
Their snickers,
Danny and Jazz
Set the dinner table.
(Jk) So, how was school today?
-
(DF) Fine,
(GW) Danny muttered.
(Jz) No it wasn't.
Danny kissed a girl,
But not who he likes.
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(DF) Thanks,
(GW) Danny frowned.
(DF) I didn't mean
To, it just happened.
(Jk) Well, son, a lesson maybe
-
To
Be learned.
I'm sure you'll
Figure out the right
Thing to do. Now, where's
-
Your mother? Supper is ready.
(GW) The Fentons sat down,
Enjoying their meal
This Valentine's
Eve.