Heya people! I check it today and wow! I got 31 hits! It would be nice if some of those people had reviewed...oh well! Can't ask for everything! Just glad that some people thought my story sounded interesting! I had a different person 'Peer Edit' it hehe so it might notsound exactly like chapter one. But the editting is just for grammer and spelling so it shouldn't sound too different. The whole story is mine! Hehe.
Before the disclaimer,I would like to say that in the first chapter, and from here on, they might use the last names, mainly for Riku for now because he's the 'new kid.' I decided to do that because I thought it would make the story more interesting since in Japan you use the last name a lot if you don't really know the person and here comes Riku saying "use my first name!" So I thought that might be interesting. Oh yeah and for the title of the story, that's a real word. I looked it up and its a synonym for 'mixed up.' I thought it was cool so I used it.
Disclaimer: Same as before, I don't own any of the characters or the game Kingdom Hearts. The characters and the game belongs to Square and Disney.
After racing through the halls, practically beating the school's track record, I sat in a bathroom stall for a while. And missed all my classes. But that's okay, because I had a problem that needed to go away. And it eventually did...after I missed all my classes and I was so sure I was going to get detention... a lot of detentions. I heard the door swing open as I was washing my hands because I did have to go to the bathroom.
"So Sor-ah," Oh it's him. "What did you eat ten bean burritos this morning?"
"No I didn't!" I huffed and went over to the thing that gave out paper towels. What is that called? My eye twitched as there were no more and I turned around to see the sexy man smirking at me.
"I have five," I corrected him. What? Bean burritos taste good. I'm sure you like them. Or something else from some taco place.
"Had five you mean."
"Oh shut it." I started to shake my hands really fast to dry them off and water droplets went everywhere. All over my shirt, and pants, and the floor, and the mirrors. But Riku was miraculously untouched by them. Stupid magical hotness made them bounce off I bet.
"So, ready to go shopping?" I shook my head.
"I got homework to do."
"We didn't get any homework in the last few classes. They wanted to give me a break since it's my first day."
"Oh I see."
"Yeah. So, you ready?" I shrugged and something hit me hard in the face.
"What the hell?" I said and rubbed my face and saw my decrepit book bag at my feet.
"You left it in your hurry to go to the bathroom."
"Thanks." I picked it up and exited the bathroom, Riku following me. As we walked through the halls, trying to spot if Kairi was coming so I could hide, I saw that all the girls, and some guys, were looking at Riku and whispering. Back off people, he's mine. Well not yet. Wait, is he straight or not? I wouldn't think so with those leather pants of his.
"Sora!" No! I forgot to look behind me too! Instantly I was brought to the ground as some heavy red head by the name of Kairi pounced on me. "Where are you going? Aren't you going to help me and Selphie make those banners? 'Cause we really need to make them because it's important to let the student body know-" I looked at Riku and mouthed help me, but he just laughed at me. That bastard. "So that's why we need them today!"
"Sorry Kairi, but I'm going out with Riku today." She stared at me and then looked at Riku.
"Erotico you mean?" Uh duh?
"Yeah, Riku."
"Using first names already?" She gave me a look that usually meant that she was annoyed or frustrated or one of those feelings.
"He's used to the U.S. They use first names there." She looked at Riku who smiled at her and then she looked back at me and got up. Yes! I can breathe! I got up and dusted off my pants, not that it mattered since they were so dirty anyway.
"Okay then. I'll see you tomorrow." She looked at Riku one finally time before skipping off. What's her problem?
"Is she, like, your girlfriend?" Riku looked at me questioningly.
"Not in a million years."
Holy noodles. He took me to the mall. In Tokyo. How? By using the super train that he had all access rides to. He paid for my ticket after I remembered I forgot to bring money. So after I sat on the train staring out the window with my face on the glass, we got to the mall.
"So what are you getting your mom?" I asked as we entered it.
"Oh well she wanted a high definition TV monitor, but I know that what she really wanted is a whole new computer. She wanted me to save the money." He said as he walked quickly through the mall to the computer store. After I played Solitaire a couple of times until I won, and turned around to see Riku smiling at me.
"Having fun?"
"You're done?"
"I was done ten minutes ago."
"Oh." Well then what the hell are we still doing here? I closed out the game and jumped off the stool. Yes I had to jump. No, I am not short. I'm vertically challenged.
"I was waiting for you to be done." I felt the heat rise in my face as I smiled and started to walk out of the store.
"Do you want one?" I turned around and looked at him as he was looking over at the computer I was just playing on.
"One what?"
"A new computer." HELL YES. I don't even have one! Well I do, but it shouldn't even be considered one. I want it so bad!
"No thanks." That's what I said though. Because my mother once told me, that you shouldn't let other people buy stuff for you all the time. You have to earn it. I am a good boy and I listen to my mom. Well, listened to her.
"You sure?" I managed to nod, hoping he didn't know that I secretly wanted it so badly. Phew he didn't.
"So where do you want to go, Sora?" I looked at him puzzled. I thought we were just buying for his mom?
"Well, In America, when you go to the mall looking for something, you normally don't only buy that."
"I have no money though."
"I'll pay for you." I shook my head.
"No you shouldn't."
"But that's what friends do. We are friends, aren't we?" He got me. Well maybe not. I just didn't feel like arguing with him anymore, if he wanted to buy me something, whatever. He loses the money. And no, I did not just give in so I could run around the mall wild and have him buy me what I wanted. I did it so I could run around the mall wild and only point out the things I REALLY wanted and have him buy it. That's two different things.
And what I really want are new clothes.
"You haven't found any outfit you like yet."
"I know." I sighed. I had tried on a lot of outfits, and had yet to find any I liked. I sat down on a bench and stared into the game store. I was about to say that I wanted to go in there when he started talking.
"Do you have an idea of what kind of outfit you would like?" Riku sat next to me and glanced at his watch.
"Uh..." Should I show him the drawings that I had? I had this perfect idea for an outfit I liked, or outfits since you could just change some details and the colors. Well whatever.
"Yeah," I reached into the book bag I was still carrying around and took out my drawing book. I handed it to him and he flipped it open.
"You drew these?" He glanced over at me and looked back at the page.
"Yeah, the really crappy ones that I draw at lunch."
"If this is crappy then I would like to see your good ones." He smiled at me and I kept staring at the game store. Oh look, Warcraft...
"Well, I think this could work." He said and got up and put it into his carrying bag.
"Hey!" I went to grab his bag as he pulled it away from me.
"Mother could make these for you."
"No you don't have to ask her to do that, that's too much!" My Mommy says that I shouldn't depend on other people to make my clothes! I have you know I don't make my clothes but I think you get the point.
"Mother would be ecstatic to have a challenge. This would make a nice birthday present to her," He said and he looked at me with these piercing eyes. Oh man, does he already know that I like to give out presents for birthdays and holidays? I mean other people do it, but I practically live for giving presents. Mostly because then I know I will get something good in return, but also because it's fun. I stopped flailing my arms to reach it and sighed.
"Fine." I crossed my arms and pouted.
"You shouldn't pout like that," He said and stood closer to me.
"It might make some people want to molest you," he looked down at me with a glint in his eyes.
"Uh I want to go to the game store!" I said quickly and ran into it so I could hide in the rows of shelves. I finally decided to go back to the front of the store and found it. Warcraft. Ah, How I've wanted this game. I was about to pick it up to bask in its glory when a gloved hand snatched it front in front of me.
"Is this what you were in a hurry to get?" He smirked and walked over to the counter.
"No! You don't have to buy it for me!" That thing was fifty bucks! I saw him open his wallet and pulled out a hundred dollar bill. My jaw must have dropped because Riku snickered as he handed it to the guy and waited for his change.
"I think you keep forgetting that I'm rich." He smirked as he put the change in his wallet and back into his pocket. He handed me the bag with the game in it and walked out of the store. After I was done gapping with my mouth open I hurried out after him to find him waiting near the doors of the mall.
"It's time to go back." He said and I followed him to the train station. He paid for my ticket again and we boarded it. The train ride back was nothing important, just me staring out the window at all the cool stuff moving by. When we got off the train at our stop Riku turned to me with a smile.
"Would you mind if you came over my house tomorrow? If my mother is to make the clothes right, she will need your measurements." I nodded.
"Great. Can you make it home from here?"
"I should be able to find it." I joked and Riku laughed softly.
"I'll see you tomorrow Sora!" He waved goodbye and left.
Phone coversation between Cloud, Leon, Sora and Tidus
"I don't know how Cloud got me to use an Internet screen name," Leon sighed.
"Oh come on Leon, it's fun!" Cloud said into the phone.
"So why is his screen name Mr. Sunshine?" Tidus asked as he threw the PS2 controller out of his hand and glared at the game over screen.
"Because he is Mr. Sunshine! Don't you see him smiling all the time at school?" Sora laughed.
"Aww, you hurt poor Sunshine's feelings." Cloud snickered into the phone.
"At least I didn't have an argument with Sora about who would get the screen name, I live to eat." Leon answered back.
"It wasn't fair, his apple pies were smaller then mine, and that's why he won the eating contest!"
"Off subject but Kairi said you went out with the new kid Sora," Tidus said.
"Who are you talking to?"
"Sora. Who else? It's not like you would go out with anyone else but-"
"Oh shut up!" Cloud pouted into the phone, even though they couldn't see it.
"Well, Sora, I didn't know that the rich kid was gay." Sora spit out his apple juice that he was drinking.
"It was not a date!" Sora growled into the phone, just before his stomach growled.
"Riight... okay." Sora pouted when he heard the laughing from the other sides. "Anyway, where did you go?"
"The mall."
"Really? Me and Leon were there today and we didn't see you." Cloud made a loud slurping sound into the phone as he tried to suck up the rest of the soda in his cup.
"We went to the one in Tokyo."
"WHAT!" Cloud and Tidus blurted out at the same time.
"And that wasn't a date?" Tidus snickered.
"It was not!"
"I don't know Sora… that sounds very suspicious to me..." Cloud trailed off.
"Shut it guys. If he says it wasn't one then it wasn't one." Leon said, making the others jump. Sora was so surprised he dropped the phone under his bed, a place where nothing ever comes back out of.
"Cloud are you ready to go?" Leon asked.
"Uh yeah, I'll be right there." Cloud answered as the sound of things flying through the air was heard in the background.
"Where are you guys going?" Tidus asked, wanting to know where the two 'friends' were going.
"None of your business," came Leon's monotone answer.
"Yeah, we're going somewhere you little kiddies shouldn't know of," Cloud laughed and Leon rolled his eyes.
"What happened? I lost the phone." Sora dusted off the phone and made a face as he quickly pulled off a piece of gum.
"Nothing! Bye guys, Leon I'll be right there!" Then Tidus and Sora heard two phones hang up.
"You think something's up?" Tidus asked.
"What?"
"Your so dense."
"Hey! I am not!"
"Oh, are you going to the game tomorrow?"
"Nope, Riku wants me to go over his house."
"I see..." Sora felt his face heat up.
"It's not a date!"
"Sure it isn't." Tidus snickered.
"Whatever, Delilah is nagging me to get off the phone. See ya Tidus!"
"Bye!" Click.
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