Warning this chapter contains more character death, and references to sexuality (nothing explicit) I don't own the incredibles by the way. Oh and you finally get to find out who hunter is, bet you couldn't see that coming...

Whoo! I made it to 11,379 words, that's 1535 word for this chapter alone, do you think there a bit long? Anyways, heres the next chapter hope you enjoy it.

The inside of the plane was dark and dingy, only lit by the slightest light from the overhanging light bulbs. It was empty, corridor after corridor of empty passages. They passed and enter doors which lead to nothing more than store rooms or bunks. It was all very basic, there where no decorations and furnishings, not even a stool.

After a few minutes the engines below them began to hum and the plane began to shake, Dan felt the weird sensation in the pit of his stomach that you get when a plane takes off. They where flying he realised, the jet had taken off. Dan turned to his sister and Dash, "you can both leave you know," Hhe told them, "You don't have to go through with this."

"He killed my farther," Dash replied, "So I ain't going to leave." Dan turned to his little sister, she looked so young he reflected, so innocent, he couldn't put her through this.

"Then you leave Vanish, go home and tell Mum and Dad what's happened.

"No." She replied, "I'm staying with you and Red Lightning."

"Vanish, I'm ordering you home I'm the oldest here, just teleport down. I'm not having you killed! I'd never forgive myself." The girl stubbornly refused to go and eventually Dan gave up trying, when she made her mind up he knew Ruth was impossible to budge.

They continued down the halls, looking into every room they passed, they found a armoury and armed themselves, it was strange to see the two 10 year olds carrying semi-automatic rifles. Somehow some of the innocence was lost. Dan also equipped himself with a combat belt containing grenades and C4 charges.

Eventually they reached a door far bigger and thicker than the rest, which Dan unable to budge no matter what he tried. He indicated to his sister, "If your going to stay here at least find out what's on the other side. But if it's anything bad I want you to teleport straight back here, okay? No hero stuff."

The girl nodded in agreement and disappeared with a slight pop, Dan waited for her to reappear but she didn't, suddenly from the otherside of the door a harsh voice emanated, it's words unintelligible. He heard his sisters voice in reply and yelled her name. The response was a a clatter of gunfire and scream, then the sound of something heavy hitting the floor with a slap.

Dan went bezerk, hitting the door with his fists, desperately trying to gain purchase on the metal. Dash yelled at him to stop and think about what he was doing. "The C4," the boy said, "Use that."

Dan nodded, realising that that was his only way in. Clamping the charge against the door he set it and pulled back round the corner, listening for the explosion. It cam and a huge cloud of dust and metal came flying down the corridor. Dash was round the corner immediately, but from the cry he gave Dan guessed it was not good news.

The boy was hunched over his sisters body, surrounded by a pool of blood. A single shot to the head had killed her, her bullet-proof suit no use at all. The smoke gradually cleared, revealing more off the room to Dans burred vision. He was crying, for all that he had hated his sister he had loved her, and now she was gone-all his fault. He could have forced her to leave, he could have blown the door first and not told her to scout ahead.

All his fault.

"Ahhh, poor little Danny boy, all sad because his little wrench is dead." A voice filled the room, coming from a black chair facing away from them. It's high back covered whoever was sitting in it.

Dan clambered to his feet, followed quickly by Dash. "Hunter." Dash breathed.

"Clever boy" The voice hissed, "You're a clever one aren't you, Dash Parr. You could have done well in school couldn't you, pity you won't live to do so."

"How do you know our names?" Dan yelled at the chair, if he could get Hunter monologing they could do something to stop him, it.

"How do you know out names?" the voice mimicked and laughed, "I know everything about you Dan Stockdale, I know where you live, your date of birth, your school, your GCSEs. I know that your mummy and daddy want another child. I know that you used to go out with Clair Hobbs, I know everything, I know…"

"Stop it." Dan yelled,

"Oh, you don't lie that do your Danny, let's move onto Dash then."

"No. Lets move onto you shall we Hunter? Who are you?" The voice laughed at the request and Dan got the sense of a malicious smile coming from the other side of the chair.

"You think I would tell you who I am? I am no fool, I know the dangers of explaining my plan to the wrong person. I have studied all the villains, found out there weaknesses and strengths, and I have none of them. I made very sure of that."

"maybe that's your weakness." Dash piped up, the voice hissed at him.

"What do you mean by that?"

"Your over-confident in your strengths, that could be a weakness?"

"Tell me more boy…" Hunter was intrigued by this, what did the boy mean? He wanted to know, he wanted to get rid of his weakness, become as strong as he could. Dan realised this too, and tried to use it to his advantage.

"What he means that if you don't have a weakness, how can you trap us? How can you snare us, if you had a weakness like telling people who you where you could draw us in and…"

"Shut up boy, I'm no fool!" Hunter yelled, his calm demander breaking. "I was no fool even before your farther broke every bone in my body, and I'm no fool afterwards." Dan looked towards dash in amazement, my farther or yours? He mouthed, Dash shrugged.

"What did my farther do?" Dan asked,

"Not your farther, his farther." He was obviously referring to Dash, "If it hadn't been for Bob Parr I would have been head of Insuracare by now, I would have been the Chairman of the biggest insurance company in the world! I'd have been rich, all because of his farther."

"Insuracare?" Dan asked,

"Company my dad used to work for."

The villain was still monologing. "Did you know almost half of all insurance payouts are thanks to supers? You didn't did you? That's millions of dollars being paid out every year thanks to Supers, think of the shareholders! But if there are no Supers then there will be no payouts so my new company, will rise, through my genius and lack of payouts I'll be richest man in the world. And no one can stop me."

"We can." Dash said,

"No you can't," There was a sound of typing and suddenly long metal arms shot out from the wall behind the two boys, grabbing the legs and arms and lifting them off the ground. "You will be my guests here aboard my plane. You have much to offer me, you are both clever and you, Dash have other talents that could be most useful."

"What talents?"

"Pleasurable ones, I will say no more, least it wreak the surprise. You two will watch as I hunt your family's to extinction, then I will kill you both myself, but first there's something I want you to see, Dash" The chair swung round to reveal a small man in a suit, his arms where bent in strange places as where his legs, his nose squashed flat, a device helped him breath, a mask coving the bottom of his face. His eyes stared at them through thick glasses. His hair was slicked sideways and a wheelchair stood in front of him. They could now see the array of screens that had stood in front of the man, showing every part of the aircraft, many of them showing pictures of them hung in front of him, particularly of Dash. "See Dash, see what your farther did to me?" Hunter asked, "You'll pay for it in pain, boy. And then you'll die. You'll both die of course, but you'll die most painfully."

Dan still couldn't believe that Hunter was this tiny man, this cripple. "Your Hunter?" he exclaimed,

"I am boy, and you'd better believe it. Now you two are just going to sleep for a bit, alright?" Dan noticed another metal arm protruding on his right had side, holding a needle tipped with some sort of liquid. He yelled and tried to pull his right arm away from the needle. He couldn't, the metal arm refused to budge even when he sued his powers.

The needle drove deep into his skin, he screamed as searing pain lanced into his brain, dimly aware of Dash screaming as well.

"Nighty Night," Hunter said, turning away. The two boys slept.

Mad insurence salesman on ramage!

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