Thanks for reviewing people! Come on I need more especially some ideas in them! Here is a great example of one I'd like to get:
purplelover: Have Xanna take over Alicia while underwater. And try to make the dialogue easier to follow. I'm loving it tho!
Since she was the
only one who did that, so far I'll probably use her idea.
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They were all doing their thing splashing in the water, having fun, and importantly… not having Sissy there to bother them! Jeremy asked, "I wonder why we haven't been having a X.A.N.A. attack lately, don't you?" Yumi said, "Well after Alicia fell into the digital sea anyways." Odd shivered and said, "That wasn't good news; please don't remind me of that." Jeremy said, "I'm getting bored now." Odd and Ulrich agreed. Ulrich said, "The guys and I are going to hit the road now. We're pooped." Odd said," Bye Alicia." Alicia replied, "Bye Odd." The boys left the pool.
Yumi questioned, "Alicia, are you two madly in love or something?" Alicia replied back, "I guess you can say so. But, it's for you to find out." Yumi said, "Whatever." Aelita, Yumi, and Alicia were all doing their things. Then Alicia ran up to the diving board and yelled from there, "Watch me jump off!" She actually dived off and was in the water swimming back over to them. Suddenly the big, blobby, shadow, thing came out. It slowly went into her ear and possessed her body. She was starting to drown in the water. Yumi and Aelita quickly swam over to her in the sight of her drowning in the water.
They picked her up and took her out of the water. They lay her down on the ground; she was fainted. A big crowd surrounded her; Aelita slowly picked Alicia's head up. Alicia was slowly waking up, but didn't know that she had the X.A.N.A. symbol in her eyes. Yumi went on the other side of Alicia. They both said, "Are you okay?" The X.A.N.A. symbol in Alicia's eyes blinked. Alicia made a noise, "Grr!" She then made an energy ball and threw it at Yumi and Aelita. They were thrown to the wall, and their backs hit it. Yumi said in a faint voice to Aelita, "She must be possessed." Aelita replied back, "But, why?" Yumi said, "Well she's only fought in Lyoko once, so she hasn't had much experience at all. It makes her vulnerable to X.A.N.A." Aelita said, "Just like Jeremy." Yumi had enough energy left in her to pick up her cell phone and call Jeremy.
Yumi
called him. He said, "Hello?" Yumi said back, "Hi Jeremy this
is Yumi; we have a problem. X.A.N.A has possessed
Alicia."
Jeremy
said, "Ok, you do sound exhausted. I'll call the others." Yumi
said, "Well if you know what it fells like to be sent flying into a
wall and hitting a wall hard, then you know how I feel." Jeremy
asked, "Aelita too?" Yumi said, "Yep." Jeremy said, "Poor
Aelita…" Yumi said, "Oh you don't even have any feelings for
me? How sad. Well I don't care." Jeremy said, "I'll get the
other two to get you guys… I mean ladies. Then we'll all meet at
the factory and go to Lyoko." Yumi asked, "What about the
possessed Alicia?" Jeremy said, "We'll just leave her
there. Unless she wants to chase after us then one of the guys will
have to fight her from getting into the factory and burning us to
smithereens." Yumi said, "Yeah we'd be too weak, and we need
you the "Computer Man" to do the stuff." Jeremy replied
confused, "Stuff?" Yumi said, "Oh well, bye." Jeremy said,
"By—" He didn't finish what he was going to say because Yumi
hung up on him. Jeremy went to the factory, got on the computer, and
called Ulrich. Ulrich said, "Hello?" Jeremy said, "We need you
at the pool now. The girls will tell you what's cooking." Ulrich
said, "Got it. I'll call Odd." They hung
up.
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(Hi, bye. Break, break, break dance! Break, break, break dance!
Odd's new theme song!)