You reviewers are so great. Here are some reviews I got… lately. If you have a question, idea/suggestion, or you don't get something I'll answer them. Here are some reviews like that from my good reviewers.
Silver HAWKEYE: add a new character to the lyoko crew named birdboy powers on lyoko controls monsters reverses attacks they monsters make deactivates the towers shoots fire and ice water and wind at will
I will try to, if it doesn't work just so all of you know I'm making a sequel to this so I'll make him in this book or book 2. It seems kind of confusing, but I'll try. Thanks for giving an idea!
purplelover: That was awesome! Can't wait for more! gets in fetle position I'll wait like this till thers more...
I'll try to update
sooner. I usually don't because of school, but when I get home I'll
update A.S.A.P. Thanks for the
review!
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Alicia and Odd walked into the room. Jeremy greeted them, "Hey." Odd said, "Hey, nice smile." Jeremy said, "I've been practicing it all day. Now go to the scanner room to get virtualized." Odd and Alicia went to the scanner room. Jeremy said on his computer thing, "Scanner Odd. Scanner Alicia. Transfer Odd Transfer Alicia. Virtualization!" Their hair flew up and they landed in Lyoko.
Aelita said, "Well now the whole crew is here and ready to go." Jeremy said, "The activated tower is located on the northeast part of the polar region. Aelita said, "That's not far from here." Odd yelled, "I see it!" Then monsters came out, they were crabs. Ulrich said, "Yumi and Odd, take Aelita to the tower. Alicia and I will fight the 3 crabs." Aelita, Odd, and Yumi started running toward the tower.
A crab shot a laser at Ulrich; he dodged it and yelled, "Triplicate!" He then made three of himself. Alicia said, "Whoa! Those are your powers…cool." Ulrich said, "Well that's only one." A crab shot at one of his clone things and it disappeared. Ulrich yelled, "Fusion!" He turned into one person again. Alicia once again said, "Cool. Got anything else?" Ulrich said, "Maybe." Then he yelled, "Super sprint!" He was sprinting over to Alicia who was about to get hit by the laser. Ulrich blocked her with his samurai sword. Alicia said, "You do have many tricks up your sleeve." Ulrich said, "Yep. How about I take down a crab, you do, and then we both do?" Alicia said, "Ok like a competition, bring it on!" Ulrich yelled, "Super sprint!" Her sprinted to the crab on the left and jumped on it he yelled, "Impact!" His sword killed the crab. Ulrich said, "Your turn, show me what you've got."
One of the two crabs remaining shot at her, but she put up a wall of icy rock to block the attack. Alicia said, "Impressed? I can do more than just that." She flew on an icy rock and landed on the crab's shell. She hit a sharp icy rock right on the X.A.N.A. eye symbol on the crab. It died. Alicia said, "Ha. Ha." Ulrich said, "Not bad, you've definitely improved from the last time you were here." Alicia made an angry face. Ulrich said, "Now its team work." Alicia said, "On the count of three…" They both said, "One, two… three!" Ulrich sprinted up to the shell while Alicia flew on a rock up onto the shell. Ulrich yelled, "Impact!" Alicia shrieked and hit an icy rock on the X.A.N.A. symbol. It was destroyed. Ulrich and Alicia gave each other a high five. Alicia said, "Let's go. The others need us." They ran closer to the tower where the others were located.
Yumi said, "Finally, you're here." Odd yelled, "These hornets are driving us crazy!" A laser from one shot out at him. Odd said, "Ouch." Jeremy said, "You lost 10 life points on that." Odd said, "It seems like that." Then that ball thing rolled over to the group. Aelita said, "Now you guys have more trouble." Yumi agreed, "Yep." Odd yelled, "Laser arrow!" The arrow missed the ball, but hit a hornet. Ulrich yelled, "Score!" Alicia yelled, "Go Odd!" She jumped up and threw her fist up in the air. She accidentally made an icy rock go in the air and not come down. Alicia said embarrassed, "Oops." Yumi said, "That's alright, you'll get the hang of it soon." Ulrich laughed, "I told you." Aelita questioned, "Told her what?" Ulrich said, "It's a long story about a competition." They all said, "Oh." Then Odd and Alicia said, "Go to the tower we'll stay here and fight all of the monsters." The others said, "Ok sure." They ran away with all of the hornets chasing them.
Alicia said, "I guess it's only you, me, and that big ball." Odd answered, "Yep." They kept fighting it. Then the dramatic music played. The ball shot the big beam, Odd was in the way, but Alicia pushed him over to save him. But it was too late. They landed in a somewhat awkward position. The beam hit them then they got devitalized. The dramatic music stopped and they were back at Earth.
At the Factory
Alicia and Odd got out of the scanners and went up to Jeremy. Jeremy said, "Welcome back to Earth again." Then they heard a weird noise in the elevator.
In Lyoko
Jeremy said, "You guys are now down by two." Ulrich said, "Ok, thanks Jerem." Yumi and Aelita said, "Jerem?" Ulrich answered, "What? It's a new nick name." Jeremy said, "Ulrich, you're worse than Odd." Ulrich said, "Thank you." The hornets kept shooting like crazy. Ulrich yelled, "Aelita, go, run…now!" Aelita ran to the tower and went inside. The hornets then shot at Yumi and Ulrich and they were too devitalized.
At the Factory
The possessed Sissy entered the room where Jeremy, Alicia, and Odd were. Sissy made the noise, "Grr!" Alicia screamed, "Ahh! Help!" Jeremy said, "Soon it will be all over… I hope." Yumi and Ulrich were still in the scanner room.
In Lyoko
Aelita ran across the X.A.N.A. eye ball floor and floated up singing that tune. At the Factory
Sissy was about to make an energy ball and throw it at the three.
In Lyoko
She landed on the second X.A.N.A. eye ball floor. She ran to the
middle and put her handprint on the screen.
At the Factory
Yumi and Ulrich entered the room. Yumi yelled, "Noooo!"
She jumped in front of them to block them. Sissy said, "Ha! Ha!
Ha!"
In
Lyoko
The screen
read: AELITA. Then that disappeared and read: CODE. Aelita made the
Lyoko thing appear it read: LYOKO. Aelita said calmly, "Tower
deactivated." She swung her head down.
At the Factory
Sissy fainted on the floor. Jeremy went on his chair franticly and
said in a scared voice, "Return to the past…NOW!" Then he
pressed the button and the white thing came up and the rewinding
music played. The world was rewinding to the past.
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(Yay! This was my longest chapter.)
