Okay, I know I said I wanted reviews, but I got one from my best friend, so I'll give it to everyone anyway. Just to let everyone know I am open to all comments. I LOVE writing and want everyone else to too. :)
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Last time:
Yumi, Oddand Ulrich are taken over by Xanna, andAelita gets Jeremy to agree to go to lyoko with her, because they have a watch dog.
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"Jeremy hurry up. Xanna won't be slow." Aelita says as she gets into the scanners. Jeremy walks into
the scanner and as he gets scanned, hears a bang upstairs. When he gets to Lyoko, he is wearing a
green, black and red robe, no shoes, and has cd's in his poket that he throws, as his weapon. Aelita
stops and looks at him. "Jeremy! Look at yourself!" Jeremy looks at himself and thinks, oh I hope
I'm not as bad inLyoko as in reallife. He sighed. Suddenly without any timeto practice his new
weapon, lazers fired all around him. "Jeremy!" He glanced at Aelita and saw she was theonly target.
They thought he wouldn't be any problem. Aelita was trapped on all sides, 3 blocks. "Jeremy! Help!"
Aelita screamed which got him back to reality. He picked up one of the cd's and threw it. It went the
absolute wrong way, so he yelled, "No! Not THAT way!" Suddenly, the cd turned around and went the
right way. Jeremy whispered, "Hit that block!" As if it could hear, it turned toward the block he
wanted, and hit the eye.
BOOM!
Aelita ran up to Jeremy and hugged him.
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In the factory:
"Won't get away that easily..." Ulrich says to himself. As Ulrich starts typing things on the keyboard,
Kiwi comes into the room and see's Ulrich. He goesup and sniffs him. He reconizes it's not Ulrich and
bites his leg. Ulrich,sincehe was possessed by Xanna,makes a black force, and pushes Kiwi into a
wall.
Yelp!
Kiwi runs to the elevator and hides.Yumi pushes the level to the scanners (that's the only other
button) . Odd already down there waiting for the devertulized Jeremy scares the dog into a scanner.
Ulrich pushes the scan button and says, "Virulize dog." Odd/Xanna knew that Jeremy wasn't going to
last long so he decided to wait.
Jeremy heard what Ulrich had said, Kiwi was comming to Lyoko! "Aelita! Kiwi is going to be virtulized
into lyoko!" Aelita looked at him eagerly and asked "Really? Cool!" Jeremy bursted her bubble
when he added, "Kiwi may not make it here, as far as I know only humans can be transferred." As
soon as he said that, Aelita stood still. Jeremy ran over to her and blocked her with his cd's, which
killed 2 monsters.
Suddenly they saw a small form appearing. It was Kiwi! Aelita just stared, and pointed which made
Jeremy turn. He saw Kiwi, wearing boots and he had a very BIG, WETnose along with mouth.
Jeremy knew that his power was deadly, but sadly, he was the test subject, Kiwi ran to him and licked
him. As he got licked, Kiwi drooled on him and he saw all his pixals fading away.
I want 3 votes on what to do next. Then next chapter comes.
A. Kiwi explores ahead and accidently drools on the monsters because he licks them.
B. Aelita gets to the tower, but Kiwi licks it and it dissapears.
Please PLEASE please PLEASE write a review! I REALLY want to know.
I'll leave you with one last word...
REVIEW!