Okay... people still don't know how to R&R but now I'm going to respond to a few ofmy favorite reviews! (Don't hurt me if I didn't include someone!)
hoshicat- Thanks for the great kitty idea for last chapter! Sorry I didn't make a good fight scene, I just went through it.
FlipMyMood- Thanks for reviewing, but sorry I didn't use your idea:) Hope you keep reviewing and folling my stories!
katfish xX- I thought your post was funny! lol :P
FlipMyMood- If your ever cunfused, email me! I'll clear it up:)
Well, thats all I'm doing this time! More reviews, more people! (Creative reviews usually get up!)
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Last time: Kiwi saved Yumi from drowning, after Ulrich threw her in the river by the factory.
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Yumi pulled herself up after she got to land and looked at the exausted Kiwi.
She picked up Kiwi, and walked slowly back to the factory. She looked
horrible, her hair was a mess, and she looked about ready to collapse od
exaustion. When she got back into the factory, she saw Odd, still beating up
himself, and Ulrich heading towards her. She whispered to Kiwi, "Kiwi! Get me
the rope!" Kiwi was a smart dog, so he knew a few different words. Kiwi
brought back a long rope that Jeremy made Xanna proof.Jeremy strengthened
the atom molecules in science class, and used a green goop, to make it
inpenitrable. When Ulrich got to Yumi, she was being choked, she barely said,
"Around Kiwi! Go!" And soon enouph, Ulrich was tied in inpenitrable rope.
Then Ulrich started beating himself up. Obviously trying to get loose from
Xanna. She wondered...are girls harder to control than guys? hmmm...
Suddenly, she felt a punch from behind bring her down. She looked up to see
Odd. She was brought down to her knee's, but she was mad now. She jumped
back up, rubbing the spot she was punched, with her hand, and threw a punch
to Odd, he ducked. He created a powerful black force, that threw her into the
wall. "Ow..." Suddenly Ulrich jumped out, and grabbed Odd's hand. "Yumi!
Run!" Yumi nodded, and complied. When she got to the computer room,
Jereremy told Yumi, "Don't worry, Yumi. Aelita's about to enter the tower."
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When Aelita entered, the tower started to melt. Jeremy heard beeping on his
computer and yelled, "Aelita! Get out of there! It was a trick! That will crush
you!" As Aelita ran, the tower closed in around her. She sang her song, and a
giant block of ice formed and kept the entrance up a moment long enouph to let
her escape. Aelita asked Jeremy, "Where's the activated tower now?" Jeremy
looked at all the scanners and didn't see anything. "You may have to just look
for a activated tower." Aelita then asked, "Well... okay... I'm off."She
dissapeared. Suddenly Ulrich bursted in and closed the door behind him and
Jeremy shrieked. Yumi announced, "It's Ulrich. He's back... I think..." Ulrich
smiled and nodded,"Yea. It's me. It wasn't easy getting away from Xanna, tho."
Yumi then added, "It was much easier than getting away from you!Thanks to
Kiwi, I'm alive!" Kiwi ran into the room at the sound of his name, and growled
at Ulrich. "Easy Kiwi!"Kiwi slowly approached Ulrich and sniffs him. He figures
out it's really Ulrich, and he licks him. Yumi steped up and asked, "So.. Ulrich?
How'd you escape Jeremy's rope?" Then Ulrich spoke, "You tie lousy knots...
good thing it had that chemical init or..." They were interrupted by a knock on
the door, and Odd bursted through the door. "Hahaha!" Yumi grabbed Jeremy
and pushed him towards the computer away from the door. Odd jumped at
Yumi, andmissed her arm, but grabbed her hair. "Ahhhh! Let go Odd!"
Shegrabbed his hand and pried his fingers off herhair, but then he grabbed her
arm and flung her to the wall. Ulrich then ran at him butOdd tripped him, and he
ran into Yumi. He then started towards Jeremy...
R&R please!