Thanks big Draco Amora. I had total writers block on this and your review was like a sledge hammer to the huge wall in front of me and this chapter. Props to you.
(GFHQ: Computer Communications Room)
"We have to find Death Stinger as soon as possible," stated Herman in a booming, demanding, frustrated voice. "Use all available search methods and resources. Hiltz must be stopped."
"Have you seen the General," asked Van, just walking in the room.
In a much gentler voice he responded with, "Not since Raven's funeral."
"Makeshift funeral, attendance of 3."
"You shouldn't make fun of the dead no matter who they are."
'Yeah well he deserves it,' thought Van. "Any idea where she might be?"
"I'm trying to focus all my 'might be' on the location of Death Stinger."
"It shows but-," Van was cut short by a small scream of surprise and a bit of laughter. Mini had jumped into one of the computer operators lap began to type rapidly pulling up many programs onto the screen.
When she had finished she sat on operator's lap and stared at Herman, whom stared back, and dropped her left paw on a key. The main screen came to life and showed a large map with a wide red line-leaving base. Then that picture shrunk and moved aside to show satellite feed of the area where the line ended. Death Stinger.
"Uuuhhh …well done…I guess."
Mini took a cat-like bow and left to…somewhere.
"Right," he said watching the mechanical animal leave. "Move out as many zooids as we can. At least enough to hold him, all GF members are to be mobilized immediately!"
He was about to turn to Van and say something when the sinister voice that belonged to Hiltz drew his attention back to the screen.
"Glad to see that everyone is in a chipper mood since the next base is about to go bye-bye."
The amusement in his voice was the mark of undeniable madness…not that he ever did.
The small nameless base disappeared in the light of his charged particle beam. Hiltz's laughter rang and echoed through the whole base rousing another madness to mend a permanently shattered heart in a campaign of the raging passion to kill.
Words…344. Review. Sorry it's so short after such a wait I'll try hard from now on but this was just off the top of my head. thatnk to those of you who who R&R you guys make the FF world go round. :)