BR I'm glad people are reviewing and thanx for the tip Sprite Sweetheart! It really helps. Don't worry reviewers we have only just begun. I love the thrill of cliffhangers, but sometimes you can't wait. Here's the next chapter. I hope you guys like it!

BR Sorry I didn't do this the first time, but I just got better from being sick.

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Dumpster Diving

Greg and Nick arrived at the scene just as the sun shined over the darkened alley. Even for any experienced CSI, it was kind of creepy. After walking into the alley a bit they saw the dumpster. As they were getting closer it started to smell really bad.

"Phew! That'ts something that could stay on your nose hairs a couple of weeks." Replied Nick covering his nose and mouth with his arm.

" Well, it's a dumpster, go figure." Replied Greg.

Greg set down his kit and put on his goves. Nick did the same. Greg and Nick turned on their flashlights and slowly peered inside the dumpster. As they looked closer, something jumped out. Greg and Nick screamed.

"What the hell was that?" Nick demanded, trying to catch his breath.

Greg looked toward where the thing skittered off to. He shined his flashlight and whaddya know, it's a cat.

" It's only a cat Nick. You scared?"

" No! Just, it caught me off guard you know."

"Sure..."

" Really."

" Whatever you say Nicky."

" Look we should really get back to the case."

"Alright, you want me to take exterior or interior."

" Interior, I got the outside covered."

Greg shook his head and lifted himself up into the dumpster.

"Now I know Why Nick picked the exterior. He coughed a bit and almost felt the taste of vomit in his mouth.

He started processing the woman inside the dumpster. He lifted for prints and sprayed Luminol inside the dumpster.

There was blood in some areas, mostly near the vic. He took some for evidence. He looked at her hands. They look as though they were tied up with Zip ties. COD was hard to tell. He would know more when David arrived.

The poor woman looked terrible. She looked to be in her mid-20s and about 5' 6''. She had long brown hair and a nice figure. Her face was more interesting though. She had massive contusions on her cheeks and forehead and one deep slash on her neck. Probably by a knife. Her eyes were lifeless and she had small perferations under them. Which was the weird part. What sort of murderer is this?

" Hey Greggo!" Nick yelled.

" What do you want!" Greg asked almost gagging that time.

" David's here to assess the body!"

" Good! I found some interesting perferations under her eyes. It might be pinpricks or a weapon of that sort."

" That is interesting!"

" What did you find Nick?"

" Some tire treads and, some blood off the dumpster and a piece of paper that reads: Sorry! Your time is up! It is signed by the intials , T.E."

" Interesting."

David made his way inside the dupster.

" Hey Greg! Good thing I didn't bring my good shoes!"

" Good thing. How about a cause of death?"

" Well, those perferations are intersting. Here let me get a body temp."

He inserted the prong into the liver.

" Liver temp is 94.6 so that puts death around 4:00 A.M or so. After examining the deep slash on her neck I found she got this after she died."

" So, she wasn't killed by the slash on her neck?"

" No, looks like blunt force trauma, see the head here. There is some dry blood near the temperal lobe."

" What about the perferations."

" I don't know, you might have to run that by Dr. Robbins. He might know what they are."

" Well, David, I have to get this evidence back to the lab. You alright here?"

" Yep, I will have her lifted her out of here in no time."

" Good! Well I am out of here."

Greg heads up out of the dumpster and sees Nick smiling.

" You come in here and see what it's like." Greg said sarcastically.

" No thanks, I prefer the fresh air. Come on we need to get back to the lab."

" You the boss." Greg said as he gathered up his kit and made his way to the car.

What he didn't see was a dark figure watching his every move as he left the alley...

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signed nice start...please go on.

Sprite Sweetheart
Good. One thing though... it would be alot easier to read if you skipped a line in between each person speaking... like...

"Ah!" He screamed a little.

"Hey Greggo!"

"Nick, you scared the hell outta me!"

Just a suggestion, but it was very good, and I hope you update soon!

GreggoAddict: Hmm i don't see anything going on right now but I'm sure you're going to have loads of angst on the way right? lol. I can't wait to see the next few chapters, they oughta be interesting. Thanks for reviewing my story and I'll try and upadte today or tomorrow.
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Cheelalaucha
Poor Greggo, he never gets to rest. Please keep goin' cuz this was too short a chapter!
Tilly