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WHAT YOU NEED TO KNOW ABOUT CHAPTER 11!
Tobey Everett was Jack's brother. Jack killed him and stole his possessions and name!
Jack is the murderer
Greg was shot.
The CSI's are going after Greg Tobey Everett's house
three more chapters until the end! Whoo!
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Prices to Pay.
" You want to know?"
" Yes!"
Grissom nearly yelled.
" Well, come to the address, just you and your CSIs no, cops, no ambulances, swat team etc. Just you Mr. Stokes, Mr. Brown, Ms. Sidle, and Ms. Willows."
" She's not here!"
" Oh! Well then she is going to miss quite a show! "
They were both silent.
" One more thing I would like you to give me a little gift on your way here. How does 10 million dollars sound? Reasonable?Oh! ANd just to make sure I am not joking. They both heard a gun click.
It was silent until they heard the gun.
" Bang!"
Thiere was a scream from the other line.
"See you then, better hurry."
The phone clicked and went into the dial tone.
Grissom and Nick were speechless.
Grissom slammed the phone back onto the receiver.
" How are we gonna get the money!"
" I don't know Nick, but we're gonna make the number."
" I know. "
His stomach twisted a little.
" Nick, we're getting him back. Okay. He's strong. He will make it."
" Griss, I.."
before Nick could say anymore, Sara burst in.
" Guys we have a problem!"
" What is it?"
Grissom asked.
" She must've heard it over the damn media but, Greg's mom is here!"
Nick and Grissom exchanged glances.
" Where is she now?"
Replied Grissom.
" She's out in the waiting room. She's seems confused and upset.
Grissom thought for a moment.
" Send her in here, I will be there shortly."
Sara gave him a quizzical look and left the room.
" Maybe she might now of this secret Jack is talking about."
Grissonm said.
" You think she will be able to talk about it?"
" We hope."
" Greg's missing!"
" You didn't know?"
" NO!Of course not. I heard that a CSI had gone missing and I flew in to see if Greg was handling it, but he is the one who's missing!"
" I'm sorry you're upset ma'am, but we are doing everything we can."
" This is unreal."
" Mrs. Sanders, can you tell me whyJack could've taken your son?"
She thought for a moment.
" Jenna..."
She almost said in a whisper.
" Jenna."
" Yes, Greg is her brother."
Greg screamed.
His felt the sticky blood on his hands as tried to apply pressure to it. He hated Jack now. The bitch took his sister and shot him in the stomach.
He knew he didn't have much time and he needed to stay awake as long as he could or... He didn't wanted to thing about it.
Greg was lying on the cement floor of the room. He was totally helpless.
" Oh Greggue! I Suppose you have about only an hour so to live. You hope your friends pull through to you. Also get my 10 million buckeroos! Oh Yeah.!"
He walked over to Greg and put his black boot on his wound and pressed it.
" You listen to me Greg! If you do as much as try to escape or doing anything in that mateer I will find you again and rip you apart. Is that clear?"
Greg was groaning.
" Is that CLEAR?"
Jack pressed harder.
"Greg mangaed to whimper out a yes.
" Good."
Jack lifted his foot off ad Greg started to cough and on the ground were small blotches of blood.
" Your time is almost up!"
Jack laughed manaically
" She was kidnapped when Greg was 17, from the the park. He was watching her and she disappeared. He looked everywhere for her, but she was nowhere to be found. For years he kept doing this. Torturing himself. Having hope that one day she will show up again. His father had enough and I couldn't take it either. Thats' why he came here. He wanted to go away and hide himself."
Sara, Grissom and Nick were speechless.
" So this Jack must have Jenna and Greg?"
" Most likely."
Replied Nick.
" Oh my GOD!"
She gasped.
Mrs. Sanders listen, we know where they are. We need to handle this delicatly for it to work. He's a very dangerous man. Do you understand that?"
She nodded.
" The problem is, he wants 10 million dollars and we don't have much time."
Stated Sara.
" That is a problem."
They all nodded.
" We will get them both back. Greg and Jenna."
Nick said.
She nodded slowly.
" Please, Bring them back."
Blood dribbled down Greg's chin. He could harldy breath. He looked at his watch it was amost midnight. He closed in opened his eyes to try to keep awake.
" Where are they?" He thought.
" Have they forgotten about me?"
" Mr. Grissom! "
Shouted Hodges. Grissom went to the enterance where Hodges was. The door was jutted open with a bag. Grissom put on his gloves and carefully opened the bag.
It was money.
''Did you see who dropped it off?"
" No, but it came with this."
Hodges handed Grissom the note.
Grissom unfolded the tiny piece of paper.
It read:
Dear CSIs,
It has come my attention that a CSI and a civilian are missing.
You ask if it is my business dropping off a ransom such as
this .
This has been part of my business for a long time...
I love my children very much...
I had to leave on my own, I was afraid and scared and I was running away from my problems.
I wantto apoligize to my lovely wife who has been on my side always.
To Greg and Jenna, I love them both and I want you to nail the basterd who destroyed our family.
Here is the money, take it, use it and get them back, I beg you!
Signed Mr. Alan Sanders Attorney of law Los angeles, CA.
" Looks like we got our money!"
Said Nick.
" Alright, Alright Nick grab Warrick, Sara you come with me..."
Greg was lying helplessly on the floor. I t was dark. He could hear nothing. No cars passing by. All he could see was the streetlight shining through the tiny crevace in the prison room he was in.
The door opened and it was Jack. He grabbed Greg and shoved him against the wall and then back onto the chair that had collapse earlier.
" Well, it looks like you friends are going to pay up. You just hope they have every last cent !"
He spat at him.
Greg was drifting further into the darkness that awaited him. He started to give up. His breaths were getting more shallow and blood was still flowinf freely from his wound.
" Hurry!..."
He said in almost a whisper...
To be continied...
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