BR Hey! Im back everyone! Yes! The play was awesome! I pulled off the whole Grandma thing easy! Anywho, we got everything taken down and put away.
Next play is Frankenstein! WHoo!
Hold on to your chairs kids the party is about to begin!
2 more CHAPPIES!
Greg is dying...Poor Greg
The CSI heroes are coming!
Jack is gettin angry
The pieces are coming together!
Oh, and Greg's mother is there and his da paid the ransom from his lawyer money job,..thingy!
Here we go...Italics are flashbacks!
Rescue Me
Greg was lying helplessly on the floor. It was dark. He could hear nothing. No cars passing by. All he could see was the streetlight shining through the tiny crevace in the prison room he was in.
The door opened and it was Jack. He grabbed Greg and shoved him against the wall and then back onto the chair that had collapsed earlier.
" Well, it looks like you friends are going to pay up. You just hope they have every last cent !"
He spat at him.
Greg was drifting further into the darkness that awaited him. He started to give up. His breaths were getting more shallow and blood was still flowing freely from his wound.
" Hurry!..."
He said in almost a whisper...
" We're coming Greg!"
Nick said as they were driving towards the house. Everyone was holding their breath and getting their game faces on. This was it. There was no turning back now
Nick was holding his head down.
Sara looked at him.
" Hold on Greg..."
" Well, Greggie are you ready for the show?"
" Where's Jenna?"
He struggled to say.
" Oh don't worry we won't leave her out...!
He snarled at him.
" Brass to Grissom?"
Grisom picked up the walkie talkie.
" Grissom."
" We are in position will go on your signal..."
" Good, wait though we don't want any mistakes."
" Got it. Over and out."
" Roger."
Grissom put down the walkie talkie.
" How much time?"
Sara said.
" 30 mins. "
" God..."
" You know what?"
Grissom said.
" Yeah?"
" I never got the time to ask what type of family Greg has or where he used to live. I never really knew all of what happened to him until now."
" Grissom. It's not your fault."
" But I was the one in charge..."
" Get her near the front. We want her as collateral.!
" No!"
" No!"
Jack said sarcastically.
Greg put his head down. He was fading.
" Go! Put her up front!"
Bob and another worker helped her up to the front.
Greg could hear her scream down the hall.
" Now listen here Greggie when they come you will not make a sound. And just so you will keep quiet."
He pulled out a black bandana and tied it to cover his eyes.
"There we go!"
He shoved Greg to the floor and his face slammed in to the concrete.
Greg was sobbing.
Jack was satisfied.
The Hummer ( yes I like Hummers!) Pulled up to Tobey's house. All the CSI's Got out and pulled out the eir guns.
They expected a full out assualt on this Jack character. All these bad guys shooting back! They didn't. The house looked quiet.
All of a sudden the front door opened. A figure loomed inthe enterence.
All the of the CSIs pointed their guns at the figure.
Thye figure moved toward them.
" CSI! Don't move! "
Shouted Grissom
The figure moved more and just as he was close enoiugh to see he immediatly stopped.
A voice could be heard.
" Why Mr. Grissom! You actually listened to me. No cops! Well, you now wish you would have them."
" I want my guy back!"
" Oh no! Mr. Grissom! Not until I fulfill my plan. Oh that reminds me. The money if you may."
Said Jack; Sarcastically.
Gil motioned for Nick to get the money. He went to the Hummer and got the bag of money. He walked slowly back until he was beside Grissom.
" Now we have deal, we got the money now give us Greg!"
" Hand me the money first."
Said Jack.
Nick was about to go toward the voice. when he was stopped by it.
" No! I want Mr. Grissom!"
Nick handed him the bag and nodded.
Grissom looked forward and started walking. His flashlight lighting the way. (a.k.a the other CSI's have flashlights too!). He sees that the figure is Bob and Bob was holding Jenna.
" So that's Greg's sister."
Gil thought.
" Now give my assistant the money."
He slowly handed the bag towrd him. As Bob took it he shoved Jenna into Grissom's arms.
Before Grissom could say something he went back toward trhe house.
" Wait! What about Greg?"
" Hey I never promised. You're lucky you get the girl too bad she's almost dead anyway."
Gil looked at her. She was in bad shape.
" Why did you ever think I would give up Gregory? I need him NEED HIM to fulfill my plan. I have the money now there is one more thing to do...
He reached in his pocket and held out a detonator. Grissom shined his flashlight on him.
( Inside you could see detonators at the back , walls and in Greg's room where you see him, lying there, nearly dead).
" I have five of these babies wired up inthe front and back and of course, in Gregory's room."
" This wasn't part of the Deal!"
Yelled Grissom.
" Did I say it was?"
Jack laughed manaically.
" You BASTERD!"
Nick started running toward Jack and caught him of guard. He shoved him back into the houise. The detonator thrown aside inside the house near the back of the hallway.( Down the stairs)
"NOW BRASS!"
Helicopters casme out of nowhere. PLoice cruises, SWAT, FBI, everyone arrived out of thin air.
Grissom gave Jenna to one of the paramedics.
When she was safe, Sara, Warrick and him ran inside the house.
Gil entered and shot one of the bad guys. The cops started shooting and a whole mesh of bad guys flooded the upstairs windows; shooting at the cops.
( Basement)
Nick and Jack both fell down the stairs onto the floor.
Nick was wrestling with Jack, both guns strewn across the rom.
" I heard what happened to you. Being buried...ALIVE! I never knew a CSI could actually alomost kill himself just by being buried inside a box..."
" Why Greg.?.The truth is what I want!"
" Oh, Nicky, must you be soo naive. His father locked me away for years.
I wanted revenge and I knew Greg was the perfect target.
I've already had kidnapped his sister. Why not the brother too?
Oh, and the bombs, it's a cover up. Once I blow this house. Their won't be anymore eveidence about this event and your buddy will be burnt to a crisp!
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
Nick punched him and escaped to reach for his gun. Just as he did he felt a slicing pain in his arm.
"AHHHHHHH!"
He screamed.
" Don't play with me Nicky. "
Yelled Jack.
He kicked Nick to the wall.
" You will now learn your lesson!"
Jack grabbed his gun from the floor and pointed it right in Nick's face.
" Nick where are you ? "
Sara yelled.
Sara went up the stairs.
Grissom and Wariick were sheilding themselves from the guys upstairs.
" I can't them there is too much gunfire."
Sara said as she got under the table in a room upstairs.
" What do we do now?"
Greg is wearing a labcoat with his gelled up and the love of Rock music.
Nick: " I never thought I'd see such a unique mix of rock in a place like this."
Greg: "That's just my style!"
Nick: " Bet you're really good with the ladies huh?"
Greg smiles.
Greg: "What happened to him?"
Warrick: "Our suspect knocked himout a two story window. He's alright though.
Man! I shouldn't been in there.
Greg: "Poor Nick."
( Silence)
Greg: "Well here is your results..."
Hodges: "I miss the old Greg. Spiky hair, rock music, porn..."
Greg: "Yeah, that me is gone, but I think Iam seeing the real Hogeds here!"
( Rolls dice)
Greg: " Never mind my pants, but the evidence!"
Warrick:"If I was him I'd...( Make a gun towards his hed.)
Catherine: No I know you. you wouldn't do that...
Grissom: Greg! Short bursts! You don't want to suffocate him!"
Grissom: I want my guys back!
Greg woke up to hear a scream coming from the next room.
Nick!
He thought.
He tried to get up, but his whole body felt numb. Like you're foot fallung asleep.
He started to drag himself to the door.He went until he his whole body ached. He put his head down and coughed up some more blood ( Poor Greggie!)
He leaned his head against the door, and breathed a sigh.
He held himself up with the wal and as he ran his hand over the petruding item
When he ralized what he was he to panic.
He took off the bandana and saw it with his eyes.
He swallowed ahard and started to hyperventalate.
He tried to open the door, but it was locked form the outside.
He screamed with agony and frustration.
" I am really going to die"
He thought
" This was it..."
BR> Hey guys oh another cliffhanger! Okay a deal. I am not going to wait a month to publish another chappie.! I will put in the final chapter and credits next week! If you have reviewed anytime during my story just review me again with this chappie and tell me if you want to be put in the " Lovely Reviewers" Spot!
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