Author: Deep Within
Rated: K+
Type: Romance
Disclaimer: I don't own InuYasha
Other: Might be twisty, might have a cliffy hanger, and has normal POV since I changed it!
Deep Within's note- I think I made them a little to preppy in the last chapter. (I hate preps/peps!) Today was an okay day; I finally didn't have home work! Thank you for the reviews!
Reviewers-
HATING U NOW: I know you just wanted me to update, but that, you shouldn't do. I'm not a "Baka," or whatever it is. I'm not a 2 year old, I'm not fat, and I'm not a son of a bitch... I know you wanted me to update, but really. I try my best to update. I don't have all the free time in the world. I spend 10 hours a day at school. I waste a couple of hours sleeping. (Why? Because wouldn't you be sleepy if you spend 10 hours a day, with the meanest teacher in the school?) I got at least more than 10 pages a day as home work. I'm a straight A student so, I have to do my work neatly and correctly. I don't know too much about writing, my English isn't perfect so it took me some time to make the grammar on here good. It's not that easy for me to update all the time, and I just posted that a couple of days ago, it wasn't even long time to wait. And it's hard to brainstorm a chapter a lot. So please don't do what you just did in the future, it scares people first. (I thought you hated me because this sucked.)I'm not trying to be mean. Please don't get mad at me for posting all this. I just had to tell you that. And that review really made me laugh.
sdykikyou: I don't have a problem with Kikyou so you don't have to worry about bashing, she is one of my favorite characters, and I just don't like the pairing of Kikyou and InuYasha. I'm way to use to spell her name with a u so I don't I'll ever write/type her name with out the u. On this chapter I was planning to use Sesshomaru, but some how I didn't feel like it. I might try putting InuYasha but, I don't know. Kouga, hmm... he sounds like a good idea.
Frogs- Thank you! If I get some nice reviews, I'll never stop writing.
Jade- Why, thank you.
ATHENA101- Hello, back to you! Thanks for reviewing.
InuYashazChibiGoddess- I know, my grammar isn't that good, but you really can't blame me.
flys without wings- Yay, someone really like cliffys! (Well, I hope you do.) It sounds cute? Thanks.
KawaiiInuyasha14841- Thanks. You got a thinking that InuYasha is behind her? I did too, when I finish the last chapter. But the question for me is, should I make InuYasha appear behind her?
Ashleigh.: You all can call me Deep Within, so its happy birthday to Deep Within.
Iloveinuyasha44- InuYasha might behind her, it depends if I want that to this a good fan fiction? Wow, thanks.
FUCK U- Right back at
Whoops- That is okay.
C.A.M.O.1 and Only- Yep...
"InuYasha?" Kagome asked. "What are you doing here?"
"I was going to go here, and then there was another demon. He followed me here, the demon almost killed some humans here, but I killed him right before you turned around," he answered her.
For moment, she thought that Souta was lying to her. "Souta said that there was a jewel shard in the demon."
"He was telling the truth. After I killed him the jewel shards just bust out of the demon." By the way he sounded; you could have pictured the event.
She headed towards her room. She didn't have a reason, but maybe she had one in her mind. She might be testing for his sight, sound, hearing, or anything else.
"Hello, InuYasha. Long time no see," Kagome's mother greeted.
Wait, my Mother knows that I like InuYasha! Is she going to tell him? I hope she does not! But what if she does? Will InuYasha believe her? Knowing him, nope he won't...
"What's her problem? I just slaved a demon, told her about, and she just runs up the stairs!" InuYasha complained. "Stupid wench," he mumbled the last part.
"Kagome, she's just going through something every girl goes through in life." If Kagome was there, she would be happy that her mother wouldn't spill out the beans, but, she knows her mother would not do such a thing.
Kagome was in her room, looking at her dairy, the only thing in the world you can tell everything. She wanted to write in it more, but she was going to write in it when it's night time, maybe in the past with Miroku, Sango, and Shippo.
Again, Kagome can hear foot steps coming up the stairs, this time Kagome was certain it was InuYasha coming up to ask her to come with him, but again, she was wrong.
"Kagome, Hojo's here!" Kagome turned around to see Hojo. She didn't see much of him, since he was downstairs, though; she saw a small part of his head.
I saw InuYasha behind my mom; I bet he thought inside of his mind, 'who's Hojo?'
"I'll tell him I'll get down," Kagome replied to her mother's words from before. To tell the truth, Kagome didn't rush or anything to get down to see Hojo. Kagome sat down on her bed, again. With another look of her diary, she sighed. After a moment of her daydreams, thoughts, and mind tricks her mind was sending, she sat up and slowly went downstairs.
"Hey Hojo!"
"Well, since you're not sick, why not we go out on Sunday?" He sounded like he really wanted to; a little too much. Kagome didn't have anything that might give her the cause to say no. She had to break his heart, this time.
"I'm sorry, who ever you are. Kagome's going to be busy," InuYasha told him. Kagome heard the words that InuYasha said; she was happy that of all people, InuYasha said that.
"I'm sorry, Hojo. InuYasha's right, I'm going to be busy, I'm so sorry. When I return, if I'm not sick, I might have time."
"Okay, Kagome see you tomorrow if you're not sick!" Hojo shouted at me as he slowly walked towards the door of the house to get out of the house.
"Who's that guy, Kagome?" InuYasha asked.
"He's a boy at my school that tries to ask me out every chance he can, he's a sweet person though." Kagome shrugged her shoulders a bit. While she did that, InuYasha had a confuse look on his face.
"Whatever, let's just go back."
"I don't want to go back," Kagome replied.
"Don't you miss Sango, Miroku, and Shippo? Besides, you had two days to relax, isn't that enough for you wench?"
Deep Within's note- I'm sorry, if this is too short. I'm not going to have time tomorrow to write some more, on Monday I have school, which means I do have some time, but very little. Same with most of the other days, and I do not think you want to wait three days for me to update. Do you? I'll pay it up to you; I'll really try to make a longer chapter next time, or some other chapter longer. I'm really sorry, I couldn't make this chapter longer; please don't get mad at me for this!
