A/N: First off HUGE thank you to my two reviewers. I am really happy I got reviews! This is a new addition to my poetry collection. It's kinda long I apologize, maybe I should have made it into a story or written stanzas...oh well... I never really wrote poetry or read it and decided why not try? Well, enjoy!
Disclaimer: Rurouni Kenshin sadly is not and will never be owned by me...
The Things I Love About You
That flaming mane that is your hair
Soft and silky smooth
Your sparkling violet orbs
Filled with sorrow and guilt
That far away look you have
When you stare into space
Your sword that you swing with passion
In the name of justice
That scar on the side of your left cheek
Exposing your past to the world
The way you look at me
When I worry about you
That smile you give me
Reassuring me that everything is fine
There are so many things about you
That I love with all my heart and soul
When will I have the courage to tell you
How much I love and adore you
You try to protect me and keep me safe
By shutting me out of that which plagues your mind
Your knowledge of the sword is beyond compare
How can you possibly not see
You hurt me every day
When you don't say the words I want to hear
Let me in I want to help you
I want to share your burden
As much as you think you do
You don't deserve anything thats happened in your past
We've all made mistakes
Some bigger than others
Let it go
Scars will always be there
To remind you of your mistakes
Of loved ones passed
But please my love
Focus on the future
Don't dwell on what can't be changed
I pray one day
The thoughts passing through my mind
Will finally be revealed to you
So I can finally tell you
All the things I love about you
A/N: Well, I hope you liked it... It's Kaoru's POV of Kenshin if you didn't guess that already. Like I said, writing poetry is kinda new and I will have at least a one-shot in soon. Note to self: think of story... R&R!
Khmer Moon Blossoms- Words cannot describe how incredibly thankful I am for your reviews. Those are the most beautiful reviews I have ever seen in my entire life on this website. I don't think I have ever seen someone review as nicely as you did for me. You inspire me to write more poems. I'm not even all that poetic and I don't read it for fun or write a lot of it all that recently but you have made me want to write more. I hope you enjoy other poems as well as stories I do in the future. I just am still in shock from the first time I read those reviews. You also have a nice pen name. I'm glad you enjoyed!
Fyraga- I appreciate that you read both my Spirited Away and Kenshin poems. I thank you so much for doing that. You show me there is people out there who read AND review. I liked your Inuyasha poems. They were cute. Oh and yes, Kenshin is a hottie and don't forget it...but if I owned him he'd be all mine. Muahahahahahahahahaha! coughsputterhackwheeze...lol