Yahhh! This is the last part. I hope you all enjoyed Comic Relief. Sorry for not updating in a really really long time. I had fun writing this. Thanks so very much for all the reviews!
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Part Four: Oh Well!
Sulfuric smoke filled the air as the black earth belched out its insides; lava oozed in rivers and streams in its satanic glory. The sun was very dim, barely giving off light, so that the world around was shrouded in horrid darkness. Hot ash fizzled in the air, stinging already open wounds of the flesh and of the soul.
Obi-wan's eye twitched as yet another volcano exploded in its random pandemonium. He faced his worst enemy, and yet his best friend. Anakin. His contorted face was so ugly, he could laugh. And yet he didn't.
"How could you?" A harsh and barbaric whisper tore from Obi-wan's lips.
Anakin threw back his ugly face and smirked evilly, "The Dark Side is stronger Obi-wan!"
Obi-wan slashed at his ex-friend and pleaded one more time, "Come back to the light, Anakin!"
Their lightsabers crashed together as Anakin screamed, "I'll never join you!" Still they fought ferociously, even until they were on the edge of a cliff, which ended in a river of lava.
Anakin continued, "I'll-"
There was a cracking sound below him and Anakin chanced a quick look down. He was on a ledge, and this particular ledge was sick of holding Anakin's weight, so it broke.
"Ahhhhhhh!" Sizzle. Sizzle.
Obi-wan looked at the river of lava where Anakin had fallen into and shed a tear. Turning around, he glanced up and saw the reader. Obi-wan shrugged his shoulders, "Oh well!" And left the scene of the Fallen Hero.
Literally, and figuratively.
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