Well IM BACK NOW Princess berry is in the house ...in the fanfiction houes now!
I'm Happy for all who will review to this new revised one . Today wasn't really going well with those Horrible reveiws with the original, and now this revised one got better reviews thank you all!
WELL ENOUGH OF MY RAMBLING
ON WIT THE STORY
SCHOOL 1 Hour Later
"Where's Akane? I thought she would be in class", Ranma asked as he looked around for her, as he sat in his seat.
"Akane? She never came to school yet...I thought YOU would know that already, You guys do live together", A guy I guess is his friend said as the teacher started to talk, on boring stuff.'HUH? didn't Kasumi---'
"What MY LADY IS NOT HERE",Kuno yelled Standing on top of his desk taking his bamboo stick, sticking it on Ranma's face
"WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER, FEIND!"
"YOU HAVE 2 SECONDS TO GET THAT STICK OUT OF MY FACE "
"ONE"
"...TW"
All of the sudden the door slide to the side to reveal Akane walking in, as if nothing was wrong
" WHERE were you MISS TENDO?", THE boring teacher asked.
"HUH?...Am I late?
"Am I late? What type of excuse is that? Never mind get out of my classroom but before you do show me your homework"
"...Okay sir...hmmmmm my bag, ... I forgot it ...sorry sensei", Akane said as she bowed for forgiveness.
"BAD STUDENT YOU ARE,1st) you about more than an hour late 2nd) you forget your homework...DISGRACE", He yelled rolling his book in his hand the thick type smacking her on the top of her head.
"GET OUT NOW!"
'Jeeeeezzzzz he doesn't need to scream, his hair might fall out'
As she left thru the door sliding it to close before getting a quick glimse of kuno bamboo stick on ranma's head.
"Akane...", he wisperred before he knocked out Kuno for not getting that dang stick out of his face.
"RANMA! how many times did I tell you! Stop beating up KUNO...KUNO why are you in this class? This isn't your home room , now RANMA get out and help MISS TENDO
clean the windows", he yells pointing to the door.
"Yeah,yeah don't gotta yell",Ranma boredly says leaving thru the door.
'Didn't Kasumi say she left already?'
"Ranma, Ranma , Ranma ...She must of been talking about Nabiki...Jeez Akane must hate you know"
'Why?'
"Well...You did leave her at the Dojo"
"YOU said she left me"
" What? You Actually listened to me?"
"...Man , I hate you", that was the last thing he said as he saw Akane putting the bucket full of water on the floor getting a rag , wetting it starting to clean the dirty windows, humming a melody.
He walked over there grabbing a rag from the spot where she got hers from, deeping it in the the soapy water in the bucket, cleaning the window she was cleaning. Catching her attention."What are you doing?",she asked as she stoped humming, staring at him weird. "What does it look like im doing im helping ya clean the windows", he stated
"I can SEE that,BUT WHY?"
"I knocked out Kuno"
"...Oh", She ressumed to cleaning the windows. half way cleaning her half.
"So...why were you late?",He asked trying to make a conversation
"I was walking to school, like normal"
"But your over an hour late?"
"I was walking slowy,thinking"
"About what"
"WHY do YOU want to know"
"Like I want to know"
"Then why do did you ask?"
"...Whatever"
"HEY DON'T WHATEVER ME"
"DON'T RAISE YOUR VOICE,JEEEZ SO ANNOYING"
"ANNOYING!ARRGGGGHHH", She threw the water bucket at him, transforming him in to his girl form
"WHY YOU DO THAT FOR!"
"JUST SHUT-UP RANMA, I DID THAT FOR WHEN YOU ATE MY PANCAKES"
"THAT AGAIN, THERE JUST PANCAKES"
"SEE THIS IS WHY YOU HATE YOUR GUTS"
"I FEEL THE SAME WAY"
"WELL...GOOD!"
They continued to rant on and on of how much they hate each other akane hitting Ranma once more...Till this last praise and a few blows of this conversation and fighting ended it.
" WILL YOU JUST SHUT-UP YOU...YOU...",Ranma tried to find the right words...but come on now there aren't any right words when fighting.
"You what? Can't find any words huh, guess that wooping hurt ya huh",Akane started to laff evil though inside she felt like she was crying for hours.
"...ENOUGH I HAD ENOUGH, AKANE YOUR STRONG BUT NOT STRONG ENOUGH TO REALLY BEAT ME DOWN, SO ACTING LIKE YOUR THE STRONGEST, AT FIRST YEAH IT WAS FUN CHALLENGING YOU, BUT NOW IT'S ANNOYING, YOUR REALLY BOTHERING ME WITH THAT, YOU YOU...YOU STUPID UGLY GIRL THAT COULD NEVER GET A MAN!",Ranma yelled at her, Breathing hard from yelling too much.
'Oh no...no I didn't mean that ,really I didn't', He tried to say those words but he couldn't speak.
That phrase kept on repeatting in her head.
"...THATS IT! IF THAT'S HOW YOU FEEL THEN...FINE.", She yelled, Grabbing the bucket on the floor near her, Putting hot water in it then dumping it on him AGAIN transforming him back to his original form. Replacing the bucket with warm water, Placing the bucket in the middle of the hallway. She pointed to the right
"You clean that side, I'll clean this side",she said as she pointed to the left. All Ranma did was sadly nodded, starting to clean the windows, as she did the same.
' Man... What did I do.'
'I told you you better stop before you go to far, and what you do ? you went to far and i mean far, I mean Ugly,Can't even get a man ...you went to far now, you could of said uncute or tomboy. But no you had to say that ...'
'I KNOW that...why did I say that, she must hate me now all I wanted to get a conversation going, but I blew it.'
' I know this won't help her but i'll help you. Do you think she can never get a man? You really think shes
that un-pretty and un-cute?'
' Of course I don't think she'll never get a man. She's the most Prettiest, Cutest girl I ever met in my life.'
'So you really do like her huh?'
'...Yeah...'
' More than like her huh, you must love her huh?'
'...I...I...'
'ANSWER ME!'
'Yes, Okay I do I love her alot'
'THEN WHY DO YOU TEASE HER ALOT?'
'Because...'
'Because?'
'Well we always fight, so I thought if we fight alot she may start to like me.'
'Well...you see what happens when you go to far.I'm sorry but I can't help you with this, I may be your conscience, but you have to figure out whats the best thing to apologize to her...see ya'
'W-wait come back...'
(Silence)
Switching to Akanes head now
She already cleaned 4 large windows cleaning the last one, while Ranma only cleaned 3.
' I hate him , I hate him'
' girl, I know your mad and I mean really mad but maybe he-------'
' Leave Me Alone'
'But...I'm here to hel-'
'Just leave me alone'
'...okay...'
After she finished her row she sees ranma done 4 doing the last window. She walked over the the door where she got the supplies putting the rag away going past Ranma into the class room. All he did was sighed finishing the window, then putting the supplies he had away, going back to the classroom
"I see your done RANMA and MISS TENDO", The teacher said "now turn your books to page 21...
(ring ring ring ) THE END OF SCHOOL
Every body started to run out of the school like a crazy animals.Akane walking in the crowd very fast away from Ranma, as he tried to catch up to her. Just when he reached close to her. he grabed her arm "What Akane-----", as she turned around with no expession at all ...just blank, her eyes held no emotion. "I-"
"Ranma! Your future wife is here",Kodachi, kuno's twisted sister yelled using her ribbon to capture ranma giving him a hug
"Let go of me...Akane wait", "Too bad she left, But you have me",she said her eyes closed, opening to reveal a dummy Ranma in her arms.
"This isn't the end of us Ranma, Dear", she yelled..."Hmmmm hey, Now I have a dummy of Ranma"
As Ranma went around the area he was at. she was long gone. just as he let go of her, she walked away and once she was outside the gate to school she ran all the way to the Dojo.
Well well another chappie done...WOW i did two chap. in one day! it usally takes me 3 months to finish one... well review pretty please. And don't worry this is a Ranma and Akane fic.
I used to put that whole Kawaiikune baka-yarou but...Most of you guys hated it...sorry for that...and for a few friends out there who reviewed:
JEEEZZZ, I'm just a beginner, Of course it's gonna be a pretty bad fic. for someone like me, You guys now how bad I was in English so of course My GRAMMER is bad, Plus this computer isn't helping me. It's a freakin' word pad. So STOP saying "Well my computer has microsoft words" or "Well I got over 100 reviews", guess what I DON'T CARE. Next you girls( and you girls know who you are) send something like that again i'll send so many e-mails to you saying how much you stink , YOU KNOW I WILL,
Next school year prepare to see a ME. hehehehehehehehehehehehe.
Well sorry for all of you that doesn't know what the freak I'm talking about. Well please review !